Run: 2026-05-19-01KS0TZ859S8BE4BWCD2PZ8R0E

Run Details

Duration:
26.8s
Cost:
$0.043878
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Soho rain came down in greasy sheets, smudging the headlights of the black cabs on Wardour Street into long, amber blisters. Inside the Raven’s Nest, the air smelled of floor wax, stale stout, and the faint, sweet trace of nutmeg from the winter cocktail Silas had been experimenting with. A green neon sign hung in the front window, casting a swampy, emerald glow across the dark wood booths and the framed black-and-white photographs of forgotten jazz musicians lining the walls. Rory sat at the far corner of the bar, her fingers curled around a glass of house gin and tonic. She had finished her delivery shift for the Golden Empress two hours ago, but the smell of ginger and five-spice still seemed to cling to her split-ends. She pushed her straight, shoulder-length black hair behind her ears and looked at her reflection in the mirrored backbar. Her bright blue eyes looked back at her, ringed with the dark violet bruises of chronic exhaustion. Silas moved behind the bar with a slow, deliberate rhythm. His left leg hitched slightly, a heavy beat in his step that Rory had grown to use as a clock during her nights here. He polished a highball glass with an old linen tea towel, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the low light. "You should eat something, kid," Silas said, his voice a low, gravelly baritone that carried the effortless gravity of his former life. His grey-streaked auburn beard was trimmed tight, mirroring the sharp angles of his face. "Yu-Fei left a container of those pork buns in the back fridge. I can warm them up." "I'm fine, Silas. Just winding down," Rory said. She unbuttoned the cuffs of her jacket, exposing her left wrist. Unconsciously, her thumb traced the small, crescent-shaped scar there—a relic of an old fall from a Welsh oak tree when she was eight. It was a grounding habit, a way to remind herself she was solid. The heavy oak door of the pub swung open, bringing with it a gust of cold, wet London wind and the distant hiss of traffic. Silas looked up, his hazel eyes narrowing slightly with the automatic appraisal of a man who used to read rooms for a living. Rory didn't turn around until she heard the sound of heels—sharp, expensive leather clicking against the hardwood floor. "Jesus, it’s like a tomb in here," a woman’s voice said, rich and clear, with the distinct, polished cadence of South Wales private schools. "Do you have a dry white? Something that doesn’t taste like petrol?" Rory froze. The glass of gin felt heavy in her hand. She turned slowly on her stool. The woman standing at the bar was peeling off a camel-hair coat, revealing a tailored charcoal blazer and a silk blouse the color of fresh cream. Her hair was a glossy, perfect bob, and she carried a designer handbag that probably cost more than Rory made in three months of carrying takeout containers through the London drizzle. It was Megan Davies. Three years ago, they had shared a cramped terrace house on Salisbury Road in Cardiff, drinking cheap cider and arguing about tort reform until the sun came up. Megan turned, shaking her umbrella out near the door, and then her eyes landed on Rory. The silence that fell between them stretched, elastic and fragile. Silas stopped polishing his glass, his hand resting on the counter. "Rory?" Megan’s voice dropped an octave, losing its sharp, professional edge. "Rory Carter?" "Hi, Megs," Rory said. Her voice felt thin, like dry paper. Megan took three steps forward, her hand fluttering to her throat. For a second, Rory thought she was going to reach out, to throw her arms around her the way they used to when they met up after term breaks. Instead, Megan stopped a foot away, her eyes scanning Rory’s face, her faded denim jacket, the cheap canvas sneakers damp from the rain. "My god," Megan whispered. "It really is you. Eva said you were in London, but she wouldn’t tell me where. She said you wanted space." "I did. I do," Rory said. She offered a small, tight smile that didn't reach her eyes. "It’s good to see you, Megs." Megan sat down on the stool next to her, her expensive coat draped over her lap like a shield. Silas stepped forward, his expression neutral, his professional mask firmly in place. "What can I get you, miss?" "A glass of the Pinot Grigio, please," Megan said, barely looking at him. Her focus was entirely locked on Rory. "Rory, where have you been? Your dad... Brendan is beside himself. He came into the chambers last month. He looks ten years older. He said you just stopped answering his calls after you left Cardiff." Rory swallowed past a lump of dry heat in her throat. Her father’s name, spoken in Megan’s pristine accent, felt like a hand tightening around her windpipe. "I’ve been busy, Megs. Just... building a life." "A life?" Megan looked around the dimly lit bar. She looked at the peeling varnish on the counter, the old maps of London on the walls, and then back to Rory’s calloused fingers. "You dropped out of the Pre-Law program. You were top of our year. Mr. Gwilliam said you had the best analytical mind he’d seen in a decade. And you’re... what are you doing?" Silas set the wine glass down in front of Megan. The movement was quiet, but there was a distinct weight to it. His hazel eyes lingered on Megan for a fraction of a second too long—a silent warning that only Rory, who knew him, could read. "Thank you," Megan murmured to Silas, though her tone was dismissive. She turned back to Rory, her brow furrowed with a mix of genuine concern and the subtle, unconscious condescension of the successfully established. "Rory, you're twenty-five. You can't just hide away in Soho forever. Is it... is it because of Evan?" The name was like a stone dropped into a still pool. The shadows in the corners of the Raven’s Nest seemed to draw closer. Rory’s grip on her glass tightened until her knuckles turned white. "I don't talk about Evan." "He was a bastard, Rory. We all knew it. But you can't let him ruin your career. You had a future." Megan reached out, her hand hovering over Rory’s arm before dropping back to her own glass. "I’m a junior associate now at Bishop & Sterling. I’m doing intellectual property. It’s hard work, eighty hours a week sometimes, but... I’m buying a flat in Battersea. I have a life. We were supposed to do this together. Remember? The Cardiff dynamic duo?" "I remember," Rory said softly. She did. She remembered the girl she had been—the girl who wore ironed shirts, who spoke with a sharp, confident Welsh lilt, who believed that the law was a series of neat, solvable puzzles. That girl had died in a flat off City Road, bruised and terrified, before she packed a single duffel bag and took the midnight coach to Victoria Station. "You look different," Megan said, studying Rory’s face. "Your face is... harder. You used to laugh at everything, Rory. Even when we were failing land law." "I think I just grew up," Rory said. "This isn't growing up. This is hiding." Megan took a slow sip of her wine, her manicured nails tapping against the glass. "You work here?" "I live upstairs," Rory said, gesturing toward the ceiling. "I deliver food by day. It’s quiet. Nobody asks me for legal briefs, and nobody expects me to be anyone’s golden child." Megan looked away, her eyes tracing the green neon reflection on the dark wood of the bar. There was a profound sadness in her expression, but under it lay the vast, unbridgeable gulf of their divergent lives. Megan had stayed on the path. She had endured the long nights, the boring partners, the late-stage capitalism grind, and she had won the prize. She couldn't understand why someone would jump off the train willingly. She didn't know about the bruises. She didn't know about the nights Rory had spent locked in her own bathroom, listening to Evan kick the door until the frame splintered. "Your mother misses you," Megan said quietly. "Jennifer still teaches at the primary school. She looks for you in every girl with black hair who walks past her gate." Rory’s eyes stung, but she forced the tears back, her gaze dropping to the crescent scar on her wrist. "Tell her I'm safe, Megs. If you see her. Just tell her I'm safe." "Why don't you tell her yourself?" "Because if I call her, he’ll find out where I am," Rory said. The words were quiet, but they carried the cold, hard weight of a absolute truth. "And I can’t go back to that." Megan opened her mouth to argue, to offer the easy, middle-class platitudes of restraining orders and police intervention, but she caught the look in Rory’s bright blue eyes and stopped. The sheer, flinty exhaustion in Rory's face silenced her. "I have to go," Megan said, looking at her gold watch. "I have a dinner meeting in Mayfair. I only popped in here because my phone died and I needed to dry off." She stood up, putting her camel coat back on, smoothing the wool with practiced hands. She looked down at Rory, her expression a mix of pity and a strange, lingering reverence for the girl Rory used to be. "It was good to see you, Rory. Truly. I hope... I hope you find whatever it is you're looking for." "Thanks, Megs. Good luck with Battersea." Megan turned and walked out, her heels clicking against the timber floor, the door closing behind her with a soft, heavy thud that cut off the sound of the Soho rain. Rory sat still for a long time, watching the green neon light pulse against the empty wine glass Megan had left behind. Silas reached over, took the empty glass, and replaced Rory’s nearly empty gin with a fresh one, the ice clinking softly. He didn't say anything. He didn't ask about Evan, or Brendan, or Cardiff. He just leaned his good leg against the backbar, took a sip of his own black coffee, and stared out the window with her into the wet, dark night.
created_at"2026-05-19T19:21:29.52Z" 5/19/2026, 7:21:29 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
53.66% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Megan looked around [around]"
1"Rory said softly [softly]"
2"Megan said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.463
leniency0.927
rawRatio0.158
effectiveRatio0.146
79.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1740
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count2
4
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"really"
3"softly"
4"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1740
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"effortless"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"firmly"
count1
7
word"pristine"
count1
8
word"calloused fingers"
count1
9
word"weight"
count2
10
word"furrowed"
count1
11
word"lilt"
count1
12
word"tracing"
count1
13
word"profound"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"effortless"
1"traced"
2"silk"
3"perfect"
4"silence"
5"scanning"
6"firmly"
7"pristine"
8"calloused fingers"
9"weight"
10"furrowed"
11"lilt"
12"tracing"
13"profound"
14"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1736
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions92
wordCount1290
uniqueNames23
maxNameDensity2.4
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Megan"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Wardour1
Street1
Raven2
Nest2
Silas9
Golden1
Empress1
Rory31
Welsh2
London3
South1
Wales1
Megan23
Davies1
Salisbury1
Road2
Cardiff2
City1
Victoria1
Station1
Evan2
Brendan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Megan"
5"Davies"
6"Evan"
7"Brendan"
places
0"Soho"
1"Wardour"
2"Street"
3"Welsh"
4"London"
5"South"
6"Wales"
7"Salisbury"
8"Road"
9"Cardiff"
10"City"
11"Victoria"
globalScore0.298
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a hand tightening around her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1736
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"believed that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean37.74
std22.96
cv0.608
sampleLengths
081
183
257
353
455
548
618
736
811
963
1032
1116
1221
1313
1411
1563
1625
1723
1837
1955
2035
2166
2246
2352
2424
2516
2681
275
2862
2926
308
3125
3231
33103
3429
3533
366
3735
3839
3933
4038
4120
426
4331
4422
4563
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs203
matches
0"was peeling"
37.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences108
ratio0.037
matches
0"Unconsciously, her thumb traced the small, crescent-shaped scar there—a relic of an old fall from a Welsh oak tree when she was eight."
1"Rory didn't turn around until she heard the sound of heels—sharp, expensive leather clicking against the hardwood floor."
2"His hazel eyes lingered on Megan for a fraction of a second too long—a silent warning that only Rory, who knew him, could read."
3"She remembered the girl she had been—the girl who wore ironed shirts, who spoke with a sharp, confident Welsh lilt, who believed that the law was a series of neat, solvable puzzles."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1304
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.027607361963190184
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.01303680981595092
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean16.07
std9.01
cv0.56
sampleLengths
022
128
231
320
427
519
617
710
824
923
1022
1114
1217
138
1411
1523
1613
1725
1823
1918
2024
2112
222
239
246
2526
2631
274
2828
2916
3010
3111
3211
332
344
357
3611
3729
3823
394
4021
416
4211
436
4419
4512
466
4713
487
4935
39.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.3148148148148148
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners34
85.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences78
matches
0"Unconsciously, her thumb traced the"
1"Instead, Megan stopped a foot"
ratio0.026
76.41% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences78
matches
0"She had finished her delivery"
1"She pushed her straight, shoulder-length"
2"Her bright blue eyes looked"
3"His left leg hitched slightly,"
4"He polished a highball glass"
5"His grey-streaked auburn beard was"
6"She unbuttoned the cuffs of"
7"It was a grounding habit,"
8"She turned slowly on her"
9"Her hair was a glossy,"
10"It was Megan Davies."
11"Her voice felt thin, like"
12"She offered a small, tight"
13"Her focus was entirely locked"
14"Her father’s name, spoken in"
15"She looked at the peeling"
16"His hazel eyes lingered on"
17"She turned back to Rory,"
18"She remembered the girl she"
19"She had endured the long"
ratio0.359
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences78
matches
0"The Soho rain came down"
1"A green neon sign hung"
2"Rory sat at the far"
3"She had finished her delivery"
4"She pushed her straight, shoulder-length"
5"Her bright blue eyes looked"
6"Silas moved behind the bar"
7"His left leg hitched slightly,"
8"He polished a highball glass"
9"Silas said, his voice a"
10"His grey-streaked auburn beard was"
11"She unbuttoned the cuffs of"
12"It was a grounding habit,"
13"The heavy oak door of"
14"Silas looked up, his hazel"
15"Rory didn't turn around until"
16"a woman’s voice said, rich"
17"The glass of gin felt"
18"She turned slowly on her"
19"The woman standing at the"
ratio0.923
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Silas looked up, his hazel eyes narrowing slightly with the automatic appraisal of a man who used to read rooms for a living."
1"Silas stopped polishing his glass, his hand resting on the counter."
2"She remembered the girl she had been—the girl who wore ironed shirts, who spoke with a sharp, confident Welsh lilt, who believed that the law was a series of ne…"
98.68% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Megan murmured, though her tone was dismissive"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Megan whispered (whisper)"
1"Megan murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.366
leniency0.732
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.098
81.3780%