Run: 2026-05-22-01KS86TEH20K6M5M428GY92ERT

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Duration:
1m 58s
Cost:
$0.056070
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air inside the boundary of the ancient oak standing stones tasted like crushed mint and ozone. Rory paused, her boots sinking slightly into the damp earth of Richmond Park. It was well past midnight, yet the clearing ahead was bathed in a pale, sourceless luminescence. She pushed a strand of straight, shoulder-length black hair behind her ear and checked her phone. No signal. The clock read two fourteen in the morning, but the digital numbers flickered, blurring into a smudge before settling on three thirty. Time moved differently in the Fae Grove. She had known that before she crossed the threshold, but experiencing the temporal slip made her stomach tighten. She would much rather be asleep in her flat above Silas' bar, listening to the muffled thump of the bass and the clinking of glasses. She stepped fully into the clearing. Wildflowers bloomed in aggressive, impossible profusion despite the autumn chill. Pale foxglove and ghost-white yarrow swayed in a wind she could not feel. Rory rubbed the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit she had never quite managed to break. She was supposed to be the cool-headed one. Eva always said Rory could out-think a panic attack, could logic her way out of a burning building. But logic felt thin here, stretched taut over the yawning pocket between Earth and the Fae realm. At five foot six, she usually felt grounded, solid. Here, beneath the towering oaks, she felt entirely too small. She had come because of the pendant. The Heartstone rested against her collarbone, a thumbnail-sized tear of deep crimson on a silver chain. An unknown benefactor had left it for her at the Golden Empress, tucked inside a takeout order Yu-Fei Cheung had told her to deliver. Since then, it had been a dead weight. Until tonight. Tonight, it had begun to pull. Rory walked deeper into the grove, her eyes adjusting to the strange, flat light. Her bright blue eyes, usually so quick to pick up details in the dim alleys of London, struggled against the shadows pooling beneath the ferns. The silence was the first thing that felt truly wrong. Richmond Park was never entirely quiet. There should have been the distant hum of the A308, the cry of a night bird, the rustle of red deer in the bracken. Here, the silence was absolute. It was a heavy, suffocating blanket that pressed against her eardrums. Then, the pendant shifted. It started as a faint inner glow, a deep, arterial red seeping through the crimson gemstone. Rory stopped, looking down at her chest. The silver chain was growing warm. The codex of her mind supplied the rule she had deduced over the past three weeks of careful observation. The Heartstone pulsed with warmth when near a Hel portal. A portal to the underworld. She swallowed hard, the sound impossibly loud in the dead air. A twig snapped. Rory froze. The sound had come from her left, just beyond a cluster of silver birch trees that had not been there when she first entered the grove. She turned her head slowly, keeping her breathing shallow and even. Nothing moved. The pale flowers continued their windless swaying. She told herself it was a squirrel, or a fox, though she knew no animals crossed the oak stones. The magic of the grove kept the mundane world out. She took another step forward. The warmth against her sternum intensified, shifting from a comforting heat to a distinct, radiating burn. She slipped her fingers beneath her jacket, wrapping her hand around the gemstone to muffle its glow. The stone was hot, almost too hot to hold, vibrating with a low, sub-audible frequency that rattled her teeth. A whisper drifted through the clearing. It was not a word, just the sibilant friction of breath over teeth. Rory spun around, her boots crunching on the dry leaves. The clearing was empty. The ancient oak standing stones marked the boundary fifty yards away, their gnarled bark black against the pale sky. But the distance felt wrong. She had only walked twenty paces. The stones should have been right behind her. Focus, she told herself. Calculate. Observe. She picked up a smooth river stone from the dirt and tossed it toward the nearest oak. It landed with a dull thud, rolling into the ferns. The distance was real. The geometry of the grove was stretching, warping the space between her and the exit. The realization sent a cold spike of adrenaline through her veins, but she forced it down. Panic was a luxury she could not afford. Evan had taught her what happened when you panicked. You made mistakes. You got trapped. You ended up with a bruised rib and a locked door. She turned back toward the center of the grove, intending to find the epicenter of the portal and close it, or at least understand it. But as she moved, a shadow detached itself from the edge of her peripheral vision. It was a tall, impossibly thin silhouette, sliding behind the trunk of a massive elm. Rory stopped, her hand dropping to the pocket where she kept her delivery multi-tool. It was a pathetic weapon against the supernatural, but the familiar weight of the steel grounded her. Who is there, she called out. Her voice was steady, betraying none of the terror clawing at her throat. No answer. Just the oppressive silence, and the steady, rhythmic throbbing of the Heartstone against her palm. The glow was seeping through her fingers now, casting long, bloody shadows across the wildflowers. A soft, wet footstep sounded to her right. Rory pivoted. Nothing. Another step, this time behind her. She was being circled. The entity, whatever it was, was playing with her. It was testing the boundaries of her perception, slipping into the blind spots of her vision. She stood perfectly still, closing her eyes for a fraction of a second to map the sounds. The rustle of fabric. The faint, metallic scent of ozone and copper. The distinct feeling of displaced air. She opened her eyes and looked straight ahead. The air ten feet in front of her was rippling, like heat distortion over summer tarmac. The wildflowers beneath the distortion were withering, their pale petals turning brown and curling into ash. The Hel portal was opening. The heat from the pendant became searing. Rory gasped, dropping the stone. It hit the ground, and the crimson light flared, illuminating the clearing in a harsh, bloody glare. In that flash of red light, she saw it. It was not a monster of flesh and bone. It was an absence. A towering, jagged tear in the fabric of the grove, standing just behind the rippling air. And standing at the edge of the tear, partially obscured by the shifting shadows of the dying flowers, was a figure. The figure wore a heavy coat. It had the broad shoulders and the familiar, slouching posture of a man she had spent two years trying to forget. The figure turned its head, and though the face was obscured by the gloom, Rory saw the glint of a silver lighter flipping open and shut in its hand. Evan. The lighter snapped shut. The sound echoed like a gunshot. The crimson light of the Heartstone faded back to a faint, inner glow, plunging the grove back into its pale, sourceless luminescence. The figure was gone. The rippling air smoothed out. The withered flowers remained, a circle of black ash in the sea of white blooms. Rory stood alone in the silence. The pendant was cooling against her skin, but the phantom heat lingered. She looked at the ancient oak standing stones, which now seemed miles away, shrouded in a thick, creeping mist. She was not alone in the grove. She had never been alone. And as the soft, wet footstep sounded directly behind her, she realized the portal had not closed. It had only just begun to open.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1330
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"truly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"truly"
2"slowly"
3"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.53% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1330
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"silence"
count4
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count2
7
word"comforting"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"calculate"
count1
10
word"familiar"
count2
11
word"oppressive"
count1
12
word"rhythmic"
count1
13
word"searing"
count1
14
word"gloom"
count1
15
word"glint"
count1
16
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"stomach"
2"chill"
3"weight"
4"silence"
5"pulsed"
6"warmth"
7"comforting"
8"whisper"
9"calculate"
10"familiar"
11"oppressive"
12"rhythmic"
13"searing"
14"gloom"
15"glint"
16"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences122
matches
0"d with warmth"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences122
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1330
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions2
matches
0"Focus, she told herself."
1"Who is there, she called out."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1315
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.91
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Fae2
Grove1
Rory12
Earth1
Heartstone4
Golden1
Empress1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
London1
Hel2
You3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"Empress"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Cheung"
5"You"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"Golden"
5"London"
6"Hel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences92
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tasted like crushed mint and ozone"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1330
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean44.33
std35.81
cv0.808
sampleLengths
0136
1111
263
395
44
574
63
777
857
96
1065
116
1296
1340
1446
1519
1632
178
183
196
2064
2145
2229
239
2450
2556
261
2710
2846
2973
90.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences122
matches
0"was bathed"
1"was supposed"
2"being circled"
3"was obscured"
4"was gone"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs207
matches
0"was stretching"
1"was seeping"
2"was playing"
3"was testing"
4"was rippling"
5"were withering"
6"was opening"
7"was cooling"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences122
ratio0
matches(empty)
84.80% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount122
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount7
adverbRatio0.05737704918032787
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.01639344262295082
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean10.9
std6.65
cv0.61
sampleLengths
017
113
216
316
42
522
67
718
825
96
1010
1113
1220
138
1418
1517
169
1710
187
1916
2024
218
222
236
2414
2525
2610
276
2824
295
3011
314
3216
337
346
3519
3610
375
3811
393
402
4126
4211
432
447
4519
4610
475
4816
4917
31.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.27049180327868855
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners33
59.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences112
matches
0"Then, the pendant shifted."
1"Just the oppressive silence, and"
ratio0.018
84.29% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences112
matches
0"It was well past midnight,"
1"She pushed a strand of"
2"She had known that before"
3"She would much rather be"
4"She stepped fully into the"
5"She was supposed to be"
6"She had come because of"
7"Her bright blue eyes, usually"
8"It was a heavy, suffocating"
9"It started as a faint"
10"She swallowed hard, the sound"
11"She turned her head slowly,"
12"She told herself it was"
13"She took another step forward."
14"She slipped her fingers beneath"
15"It was not a word,"
16"She had only walked twenty"
17"She picked up a smooth"
18"It landed with a dull"
19"You made mistakes."
ratio0.339
18.04% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount99
totalSentences112
matches
0"The air inside the boundary"
1"Rory paused, her boots sinking"
2"It was well past midnight,"
3"She pushed a strand of"
4"The clock read two fourteen"
5"Time moved differently in the"
6"She had known that before"
7"She would much rather be"
8"She stepped fully into the"
9"Wildflowers bloomed in aggressive, impossible"
10"Rory rubbed the small, crescent-shaped"
11"She was supposed to be"
12"Eva always said Rory could"
13"Here, beneath the towering oaks,"
14"She had come because of"
15"The Heartstone rested against her"
16"An unknown benefactor had left"
17"Tonight, it had begun to"
18"Rory walked deeper into the"
19"Her bright blue eyes, usually"
ratio0.884
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The stone was hot, almost too hot to hold, vibrating with a low, sub-audible frequency that rattled her teeth."
1"It was testing the boundaries of her perception, slipping into the blind spots of her vision."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.2662%