Run: 2026-05-20-01KS25R93B28XJ2W14RS9PAA34

Run Details

Duration:
16.4s
Cost:
$0.024033
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The ice in Rory’s glass had melted down to a single, rounded sliver that bobbed in a shallow pool of tepid gin and tonic. She traced a slow circle through the condensation on the copper-topped bar, her thumb catching slightly on the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. Behind the bar, Silas Blackwood was wiping down the beer taps with the slow, rhythmic focus of a man who had long since learned how to inhabit a room without intruding on it. His silver signet ring caught the low amber light of the pendant lamps, clicking softly against the brass metalwork now and then. Every few minutes, his hazel eyes would drift toward the street door, assessing the damp Soho night beyond the green neon sign humming over the entryway, before settling back into his quiet routine. The limp in his left leg was barely noticeable tonight, just a slight, heavy hitch when he turned from the taps to the glass racks. The bell above the heavy oak door gave a single, brassy chime. Rory didn’t look up at first. London was full of people seeking shelter from the sudden October drizzle, shook-out umbrellas, and the smell of wet wool. But the footsteps that crossed the floorboard pattern of the Raven’s Nest didn’t carry the rushed, apologetic stride of a tourist. They were heavy, measured, and stopped precisely three feet from her stool. "Rory?" The voice was thicker than she remembered, stripped of the manic, rising cadence that used to accompany her name, but the cadence was unmistakable. She turned her head. Evan stood in the soft glow of the bar's sconces, water dripping from the collar of a dark, expensive-looking cashmere coat. The boyish curve of his jawline had been buried under a hard, square beard, and the restless, darting energy that used to define him had settled into a heavy stillness. He looked larger, wealthier, and deeply tired. "Evan," she said. The word felt dry, like a stone she had kept in her pocket for years and finally laid on the table. He looked at her with an intensity that made her want to pull her sleeves down over her hands. "I thought it was you. From the street, through the glass. You still sit the same way. Shoulder slightly dropped." He gestured toward her left side, then caught himself and let his hand fall into his pocket. "It's been what? Four years?" "Four and a half," Rory said. Her voice was cool, level—the voice she had spent years cultivating in the drafty lecture halls at Cardiff and later perfected in the flat above this very room. Quiet, unshakable, and dead-ended. Silas didn’t look up from the glass he was drying with a lint-free cloth, but his movements slowed. The dry *shrr-shrr* of the towel against glass became a metronome for the sudden silence between the two stools. "Can I sit?" Evan asked, his hand gesturing toward the empty leather-topped stool beside her. "It’s a public house, Evan. You don’t need my permission to buy a drink." He took the stool anyway, his coat whispering against the dark wood. He didn't slouch the way he used to when they were twenty-one, cramming for exams in her student flat while the rain beat against the Welsh slate roofs. He sat straight-backed, his hands folded on the bar. His nails were clean, professionally manicured. There was no trace of the black ink stains from his printmaking days, nor the raw, red cuticles he used to bite when the anxiety took him. Silas limped over, placing a coaster in front of the newcomer with a flick of his wrist. "Draft, spirit, or something from the cellar?" the old man asked, his voice low and gravelly. "A single malt. Whatever you have that's peaty," Evan said, not looking at Silas. His eyes remained fixed on the side of Rory’s face, tracing the straight line of her shoulder-length black hair. "And whatever she’s having." "Just water for me, Silas," Rory said quietly, meeting the barkeep's gaze. A silent volume of understanding passed between them in half a second. Silas gave a single, nearly imperceptible nod, poured a glass of chilled tap water, set down a fresh measure of Islay whiskey for Evan, and retreated to the far end of the bar near the old bookshelf, disappearing into the shadows of the map-lined walls. Evan picked up his glass, swirled it once, and set it down without drinking. "You're living in London now then. Eva said you'd left Cardiff, but she wouldn't tell me where." "Eva’s a good friend," Rory said. She took a sip of the water. It was cold enough to ache against her teeth. "And yes. I’ve been here three years." "You look different," he said. There was a strange weight to his tone, an accusation muffled by regret. "Your hair is shorter. You don't wear those silver rings anymore." "I don't do a lot of things I used to do, Evan." A shadow crossed his face, quick as a bird over a pond, then disappeared back into his practiced composure. "I bought a partnership in a design firm in Bristol last year," he said, speaking to his reflection in the dark amber whiskey. "We do high-end restorations. Old townhomes, listed buildings. I spend my days telling people how to keep the facade while completely hollowing out the interior so it doesn't collapse under its own weight." He let out a short, dry laugh that didn't reach his eyes. "Irony isn't lost on me." "I'm glad you found something stable," she said, and meant it, though the gladness was a cold, distant thing, like seeing a weather report for a city she no longer lived in. "And you?" He turned his head to look at her fully. "Are you practicing? Your dad always said you’d make a formidable barrister if you just stopped fighting the curriculum." "No," Rory said. "I dropped the course a couple of terms after... after I left. I work for a restaurant in Chinatown. Deliveries, mostly. And I help Silas with the inventory here." Evan’s brow furrowed, a genuine piece of the old him breaking through the polished veneer. "Deliveries? Rory, you had the highest analytical marks in our year. You could read a hundred-page brief in an hour and find the one contradiction that ruined the prosecution's entire argument. You’re... you’re carrying takeaway boxes?" "It’s quiet," she said, her voice dropping a register. "No one expects anything from me other than to be on time and get the change right. I like the rain. I like the streets when they're empty." He stared at her, his throat moving as he swallowed. He reached out, his hand stopping an inch from her scarred wrist on the counter, before he pulled it back and gripped his glass instead. "Is that what I did to you?" he whispered. "Made you want to be invisible?" The question hung in the air, heavy and damp, competing with the smell of the old floor wax and the faint, citrus scent of Silas' cleaning spray. Rory looked at his hand, then up at his face. The anger that used to live in her chest—the hot, choking thing that had kept her awake in the damp Cardiff terrace while he slept off his rages—had gone cold a long time ago. In its place was only a vast, gray distance. "You didn't do this to me, Evan," she said, her voice steady and clear. "You just made me realize that I was spending all my energy trying to survive a life I hadn't even chosen for myself. When I left you, I left all of it. The law degree, the expectations, the version of me that thought if I just worked hard enough, I could make something rotten taste sweet." Evan took a long drink of the whiskey, his eyes closing as the spirit burned down. When he opened them, they looked glassy in the low light of the Nest. "I went to therapy," he said, the words tumbling out in a hurried, embarrassed rush. "After the police came that night. After you went to your sister's. I sat in a white room in suburban Newport for eighteen months and talked about my father until I wanted to scream. I wanted to write to you. To apologize. I wrote twenty letters and burned every one of them because... because I knew you’d think it was just another way of trying to pull you back in." "It would have been," Rory said. "Yeah." He set his empty glass down with a dull *thud*. "But I wanted you to know that I'm not that person anymore. I don't drink like that. I don't lose my temper. I have a life. I have a dog, Rory. A retriever. He sleeps at the foot of my bed and he trusts me." His voice cracked slightly on the word *trusts*, a tiny fracture in the expensive facade. "I spent four years wanting to tell you that I cured the sickness. That I fixed the house." Rory looked at him, really looked at him—the expensive coat, the neat beard, the quiet hands. He had done the work. He had built a life out of the wreckage of his youth, and he had come out of it looking like a man who belonged in a high-street catalog. But as she looked at him, she felt nothing but the profound, aching weight of the time that had passed between that rainy night in Cardiff and this rainy night in London. "I'm glad you’re better, Evan," she said softly. "Truly. But the thing about rebuilding a house is that the people who lived in the ruins don't always want to move back in. Even if the roof doesn't leak anymore." He looked down at his empty glass, his shoulders rising and falling with a long, slow breath. "You aren't going to forgive me, are you?" "I forgave you a long time ago," Rory said, sliding her stool back and standing up. Her straight black hair fell forward, framing a face that was entirely calm, entirely her own. "But forgiveness doesn't mean I have to stay for another drink." She reached into her coat pocket, pulled out a five-pound note, and laid it on the copper bar next to her untouched water. "Silas," she called out into the dim corners of the room. The old agent stepped out from the shadow of the bookshelf, a fresh towel in his hand. "Going up, Rory?" "Yes. Early shift at the Golden Empress tomorrow." She gave him a small, genuine smile. "Goodnight." "Goodnight, girl," Silas said, his eyes shifting briefly to Evan, then back to her with a protective, silent vigilance. "See you for the books on Sunday." Rory turned back to Evan. He was sitting very still, looking at the five-pound note on the bar as if it were a document he couldn't quite decipher. "Goodbye, Evan," she said. He didn't look up, but his chin rose in a brief, tight nod. "Goodbye, Rory." She walked away from the bar, her boots clicking softly against the old timber floorboards. When she opened the door, the cool, rain-washed air of Soho hit her face, smelling of petrol, wet asphalt, and the infinite, chaotic freedom of the dark city. She didn't look back through the glass to see if he was watching. She just pulled her collar up against the damp and started walking toward the stairs.
created_at"2026-05-20T07:49:10.005Z" 5/20/2026, 7:49:10 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
92.86% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags28
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Rory said quietly [quietly]"
1"His voice cracked slightly [slightly]"
2"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.549
leniency1
rawRatio0.107
effectiveRatio0.107
68.78% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1922
totalAiIsmAdverbs12
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"softly"
count3
2
adverb"precisely"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count2
4
adverb"completely"
count1
5
adverb"really"
count1
6
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"precisely"
3"very"
4"completely"
5"really"
6"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.38% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1922
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"intensity"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count1
7
word"chilled"
count1
8
word"weight"
count3
9
word"facade"
count2
10
word"furrowed"
count1
11
word"profound"
count1
12
word"chaotic"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"rhythmic"
2"footsteps"
3"measured"
4"intensity"
5"silence"
6"tracing"
7"chilled"
8"weight"
9"facade"
10"furrowed"
11"profound"
12"chaotic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences87
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen70
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1918
ratio0.002
matches
0"shrr-shrr"
1"thud"
2"trusts"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1310
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.92
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory12
Silas6
Blackwood1
Soho2
October1
Raven1
Nest2
Cardiff3
Welsh1
Evan9
Islay1
London2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silas"
2"Blackwood"
3"Raven"
4"Nest"
5"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite decipher"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1918
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean39.96
std27.63
cv0.691
sampleLengths
049
1113
212
359
41
524
64
758
824
961
1038
1137
1215
1314
1482
1533
1637
1769
1831
1929
2029
2112
2292
2332
2430
2532
2651
2737
2850
2927
3053
3170
32115
336
3489
3582
3639
3725
3843
3923
4011
4120
4216
4326
4428
454
4615
4771
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"been buried"
66.67% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs200
matches
0"was wiping"
1"was drying"
2"was sitting"
3"was watching"
65.64% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences111
ratio0.027
matches
0"Her voice was cool, level—the voice she had spent years cultivating in the drafty lecture halls at Cardiff and later perfected in the flat above this very room."
1"The anger that used to live in her chest—the hot, choking thing that had kept her awake in the damp Cardiff terrace while he slept off his rages—had gone cold a long time ago."
2"Rory looked at him, really looked at him—the expensive coat, the neat beard, the quiet hands."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1133
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
1"empty leather-topped stool"
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.03177405119152692
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.01059135039717564
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean17.28
std12.18
cv0.705
sampleLengths
024
125
233
322
433
525
612
76
820
921
1012
111
1224
134
1421
1530
167
173
1821
1919
2037
215
226
2328
244
2518
2619
2715
2814
2912
3028
319
326
3327
3417
3516
3614
3719
384
3912
4012
4145
4214
4317
446
457
469
477
485
4913
57.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.38738738738738737
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
22.53% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences79
matches
0"She traced a slow circle"
1"His silver signet ring caught"
2"They were heavy, measured, and"
3"She turned her head."
4"He looked larger, wealthier, and"
5"He looked at her with"
6"He gestured toward her left"
7"Her voice was cool, level—the"
8"He took the stool anyway,"
9"He didn't slouch the way"
10"He sat straight-backed, his hands"
11"His nails were clean, professionally"
12"His eyes remained fixed on"
13"She took a sip of"
14"It was cold enough to"
15"he said, speaking to his"
16"He let out a short,"
17"she said, and meant it,"
18"He turned his head to"
19"she said, her voice dropping"
ratio0.494
16.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences79
matches
0"The ice in Rory’s glass"
1"She traced a slow circle"
2"His silver signet ring caught"
3"Every few minutes, his hazel"
4"The limp in his left"
5"The bell above the heavy"
6"Rory didn’t look up at"
7"London was full of people"
8"They were heavy, measured, and"
9"The voice was thicker than"
10"She turned her head."
11"Evan stood in the soft"
12"The boyish curve of his"
13"He looked larger, wealthier, and"
14"The word felt dry, like"
15"He looked at her with"
16"He gestured toward her left"
17"Her voice was cool, level—the"
18"Silas didn’t look up from"
19"The dry *shrr-shrr* of the"
ratio0.886
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"The ice in Rory’s glass had melted down to a single, rounded sliver that bobbed in a shallow pool of tepid gin and tonic."
1"Behind the bar, Silas Blackwood was wiping down the beer taps with the slow, rhythmic focus of a man who had long since learned how to inhabit a room without in…"
2"But the footsteps that crossed the floorboard pattern of the Raven’s Nest didn’t carry the rushed, apologetic stride of a tourist."
3"The voice was thicker than she remembered, stripped of the manic, rising cadence that used to accompany her name, but the cadence was unmistakable."
4"The boyish curve of his jawline had been buried under a hard, square beard, and the restless, darting energy that used to define him had settled into a heavy st…"
5"He looked at her with an intensity that made her want to pull her sleeves down over her hands."
6"The anger that used to live in her chest—the hot, choking thing that had kept her awake in the damp Cardiff terrace while he slept off his rages—had gone cold a…"
7"He had built a life out of the wreckage of his youth, and he had come out of it looking like a man who belonged in a high-street catalog."
8"But as she looked at him, she felt nothing but the profound, aching weight of the time that had passed between that rainy night in Cardiff and this rainy night …"
9"He looked down at his empty glass, his shoulders rising and falling with a long, slow breath."
10"Her straight black hair fell forward, framing a face that was entirely calm, entirely her own."
11"He was sitting very still, looking at the five-pound note on the bar as if it were a document he couldn't quite decipher."
35.71% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags28
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"the old man asked, his voice low and gravelly"
1"Evan said, not looking at Silas"
2"she said, her voice dropping a register"
3"she said, her voice steady and clear"
4"he said, the words tumbling out in a hurried, embarrassed rush"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags20
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.392
leniency0.784
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.039
75.7628%