Run: 2026-05-19-01KS0TTRA31H66NN8EEGNBBKJ8

Run Details

Duration:
30.0s
Cost:
$0.047694
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of the Raven’s Nest bled a greasy emerald glow through the rain-streaked front window, staining the dark wood of the bar where Rory sat. Outside, Soho was a smear of black asphalt and yellow headlight glare, muffled by the relentless November drizzle. Inside, the pub smelled of damp wool, stale porter, and the faint, sweet scent of lemon wax. Rory spun her lowball glass, watching the ice cube dissolve into the amber gin. She was twenty-five, but on nights like this, when the cold got into her joints, she felt older. Her shoulder-length black hair was damp at the tips, clinging to the collar of her waxed jacket. With her thumb, she traced the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a childhood relic from a broken greenhouse window in Cardiff, back when her world had been small, loud, and predictable. Behind the bar, Silas moved with his familiar, syncopated rhythm. The slight limp in his left leg, the souvenir of some forgotten Prague winter he never spoke about, gave his stride a heavy, rolling cadence. His grey-streaked auburn hair was combed back, his neat beard catching the low lamplight. As he reached for a clean glass, the silver signet ring on his right hand caught the light, gleaming like a dull coin. He didn’t speak—Silas rarely did unless the silence became heavy enough to require it—but his hazel eyes flicked to Rory, checking the temperature of her quiet. The bell above the door chimed, a brassy note that cut through the low murmur of the three patrons near the fireplace. Rory didn’t look up immediately. In London, survival meant choosing what to notice. Then a voice spoke, high and carrying the distinct, musical lilt of South Wales. "God, it’s like a tomb in here. Do you have a dry menu, or do I have to—" The voice cut off. Rory’s shoulders went rigid. She turned her head slowly. Standing by the coat rack, shaking a wet umbrella with frantic vigor, was Carys Rhys. Carys looked exactly as Carys was always meant to look: polished, expensive, and perfectly adapted to the dry, air-conditioned rooms of a mid-tier law firm. Her blonde bob was untouched by the drizzle, her camel-hair coat immaculate, and her small leather handbag tucked securely under her arm like a shield. Then Carys’s eyes adjusted to the dimness of the Nest, moving past the framed black-and-white photos of forgotten dockworkers and yellowed maps of Prussian borders, and landed on Rory. "Rory?" Carys’s voice dropped an octave, the theatrical annoyance vanishing, replaced by a sudden, jagged uncertainty. "Laila? Is that... my god, it is you." Rory didn’t stand. She kept her hands wrapped around her glass, her fingers cold against the condensation. "Hello, Carys." Carys took three hesitant steps forward, her heels clicking against the floorboards. She looked around the bar, her eyes lingering on the peeling leather booth, the dust-gathering bookshelf in the corner that hid Silas’s private quarters, and finally Silas himself, who had stopped polishing his glass. "I don’t believe it," Carys whispered, though she didn’t sound entirely pleased. It was the tone of someone who had found a missing earring under the sofa—provocative, unexpected, and slightly dirty. "What are you doing here? In Soho? Your mum said you’d gone to London, but she didn’t... she wouldn't give me an address. She said you wanted space." "I lives above the shop, more or less," Rory said, her voice even. Her Cardiff accent, once as pronounced as Carys’s, had flattened over the last three years, losing its bounce, replaced by the dry, guarded shorthand of someone who spent her days delivering takeaway containers for Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress and her nights listening to old spies tell lies. "Above... here?" Carys looked up at the water-stained ceiling tiles as if she could see the floorboards of Rory’s small flat through them. She pulled out the stool next to Rory, her coat rustling. "Can I sit?" "It’s a public house." Silas limped over, his movement fluid despite the bad knee. He placed a cardboard coaster in front of Carys with a hand that was perfectly steady. "What can I get you, miss?" "Oh. Just... a dry white? Whichever Chardonnay you have open." Carys didn’t look at him; she was staring at Rory’s profile. Silas glanced at Rory, a silent inquiry in his hazel eyes. Rory gave a single, microscopic nod. Silas retreated to the pour. "You look different," Carys said, her voice dropping into the conspiratorial register they used to share during lectures at Cardiff University, back when they were both pretending to care about tort law. "Your hair. You used to have those lovely curls, Rory. And you’re... you’ve lost weight." "I walk a lot now," Rory said. "Delivery work keeps you moving." "Delivery? But you were... Rory, you were one exam away from your degree. Your dad was going to get you into the chambers on Queen Street. Brendan was so proud of you." "Brendan was proud of the idea of me," Rory said. The mention of her father didn't hurt anymore; it was like touching an old tooth that had had the nerve extracted. "There’s a difference." Silas returned, setting down Carys’s wine. His silver signet ring tapped against the wood with a sharp *clack*. He lingered for a fraction of a second, his presence a quiet, granite wall between Rory and the rest of the room, before he drifted down to the other end of the bar to tend to a couple of tourists. Carys took a long sip of her wine, her manicured nails—painted a pale, professional pink—glinting in the green neon light. "I saw Evan last month," she said. The name fell between them like a heavy, cold stone. Rory’s hand didn't shake. She took a sip of her gin. "Did you?" "He’s back in Swansea now. Working for his uncle’s firm. He... he looks well, Rory. He’s in therapy. He told me to tell you, if I ever ran into you, that he’s really sorry. About how things ended. About the... the volatility." "Volatility," Rory repeated. She looked at her left wrist, where the long-healed crescent scar sat. That wasn't from Evan, but she had others that were, invisible beneath the heavy cotton of her jacket. "That's a very lawyerly word for it." "He was sick, Rory. He was under so much pressure from his parents, and then when you left so suddenly—just vanishing in the middle of the night—it nearly destroyed him." Carys’s voice had a soft, pleading edge now. She wanted the world to be neat. She wanted the story to have a redemptive arc where the boy got better and the girl forgave him and they all went back to having Sunday roasts in Penarth. "He just wanted closure." Rory looked directly at Carys then. Her bright blue eyes were entirely vacant of the frantic, eager-to-please warmth Carys remembered. The girl who had wept in the university library because she’d gotten a 2:2 on her contract law essay was gone. In her place was someone who looked like she spent her life watching doorways. "I don't owe him closure," Rory said. "And I don't owe you an explanation." Carys flinched. She looked down at her glass, turning it by the stem. "We were friends, Rory. Since we were seven. I helped you pack your room when you left Cardiff. I kept your secrets." "You told him where I went first," Rory said softly. The rain lashed harder against the glass, a sudden fury of water that made the green neon sign flicker. Carys’s face flushed red, the color blooming high on her cheekbones. "I was worried about you! You weren't answering your phone, you’d quit your course, you were acting crazy—" "I was running," Rory said. "There’s a difference." "And you ran here?" Carys’s voice rose, a sharp, ugly sound in the quiet bar. She waved her hand at the dark corners, the dusty maps, the smell of damp. "To this? You were the brightest of us, Rory. You could have been anything. Now you’re... you’re delivering food in the rain and drinking in a hole-in-the-wall in Soho like a ghost. Is this what you wanted?" Rory looked at the reflection of the green light in Carys’s eyes. She saw the pity there, but beneath the pity, she saw the terror. Carys was terrified of the dark. She was terrified of the idea that someone could simply walk off the edge of the map they’d all been given, that the rules didn't actually hold anyone in place. "It’s quiet here," Rory said. "Nobody asks me to be anything other than what I am." Carys stared at her for a long moment, searchingly, looking for the girl who used to share her chips on the pier, the girl who had cried when her hamster died, the girl who had been safe. But the silence stretched between them, heavy and absolute, filled only by the low rumble of a delivery truck on the street outside and the steady thump of Silas’s limp as he wiped down the far end of the counter. Slowly, Carys stood up. She pulled her coat around herself, buttoning it with precise, furious movements. "I have to go," Carys said. "My dinner reservation is at eight." "Have the sea bass," Rory said, her voice dropping back into that cool, polite register. "The Italian place on Dean Street does it well." Carys opened her mouth to say something else—perhaps to apologize, perhaps to strike back—but the look in Rory’s blue eyes closed the door. Carys turned, her heels clicking a fast, retreating rhythm toward the exit. The brass bell chimed once, twice, and then the door clicked shut, sealing the cold air back outside. Rory sat still, her thumb tracing the crescent scar on her wrist. After a few minutes, Silas limped over. He didn't ask what had happened. He simply reached down, took Carys’s half-empty glass of wine, and poured it down the drain behind the bar. He took Rory’s lowball glass, added a single fresh cube of ice, and tipped a splash more gin over it. "On the house," Silas said, his voice a low, dry rumble. Rory looked up at him, her blue eyes reflecting the green neon, and for the first time that evening, the tight line of her shoulders relaxed. "Thanks, Silas," she said. She took a sip of the cold gin and listened to the rain.
created_at"2026-05-19T19:19:02.217Z" 5/19/2026, 7:19:02 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.442
leniency0.884
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.047
74.40% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1758
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"perfectly"
count2
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
5
adverb"suddenly"
count1
6
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"perfectly"
2"slightly"
3"really"
4"very"
5"suddenly"
6"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1758
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"predictable"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"gleaming"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"lilt"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"glinting"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"predictable"
2"familiar"
3"gleaming"
4"silence"
5"flicked"
6"lilt"
7"weight"
8"glinting"
9"warmth"
10"flicker"
11"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences94
matches
0"was terrified"
1"was terrified"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences94
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tend to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences117
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1748
ratio0.001
matches
0"clack"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions90
wordCount1344
uniqueNames22
maxNameDensity2.16
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
Rory29
Soho1
November1
Cardiff3
Silas11
Prague1
London1
South1
Wales1
Carys28
Rhys1
Prussian1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
University1
Evan1
Sunday1
Penarth1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Carys"
5"Prussian"
6"Yu-Fei"
7"Cheung"
8"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"Prague"
3"London"
4"South"
5"Wales"
6"University"
7"Penarth"
globalScore0.421
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like she spent her life watching d"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1748
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences117
matches
0"given, that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean32.98
std22.38
cv0.679
sampleLengths
063
181
298
335
414
518
68
720
850
929
1024
1119
1246
1359
1460
1537
164
1732
1821
1922
2047
2112
2232
2334
2458
2527
2610
2713
2842
2940
3079
3155
3214
3335
3410
3519
3629
378
3867
3961
4016
4177
4216
4312
4424
4553
4612
4732
4820
4911
86.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences94
matches
0"was combed"
1"was untouched"
2"was gone"
3"was terrified"
4"was terrified"
5"been given"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs215
matches
0"was staring"
1"was like touching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences117
ratio0.06
matches
0"With her thumb, she traced the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a childhood relic from a broken greenhouse window in Cardiff, back when her world had been small, loud, and predictable."
1"He didn’t speak—Silas rarely did unless the silence became heavy enough to require it—but his hazel eyes flicked to Rory, checking the temperature of her quiet."
2"It was the tone of someone who had found a missing earring under the sofa—provocative, unexpected, and slightly dirty."
3"\"Oh. Just... a dry white? Whichever Chardonnay you have open.\" Carys didn’t look at him; she was staring at Rory’s profile."
4"The mention of her father didn't hurt anymore; it was like touching an old tooth that had had the nerve extracted."
5"Carys took a long sip of her wine, her manicured nails—painted a pale, professional pink—glinting in the green neon light."
6"Carys opened her mouth to say something else—perhaps to apologize, perhaps to strike back—but the look in Rory’s blue eyes closed the door."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1369
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
1"dry, air-conditioned rooms"
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.03214024835646457
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.014609203798392988
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences117
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences117
mean14.94
std10.17
cv0.68
sampleLengths
028
118
217
314
418
517
632
710
825
914
1023
1126
1222
135
148
1514
1618
174
184
195
2015
2125
2225
2329
2416
258
263
2714
282
2912
3034
3112
3219
3328
3413
3547
3623
3711
383
394
4010
4116
426
4321
4411
456
465
4732
4815
497
56.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.37606837606837606
totalSentences117
uniqueOpeners44
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences84
matches
0"Then a voice spoke, high"
1"Then Carys’s eyes adjusted to"
2"Slowly, Carys stood up."
ratio0.036
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences84
matches
0"She was twenty-five, but on"
1"Her shoulder-length black hair was"
2"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
3"He didn’t speak—Silas rarely did"
4"She turned her head slowly."
5"Her blonde bob was untouched"
6"She kept her hands wrapped"
7"She looked around the bar,"
8"It was the tone of"
9"Her Cardiff accent, once as"
10"She pulled out the stool"
11"He placed a cardboard coaster"
12"His silver signet ring tapped"
13"He lingered for a fraction"
14"She took a sip of"
15"She looked at her left"
16"She wanted the world to"
17"She wanted the story to"
18"Her bright blue eyes were"
19"She looked down at her"
ratio0.333
37.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences84
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Rory spun her lowball glass,"
2"She was twenty-five, but on"
3"Her shoulder-length black hair was"
4"The slight limp in his"
5"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
6"He didn’t speak—Silas rarely did"
7"The bell above the door"
8"Rory didn’t look up immediately."
9"The voice cut off."
10"Rory’s shoulders went rigid."
11"She turned her head slowly."
12"Carys looked exactly as Carys"
13"Her blonde bob was untouched"
14"Carys’s voice dropped an octave,"
15"Rory didn’t stand."
16"She kept her hands wrapped"
17"Carys took three hesitant steps"
18"She looked around the bar,"
19"Carys whispered, though she didn’t"
ratio0.845
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"She looked around the bar, her eyes lingering on the peeling leather booth, the dust-gathering bookshelf in the corner that hid Silas’s private quarters, and fi…"
1"It was the tone of someone who had found a missing earring under the sofa—provocative, unexpected, and slightly dirty."
2"Her Cardiff accent, once as pronounced as Carys’s, had flattened over the last three years, losing its bounce, replaced by the dry, guarded shorthand of someone…"
3"He placed a cardboard coaster in front of Carys with a hand that was perfectly steady."
4"That wasn't from Evan, but she had others that were, invisible beneath the heavy cotton of her jacket."
5"In her place was someone who looked like she spent her life watching doorways."
6"The rain lashed harder against the glass, a sudden fury of water that made the green neon sign flicker."
7"Carys stared at her for a long moment, searchingly, looking for the girl who used to share her chips on the pier, the girl who had cried when her hamster died, …"
46.05% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Carys’s voice dropped, the theatrical annoyance vanishing, replaced by a sudden, jagged uncertainty"
1"Rory said, her voice dropping back into that cool, polite register"
2"Silas said, his voice a low, dry rumble"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Carys whispered (whisper)"
1"Rory repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.349
leniency0.698
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.093
80.4324%