| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.60% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1443 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 34.16% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1443 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "gloom" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "comforting" | | 7 | "reminder" | | 8 | "silk" | | 9 | "sentinels" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "navigate" | | 12 | "searing" | | 13 | "weight" | | 14 | "shattered" | | 15 | "lurch" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 108 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 13 | | totalWords | 1438 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "tick" | | 1 | "Time moves differently here," | | 2 | "An hour inside could be days outside." | | 3 | "tick" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 1412 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.92 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 13 | | Park | 2 | | London | 4 | | Heartstone | 3 | | November | 2 | | Welsh | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Crimson | 1 | | Richmond | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "November" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "Golden" | | 4 | "Richmond" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 32.35% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a trickle of ice water agains" | | 1 | "felt like a small, trapped heart trying" | | 2 | "sounded like a fingernail tapping against" | | 3 | "as if listening to the frantic double-time of Rory’s heart" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.695 | | wordCount | 1438 | | matches | | 0 | "not of leaves, but of dry, papery skin sliding over grass" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 34.24 | | std | 20.43 | | cv | 0.597 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 52 | | 1 | 77 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 61 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 54 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 63 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 64 | | 16 | 58 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 64 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 34 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 81 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 49 | | 29 | 29 | | 30 | 53 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 43 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 48 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 35 | | 40 | 53 | | 41 | 25 |
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| 98.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "was gone" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 228 | | matches | | 0 | "was pulsing" | | 1 | "was spinning" | | 2 | "were stretching" | | 3 | "was physically reaching" | | 4 | "were shifting" | | 5 | "were crawling" | | 6 | "were circling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 108 | | ratio | 0.074 | | matches | | 0 | "The silver chain of the pendant felt like a trickle of ice water against the back of Rory’s neck, but the stone itself—the rough, thumbnail-sized crimson gem resting against her collarbone—was pulsing with a heavy, rhythmic heat." | | 1 | "She reached down, her fingers brushing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a nervous tic she’d never quite broken." | | 2 | "Rory was cool-headed by nature—she’d survived Cardiff, she’d survived Evan, she’d learned how to navigate the cutthroat streets of London on a moped with nothing but a map and sheer nerve." | | 3 | "It wasn’t a trick of the light; the darkness was physically reaching inward, crawling across the violet wildflowers like spilled ink." | | 4 | "They didn't walk; they repositioned, appearing two feet closer every time she blinked." | | 5 | "It had no face—only a smooth, pale expanse of skin where eyes and a nose should be, split horizontally by a thin, lipless seam that stretched too wide to be a mouth." | | 6 | "It didn't scream; it let out a low, vibrating hiss that shook the pollen from the bluebells, filling the air with a choking, sweet dust." | | 7 | "She looked down at her hand; her palm was red and blistered, but the pendant had gone completely cold, resting quietly against her chest once more." |
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| 76.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1427 | | adjectiveStacks | 4 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "rough, thumbnail-sized crimson" | | 1 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" | | 2 | "long, many-jointed fingers" | | 3 | "cold, mud-slicked earth." |
| | adverbCount | 54 | | adverbRatio | 0.0378416257883672 | | lyAdverbCount | 21 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014716187806587245 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 108 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 108 | | mean | 13.31 | | std | 7.76 | | cv | 0.583 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 37 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 31 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 46.60% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.35185185185185186 | | totalSentences | 108 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she stepped into the" | | 1 | "Slowly, Rory reached into her" | | 2 | "Instead, she kept her gaze" | | 3 | "Instead, she locked her eyes" |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 58.46% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "It felt like a small," | | 1 | "She had squeezed through a" | | 2 | "She pulled her collar up," | | 3 | "she whispered to herself" | | 4 | "Her Welsh accent sounded flat," | | 5 | "She reached down, her fingers" | | 6 | "She needed to map the" | | 7 | "She took three steps forward." | | 8 | "It parted, silent as silk." | | 9 | "She held her breath, listening." | | 10 | "She turned back toward the" | | 11 | "It was a pale, fluid" | | 12 | "Her heart hammered a frantic" | | 13 | "she called out" | | 14 | "She took another step, intending" | | 15 | "She did not panic." | | 16 | "She breathed in through her" | | 17 | "She couldn’t afford to lose" | | 18 | "It was spinning, lazy and" | | 19 | "It sounded like a fingernail" |
| | ratio | 0.404 | |
| 94.62% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 76 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "The silver chain of the" | | 1 | "It felt like a small," | | 2 | "Richmond Park at midnight was" | | 3 | "She had squeezed through a" | | 4 | "Rory stopped, her boots sinking" | | 5 | "She pulled her collar up," | | 6 | "The air in the grove" | | 7 | "The silence here was different." | | 8 | "Here, that hum was gone." | | 9 | "she whispered to herself" | | 10 | "Her Welsh accent sounded flat," | | 11 | "She reached down, her fingers" | | 12 | "She needed to map the" | | 13 | "The pendant’s heat suggested a" | | 14 | "She took three steps forward." | | 15 | "The grass didn’t rustle under" | | 16 | "It parted, silent as silk." | | 17 | "A soft *tick* sounded behind" | | 18 | "Rory spun around, her black" | | 19 | "The clearing was empty." |
| | ratio | 0.731 | |
| 48.08% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "To her left, a massive" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 74.83% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stopped, her boots sinking into grass that was far too lush, far too green for the season." | | 1 | "Her heart hammered a frantic rhythm that matched the pulsing of the crimson stone." | | 2 | "It had no face—only a smooth, pale expanse of skin where eyes and a nose should be, split horizontally by a thin, lipless seam that stretched too wide to be a m…" | | 3 | "But it tilted its head, as if listening to the frantic double-time of Rory’s heart." | | 4 | "It didn't scream; it let out a low, vibrating hiss that shook the pollen from the bluebells, filling the air with a choking, sweet dust." | | 5 | "The Crimson glow flared, a sudden, blinding flash of red light that shattered the violet gloom." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |