Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMEK074RJQ4YNJYKNTZ1AM1

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19.2s
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The flickering neon sign caught her eye as she stood on the bustling London sidewalk, a sense of nostalgia already flooding her. The Green neon 'The' and black 'Raven's Nest' looked the same as the night eight years before, when she had last stepped foot in Silas' bar. Back when the world seemed bigger, younger, and her heart felt whole. Aurora, one of her earliest aliases Laila came to mind, took a deep breath, squared her shoulders, and tugged open the heavy wooden door. She scanned the dim interior, waiting for her eyes to adjust. The smell of stale cigarette smoke and cheap ale clung to the red-upholstered booths along the walls. It smelled no different than she remembered. The scars of time refused to diminish this place. She had forgotten that about bars. The way they stayed stuck in time, waiting to catch ghosts in the smoke they breathed out. An old man at the bar smiled at her then, and she smiled back. "I'm sorry, there's only bar seats," he said softly. She had forgotten his voice, too. No, that wasn't all. She had forgotten so many things, like the dim orange light that always lingered and the excited rush of finding her best friend. "But you can sit with me!" Rory forced another thin smile as Silas - no, she couldn't call him "Silverton" in the future, Silas, she told herself- led her over to the booth in the corner. It was lit by a single overhead light that was disturbingly dim, but then, the room itself was dark as hell. But as she slid in, it felt like she'd returned home after a lifetime. "I was hoping to find you here," he said as he settled across from her. She had forgotten about his persistent eyes-spotting grey flecked through his blond hair, kind intelligent eyes that challenged her to hold back. "I didn't think I'd ever come back," Rory confessed, looking down in her trembling hands. "I knew you would." "Why?" The question was barely a whisper, more of an inward thought than something she'd said aloud. He hesitated. "You did leave," he said. "But a friend is forever, and you can never deny me. Even now." Rory didn't know what to say, so she kept silent. "I want to help," Silas continued. "I never stopped thinking about you, Aurora. And I believe I know who might've attacked you." She looked up at him then, startled. "Who?" He leaned in closer, his voice almost inaudible. "The Kraznios Syndicate. They're known for assassination attempts on high-profile targets, including politicians and celebrities." Rory felt a chill run down her spine. The Kraznios Syndicate. She had heard whispers about them, rumors of their ruthless tactics and global reach. But what would they want with her? Silas must have read her expression, for he added, "I know it sounds far-fetched, but trust me on this. I have sources that suggest they've been watching you for some time now." Rory shook her head in disbelief. "But why? I'm just a small-time thief, not exactly a high-value target." Silas leaned back, his hazel eyes twinkling. "Precisely, my dear. And that's what has made you so effective. You operate under the radar, slipping in and out of places without leaving a trace. It's admirable, really." Rory felt a flash of resentment at his tone. Admirable? Is that supposed to make her feel better? He raised a finger, "Yes, admire it, but understand I came to admire more than your craftsmanship... I came to admire the person you are. Maybe people snicker when I say it, but I don't give a shit. I came back here, just to see if I'd see you, and that's what's made me so effective." She squared her shoulders. Not exactly a good look, Rory. "Admirable? Is that what you'd call it?" Rory said. "Fanatic, Silas. Obsessive. I can't help but feel that the more you defend me, the more you damning yourself. And for what? You left me. You destroyed everything, and I had to pick up the pieces." Silas shifted as if he was trying to decide what to say. "I'm sorry. I should never have pushed you away. I didn't mean to hurt you." But Rory was already standing, backing toward the door. She couldn't stay here, not with him, not now. The ghost of the past was too much to bear. "Rory, wait!" Silas called out, but she was already gone, running out into the smoke-filled bar and losing herself in the crowd.
created_at"2026-05-27T10:09:53.905Z" 5/27/2026, 10:09:53 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.524
leniency1
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.091
80.18% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount757
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"precisely"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount757
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"sense of"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"down her spine"
count1
5
word"can't help but feel"
count1
highlights
0"sense of"
1"scanned"
2"whisper"
3"chill"
4"down her spine"
5"can't help but feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
71.81% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences47
matches
0"a sense of nostalgia"
1"felt a chill"
2"d in disbelief"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences47
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences57
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords758
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount475
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.89
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London1
Green1
Laila1
Silas7
Rory9
Kraznios1
Syndicate1
persons
0"Laila"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.553
windowScore0.333
11.11% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed bigger younger, and her heart felt whole"
1"felt like she'd returned home after a l"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount758
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean34.45
std22.47
cv0.652
sampleLengths
060
1105
248
365
437
515
64
717
820
932
108
1123
1232
1332
1418
1536
1618
1756
1855
1927
2028
2122
97.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences47
matches
0"was lit"
56.63% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs93
matches
0"was trying"
1"was already standing"
92.73% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences57
ratio0.018
matches
0"Rory forced another thin smile as Silas - no, she couldn't call him \"Silverton\" in the future, Silas, she told herself- led her over to the booth in the corner."
96.50% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount250
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.044
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.008
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences57
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences57
mean13.3
std9.82
cv0.739
sampleLengths
022
126
212
324
411
517
67
79
86
917
1014
119
126
134
1423
156
1630
1721
1814
1915
2022
2115
224
2317
242
255
2613
2710
286
2916
307
311
328
3315
348
353
3614
377
3832
396
4012
417
4229
439
441
458
4656
474
486
499
53.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3508771929824561
totalSentences57
uniqueOpeners20
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.14% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences42
matches
0"She scanned the dim interior,"
1"It smelled no different than"
2"She had forgotten that about"
3"he said softly"
4"She had forgotten his voice,"
5"She had forgotten so many"
6"It was lit by a"
7"he said as he settled"
8"She had forgotten about his"
9"She looked up at him"
10"He leaned in closer, his"
11"She had heard whispers about"
12"He raised a finger,"
13"She squared her shoulders."
14"She couldn't stay here, not"
ratio0.357
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount36
totalSentences42
matches
0"The flickering neon sign caught"
1"The Green neon"
2"Back when the world seemed"
3"Aurora, one of her earliest"
4"She scanned the dim interior,"
5"The smell of stale cigarette"
6"It smelled no different than"
7"The scars of time refused"
8"She had forgotten that about"
9"The way they stayed stuck"
10"An old man at the"
11"he said softly"
12"She had forgotten his voice,"
13"She had forgotten so many"
14"Rory forced another thin smile"
15"It was lit by a"
16"he said as he settled"
17"She had forgotten about his"
18"Rory confessed, looking down in"
19"The question was barely a"
ratio0.857
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
ratio0
47.62% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences15
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"It was lit by a single overhead light that was disturbingly dim, but then, the room itself was dark as hell."
1"She had forgotten about his persistent eyes-spotting grey flecked through his blond hair, kind intelligent eyes that challenged her to hold back."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Rory confessed (confess)"
1"Silas continued (continue)"
2"Silas called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.286
73.9006%