Run: 2026-05-22-01KS868KC7V1B3903WG632D7F6

Run Details

Duration:
1m 36s
Cost:
$0.045323
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Richmond Park was supposed to be locked at this hour, but the heavy iron gates had been left ajar, just as the anonymous note had promised. Aurora Carter slipped through the narrow gap, her boots sinking into the damp, decaying leaves of late autumn. She pulled her jacket tighter against the biting November chill. At twenty-five, she had learned to trust her instincts, and right now, every nerve ending in her body was screaming at her to turn back and return to the safety of her flat above the bar. She pushed a strand of straight, shoulder-length black hair behind her ear and kept walking. She needed to know why the pendant had led her out here. The main path quickly gave way to a narrow, overgrown trail choked by thorny brambles. Rory navigated the darkness with careful steps until she breached the dense tree line and stepped into the Fae Grove. The transition was always jarring, a sudden shift in reality that made her stomach drop. Outside the grove, the London night was barren, cold, and entirely mundane. Inside the ring of ancient oak standing stones, the air was unnervingly still and smelled heavily of crushed pollen and damp earth. Wildflowers bloomed in the dark, their pale petals catching the weak, silver moonlight. Snowdrops, bluebells, and foxgloves carpeted the ground in a dense, unnatural tapestry of year-round life. Rory checked her wristwatch. The second hand was ticking backward, sweeping counterclockwise with a smooth, silent motion. Time moved differently in this hidden pocket between Earth and the Fae realm, a fact she had learned the hard way during her first visit. An hour spent inside the grove could mean a mere minute in the outside world, or it could mean a week. She had to be quick. She reached beneath her collar and pulled out the Heartstone pendant. The deep crimson gemstone, roughly the size of her thumbnail, hung from a delicate silver chain. It was completely inert. There was no faint inner glow, no pulse of warmth against her skin. Her unknown benefactor had explicitly told her it would react when brought near a Hel portal, but tonight, it felt like nothing more than a piece of cold, dead glass. She rubbed the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit she had never quite managed to break since childhood. If there was no portal, and no active magic, why had she felt such an overwhelming compulsion to come to the grove tonight? The absolute silence of the clearing broke. It was not a loud noise, just the soft, wet tear of a thick root snapping beneath the soil. Rory froze. Her mind, usually quick to categorize and dismiss anomalies, offered a dozen logical explanations. A badger foraging in the dark. A fox passing through. The natural shifting and settling of the ancient oaks. But the sound came again, much closer this time, accompanied by a low, rhythmic scraping. It sounded like heavy bone dragging slowly across rough stone. She turned in a slow circle, her bright blue eyes scanning the perimeter of the standing stones. The shadows between the massive, gnarled oak trunks seemed thicker than they should be, pooling and stretching in ways that defied the ambient moonlight. Something moved at the far edge of her vision. It was a tall, spindly shape, impossibly thin, that vanished into the darkness the exact moment she turned her head to look directly at it. Rory forced her breathing to slow, drawing the cold air deep into her lungs. Panic was a luxury she could not afford. She had survived an abusive ex, she had fled Cardiff, and she had rebuilt her life in London from nothing. She was cool-headed. She was smart. She took a deliberate, measured step backward toward the entrance of the grove, keeping her eyes fixed on the tree line. The wildflowers at her feet rustled, though the air remained perfectly dead and still. She looked down. The pale blooms were slowly rotating on their stems. Hundreds of tiny, delicate flowers were turning their faces away from the center of the clearing and pointing directly toward the tree line. Pointing at whatever was standing in the shadows. The scraping sound stopped. The silence that followed was heavy and pressurized, like the suffocating air right before a violent lightning strike. The temperature in the grove began to plummet, the unnatural warmth of the Fae pocket rapidly decaying into a deep, bone-aching frost. Ice crept up the bark of the ancient oaks, glistening in the moonlight. Then, the silver chain against her collarbone grew warm. Rory looked down. The Heartstone pendant was glowing. A faint, bloody light pulsed from deep within the crimson gem, casting long, eerie shadows across the front of her jacket. With every pulse, a wave of unnatural heat washed over her skin, stark and terrifying against the freezing air. It was reacting. A Hel portal was opening nearby. The realization hit her with the force of a physical blow. She was not just being watched. She was being hunted, and the thing in the shadows had brought a doorway to the underworld with it. She turned and ran for the gap in the ancient oak standing stones. Her boots pounded the soft, flower-covered earth, but the entrance seemed to be receding. The massive trees were stretching, the distance warping and elongating as the time distortion seized the grove in a desperate attempt to keep her inside. The heat from the pendant flared into a burning sting against her chest, pulsing faster and faster like a frantic heartbeat. The air directly behind her dropped to a freezing, tomb-like cold. She could hear it now, no longer just the scraping of bone, but a wet, rattling breath, impossibly close, right at the nape of her neck. The smell of rotting earth and old copper washed over her. She did not look back. She just ran blindly into the dark, the crimson glow of the stone lighting her desperate path into the unnatural, endless night.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
75.25% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1010
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
3
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"completely"
2"slowly"
3"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
20.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1010
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"navigated"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"tapestry"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"warmth"
count2
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"scanning"
count1
9
word"measured"
count1
10
word"glistening"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count1
12
word"stark"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"navigated"
2"stomach"
3"tapestry"
4"pulse"
5"warmth"
6"silence"
7"rhythmic"
8"scanning"
9"measured"
10"glistening"
11"pulsed"
12"stark"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
83.33% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences72
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"began to"
2"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences72
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1010
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount1010
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.5
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Fae"
discoveredNames
Park1
Carter1
November1
Fae3
Grove1
London2
Earth1
Heartstone2
Hel2
Cardiff1
Rory5
persons
0"Carter"
1"November"
2"Rory"
places
0"Park"
1"Fae"
2"Grove"
3"London"
4"Hel"
5"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
22.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like nothing more than a piece of"
1"sounded like heavy bone dragging slowly ac"
2"seemed thicker than they should be, pooling and stretching in ways that defied the ambient moonlight"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1010
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
60.27% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs13
mean77.69
std28.04
cv0.361
sampleLengths
0117
184
296
3119
486
575
669
757
857
99
1057
1188
1296
95.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences72
matches
0"was supposed"
1"been left"
2"being hunted"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount11
totalVerbs150
matches
0"was screaming"
1"was always jarring"
2"was ticking"
3"were slowly rotating"
4"were turning"
5"was standing"
6"was glowing"
7"was reacting"
8"was opening"
9"was not just being"
10"were stretching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences72
ratio0
matches(empty)
73.14% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1017
adjectiveStacks4
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
1"deep, bone-aching frost."
2"faint, bloody light pulsed"
3"soft, flower-covered earth,"
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.043264503441494594
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.01966568338249754
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences72
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences72
mean14.03
std7.63
cv0.544
sampleLengths
026
118
210
336
415
512
615
720
815
912
1022
1113
1215
134
1413
1525
1621
175
1811
1916
204
2113
2230
2322
2423
257
2619
272
2814
296
304
319
3215
3310
3417
3524
369
3725
3814
398
4020
413
423
4321
4414
453
469
4723
488
494
39.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3472222222222222
totalSentences72
uniqueOpeners25
46.95% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"Then, the silver chain against"
ratio0.014
73.52% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences71
matches
0"She pulled her jacket tighter"
1"She pushed a strand of"
2"She needed to know why"
3"She had to be quick."
4"She reached beneath her collar"
5"It was completely inert."
6"Her unknown benefactor had explicitly"
7"She rubbed the small, crescent-shaped"
8"It was not a loud"
9"Her mind, usually quick to"
10"It sounded like heavy bone"
11"She turned in a slow"
12"It was a tall, spindly"
13"She had survived an abusive"
14"She was cool-headed."
15"She was smart."
16"She took a deliberate, measured"
17"She looked down."
18"It was reacting."
19"She was not just being"
ratio0.366
23.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences71
matches
0"Richmond Park was supposed to"
1"Aurora Carter slipped through the"
2"She pulled her jacket tighter"
3"She pushed a strand of"
4"She needed to know why"
5"The main path quickly gave"
6"Rory navigated the darkness with"
7"The transition was always jarring,"
8"Wildflowers bloomed in the dark,"
9"Snowdrops, bluebells, and foxgloves carpeted"
10"Rory checked her wristwatch."
11"The second hand was ticking"
12"Time moved differently in this"
13"An hour spent inside the"
14"She had to be quick."
15"She reached beneath her collar"
16"The deep crimson gemstone, roughly"
17"It was completely inert."
18"Her unknown benefactor had explicitly"
19"She rubbed the small, crescent-shaped"
ratio0.873
70.42% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"If there was no portal,"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The shadows between the massive, gnarled oak trunks seemed thicker than they should be, pooling and stretching in ways that defied the ambient moonlight."
1"The silence that followed was heavy and pressurized, like the suffocating air right before a violent lightning strike."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.5090%