Run: 2026-05-20-01KS25TV8DG5689AZ02TKTFNEZ

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Duration:
14.4s
Cost:
$0.022260
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest cast a sickly, emerald wash over the damp Soho pavement, bleeding into the puddles left behind by the evening’s drizzle. Inside, the bar was a sanctuary of amber light, smelling of stale stout, floor wax, and the faint, sweet ghost of pipe tobacco. Black-and-white photographs of forgotten jazz musicians and yellowed maps of empire-era London lined the wood-paneled walls. Aurora Carter sat at the far end of the mahogany bar, her thumb tracing the rim of her half-empty cider glass. Her other hand rested on her thigh, the sleeve of her oversized jumper pulled down just far enough to hide the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. She was twenty-five now, but tonight, tucked into the dark corner of Silas Blackwood’s tavern, she felt a century older. Behind the bar, Silas moved with his characteristic quiet authority. His grey-streaked auburn hair caught the low hanging lights, and his neatly trimmed beard did little to soften the sharp, analytical look in his hazel eyes. He limped slightly on his left leg as he reached for a clean pint glass, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the light with a dull metallic flash. He didn't speak to her—he didn't need to—but his presence was a steady anchor in a city that felt increasingly hostile. The bell above the heavy oak door chimed, admitting a draft of cold London air and a spatter of rain. Rory kept her eyes on her glass, a habit born of months spent trying to vanish into the background of a world that had once felt so loud. "Rory?" The voice was a ghost, dragging itself out of a Cardiff classroom she had tried very hard to forget. Rory stiffened. She turned slowly on her stool. Standing a few feet away, shaking a wet umbrella onto the floorboards, was a face from another life. It was Liam. He had the same boyish parting in his brown hair, the same slight slouch in his shoulders, but the leather satchel slung across his chest looked expensive, and the wool coat he wore was tailored, a far cry from the frayed denim jackets he’d favored when they were nineteen. "Liam," Rory said. Her voice sounded thin to her own ears, like paper left out in the rain. "Good God, it is you," Liam said, stepping forward. He stopped just short of reaching out to hug her, his hands hovering in mid-air before he dropped them to his sides. "I thought... someone said you went to London, but I didn't think I'd actually—well, look at you." He took the stool beside her, scanning her face with a familiarity that made her skin prickle. He was looking for the girl who used to debate him during Pre-Law seminars at Cardiff University, the girl who could argue a point until she was blue in the face and then laugh it off over cheap pints at the student union. He was looking for the Jennifer-and-Brendan’s-daughter Rory. "I look the same," Rory said, tucking her straight black hair behind her ear. "Just older." "We all are," Liam said, signaling to Silas. "A pint of the local pale, please, mate." Silas gave Liam a brief, measuring look—the kind of look he used to give dossiers in another life—before nodding and turning to the draft taps. "What are you doing in Soho?" Rory asked, desperate to shift the focus. "Consulting firm," Liam said, a note of careful modesty in his tone. "We’ve got an office off Regent Street. Just finished a late meeting. I was looking for somewhere quiet to dodge the rain before the train back to Clapham. And you? Last I heard, you’d... well, the rumor mill said you’d just vanished. Your dad wouldn't say anything when I saw him at the courthouse last autumn. Just that you were 'finding yourself' in the capital." The mention of her father sent a cold spike through Rory’s chest. Brendan Carter, the esteemed barrister, probably told people his daughter was doing a master's at LSE rather than admit she was delivering steamed buns for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress by day and living in a tiny flat directly above Silas' bar by night. "I'm working," Rory said simply. "Getting by." Silas set Liam’s pint down with a soft *clunk*, his hazel eyes darting to Rory for a fraction of a second to check if she needed an exit. She gave him a microscopic shake of her head. Silas nodded, took his rag, and shuffled further down the bar, his limp pronounced tonight in the damp weather. Liam took a long sip of his beer and let out a sigh. "It’s been, what, four years? You didn't even come to the graduation ceremony, Rory. We had a table booked at the harbor. Your mum looked so lost." "I had to leave, Liam." "Because of Evan?" The name was a stone dropped into a still pond. The ripples of it made the air between them feel suddenly cramped. "It wasn't just him," Rory said, her bright blue eyes fixing on her reflection in the cider. "It was everything. The law, Cardiff, the expectations. I felt like I was suffocating." "You could have told me," Liam said. His voice had lost its professional polish, softening into the hurt tone of the boy who used to share his notes with her when her hands shook too much to write. "We were best friends, Rory. We lived three doors down from each other since we were seven. And then one Tuesday I wake up, and your flat is half-empty, and you're just... gone. No forwarding address. No texts." "I had to cut the ties," she whispered. "If I kept a thread attached to anyone back home, he would have found it. He would have pulled on it until I was dragged back." Liam looked down at his hands, tracing the grain of the mahogany bar. "He's in Bristol now, you know. Married some girl from Newport. He doesn't ask about you. No one does anymore. They just... stopped." The relief she expected to feel didn't come. Instead, there was only a hollow, echoing sadness. She had succeeded in erasing herself from her old life, but the cost was that she was indeed gone. To the people who had loved her, she was a closed chapter, a girl who used to be. "And you?" Rory asked, trying to find a foothold in the present. "Are you happy?" Liam smiled, but it didn't reach his eyes. "I’m buying a flat. I have a pension plan. I argue about municipal zoning laws five days a week. It’s what we planned, isn't it? Well, what I planned. You were always going to do something grander. I remember you in the library, night after night, reading those dusty books on international human rights, talking about changing the world." He looked at her hands, which were rougher now, the nails trimmed short, a faint scent of sesame oil and rain clinging to her heavy jacket. "I changed my mind," she said. "Clearly." Liam’s voice harbored a sudden, sharp edge of resentment. It was the anger of the one who had stayed behind, who had played by the rules and climbed the ladder, only to find the person he wanted to impress had abandoned the game entirely. "You had so much potential, Rory. Everyone said so. Your dad was so proud of you, even when you two clashed. It just seems like a waste." The word hung in the air, heavy and offensive. *Waste.* Rory felt a spark of her old fire, the quick-witted, sharp-tongued girl who could disassemble an opponent's argument in three moves. She looked up, her blue eyes flashing under the low lights of the Nest. "A waste of what, Liam? Your expectations? My father’s ego?" She leaned in, her voice low but laced with steel. "I survived. I got out. I woke up one day and realized I didn't want to spend my life defending people who wear nicer suits than the people they hurt. I live my life on my own terms now. I don't owe Cardiff my future." Liam stared at her, startled by the sudden intensity. He blinked, and for a second, she saw the nineteen-year-old boy who used to lose debates to her in the university tavern. "I didn't mean..." He trailed off, looking genuinely contrite. "I'm sorry. I just... I missed you, Rory. We all did. It felt like you died, and we weren't allowed to mourn." The anger evaporated as quickly as it had come, leaving Rory feeling incredibly tired. She looked at her wrist, then down at her cider. "I'm sorry too," she said softly. "For the silence. I didn't know how to be any other way." Inside the quiet sanctuary of the bar, the silence stretched between them, no longer hostile but filled with the weight of the years they had lost and could never reclaim. They were two different species now, shaped by different currents. Liam had stayed in the shallows where it was safe; Rory had been dragged out to sea and learned to swim in the dark. Liam finished his pint, his eyes lingering on the maps on the wall, perhaps looking for Cardiff, though the maps were far too old for that. He stood up, hoisting his satchel over his shoulder. "I should get to the station," he said. "The trains get spotty after ten." "Right," Rory said. "Safe travels." He hesitated, looking at her as if hoping for a phone number, a promise to get coffee, a crack in her armor. But Rory sat still, her shoulders straight, her face a mask of polite reserve. "It was good to see you, Rory. Truly." "You too, Liam." He turned and walked toward the door. Silas opened it for him, his silver ring catching the green light of the neon sign outside as he bid the young man goodnight. The door closed, and the chime rang out, a tiny, silver funeral knell for a friendship that had ended years ago. Silas limped back over to Rory, picking up Liam’s empty glass. He didn't ask any questions. He simply poured a fresh splash of cider into her glass, topped it off on the house, and gave her shoulder a brief, reassuring squeeze with his broad, lined hand before moving down to wipe the counter. Rory sat alone in the amber glow of the Nest, listening to the rain tap against the glass, and drank her cider in the quiet.
created_at"2026-05-20T07:50:34.001Z" 5/20/2026, 7:50:34 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Rory said simply [simply]"
1"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.463
leniency0.927
rawRatio0.105
effectiveRatio0.098
80.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1768
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"quickly"
count1
5
adverb"softly"
count1
6
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
2"slowly"
3"suddenly"
4"quickly"
5"softly"
6"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.89% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1768
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"sanctuary"
count2
1
word"tracing"
count2
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"echoing"
count1
4
word"potential"
count1
5
word"intensity"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"sanctuary"
1"tracing"
2"scanning"
3"echoing"
4"potential"
5"intensity"
6"silence"
7"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences81
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen66
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1763
ratio0.001
matches
0"clunk"
1"Waste."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount1273
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.41
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest3
Soho1
London2
Carter2
Silas8
Blackwood1
Cardiff3
Liam15
Pre-Law1
University1
Rory18
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Silas"
4"Blackwood"
5"Liam"
6"Rory"
7"Yu-Fei"
8"Cheung"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"University"
globalScore0.793
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if hoping for a phone number, a promise to get coffee, a crack in her armor"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.567
wordCount1763
matches
0"no longer hostile but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"was that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean35.98
std24.34
cv0.676
sampleLengths
067
169
288
348
41
519
678
718
848
967
1016
1116
1225
1313
1477
1555
167
1756
1840
195
203
2122
2231
2376
2434
2536
2653
2715
2867
2926
306
3172
3210
3335
3465
3531
3631
3724
3818
3964
4035
4114
425
4336
448
453
4652
4753
4825
96.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences81
matches
0"was tailored"
1"been dragged"
74.80% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs213
matches
0"was looking"
1"was looking"
2"was doing"
3"was delivering"
60.44% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences104
ratio0.029
matches
0"He didn't speak to her—he didn't need to—but his presence was a steady anchor in a city that felt increasingly hostile."
1"Silas gave Liam a brief, measuring look—the kind of look he used to give dossiers in another life—before nodding and turning to the draft taps."
2"Liam had stayed in the shallows where it was safe; Rory had been dragged out to sea and learned to swim in the dark."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount920
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.035869565217391305
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007608695652173913
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean16.95
std12.33
cv0.727
sampleLengths
028
123
216
321
428
520
610
726
831
921
1020
1128
121
1319
142
156
1618
173
1849
193
2015
219
2222
2317
2417
2543
267
2714
282
298
308
3125
3213
3312
3465
3512
3643
375
382
3928
409
4119
4213
4327
445
453
4610
4712
4817
4914
50.64% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3557692307692308
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners37
45.66% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"Instead, there was only a"
ratio0.014
55.62% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences73
matches
0"Her other hand rested on"
1"She was twenty-five now, but"
2"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
3"He limped slightly on his"
4"He didn't speak to her—he"
5"She turned slowly on her"
6"It was Liam."
7"He had the same boyish"
8"Her voice sounded thin to"
9"He stopped just short of"
10"He took the stool beside"
11"He was looking for the"
12"He was looking for the"
13"She gave him a microscopic"
14"His voice had lost its"
15"She had succeeded in erasing"
16"He looked at her hands,"
17"It was the anger of"
18"She looked up, her blue"
19"She leaned in, her voice"
ratio0.411
14.79% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences73
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Aurora Carter sat at the"
2"Her other hand rested on"
3"She was twenty-five now, but"
4"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
5"He limped slightly on his"
6"He didn't speak to her—he"
7"The bell above the heavy"
8"Rory kept her eyes on"
9"The voice was a ghost,"
10"She turned slowly on her"
11"It was Liam."
12"He had the same boyish"
13"Her voice sounded thin to"
14"Liam said, stepping forward"
15"He stopped just short of"
16"He took the stool beside"
17"He was looking for the"
18"He was looking for the"
19"Rory said, tucking her straight"
ratio0.89
68.49% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"To the people who had"
ratio0.014
26.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"He stopped just short of reaching out to hug her, his hands hovering in mid-air before he dropped them to his sides."
1"He took the stool beside her, scanning her face with a familiarity that made her skin prickle."
2"He was looking for the girl who used to debate him during Pre-Law seminars at Cardiff University, the girl who could argue a point until she was blue in the fac…"
3"His voice had lost its professional polish, softening into the hurt tone of the boy who used to share his notes with her when her hands shook too much to write."
4"He looked at her hands, which were rougher now, the nails trimmed short, a faint scent of sesame oil and rain clinging to her heavy jacket."
5"Rory felt a spark of her old fire, the quick-witted, sharp-tongued girl who could disassemble an opponent's argument in three moves."
6"He blinked, and for a second, she saw the nineteen-year-old boy who used to lose debates to her in the university tavern."
7"Liam finished his pint, his eyes lingering on the maps on the wall, perhaps looking for Cardiff, though the maps were far too old for that."
19.74% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Rory asked, desperate to shift the focus"
1"Liam said, a note of careful modesty in his tone"
2"Rory asked, trying to find a foothold in the present"
3"She leaned in, her voice low but laced with steel"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.366
leniency0.732
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.049
80.7596%