| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 51.78% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1348 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 13 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "carefully" | | 4 | "softly" | | 5 | "slightly" | | 6 | "deliberately" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 33.23% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1348 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "symphony" | | 1 | "oppressive" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "velvet" | | 6 | "echoed" | | 7 | "roaring" | | 8 | "anticipation" | | 9 | "throbbed" | | 10 | "rhythmic" | | 11 | "pulse" | | 12 | "familiar" | | 13 | "flicker" | | 14 | "tension" | | 15 | "traced" | | 16 | "tracing" | | 17 | "otherworldly" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "a flicker of recognition" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 9 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "started to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1364 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 1313 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.69 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "London" | | discoveredNames | | London | 2 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Blake | 1 | | Chinese | 1 | | Brendan | 1 | | Carter | 2 | | Folke | 1 | | Aurora | 9 | | Hel | 1 | | World | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Blake" | | 2 | "Chinese" | | 3 | "Brendan" | | 4 | "Carter" | | 5 | "Folke" | | 6 | "Aurora" | | 7 | "Hel" | | 8 | "World" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 18.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed strange even at the time" | | 1 | "shape that seemed to drink the moonlight rather than reflect it" | | 2 | "fingers that seemed to have too many joints" | | 3 | "felt like hours but might have been min" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.733 | | wordCount | 1364 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the sharp crunch of a deer, but something more deliberate" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.78% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 44 | | std | 19.19 | | cv | 0.436 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 68 | | 2 | 44 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 66 | | 5 | 53 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 57 | | 8 | 78 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 41 | | 13 | 69 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 48 | | 16 | 52 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 52 | | 19 | 78 | | 20 | 34 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 53 | | 24 | 37 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 60 | | 27 | 52 | | 28 | 68 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 35 |
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| 92.73% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "being throttled" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "been rearranged" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 208 | | matches | | 0 | "was holding" | | 1 | "was turning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 88 | | ratio | 0.148 | | matches | | 0 | "Air thickened like syrup and smelled of damp earth and something else – something ancient and at once inviting and terrifying." | | 1 | "A flash of movement – silver-white fur or perhaps white birch leaves stirring in a non-existent wind." | | 2 | "Inside lay a dagger made from a silver król Blake had left in last month's delivery – a delivery that had seemed strange even at the time." | | 3 | "No response, but she felt something shift – a presence solidifying from the shadows between the trees." | | 4 | "Aurora carefully touched the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, the mark from that childhood accident when she'd first sensed something inexplicable – a glimpse into the spaces between what was real and what was not." | | 5 | "The feeling of violation was visceral now – she was an intruder in this sacred space, and something sacred was turning on her." | | 6 | "\"I didn't mean to trespass,\" she whispered, watching as the thing – if it was a thing and not some trick of her mind – came into the ring of washing light." | | 7 | "It had no mouth, but she felt its presence in her mind – a cold, ancient intelligence that had watched humanity lumber and stumble through the ages, watching now through her." | | 8 | "In the brief moments between its heartbeat-like pulsations, she glimpsed bones – not human, yet somehow familiar – half-buried in the soil at its feet." | | 9 | "In her mind, she felt a flicker of recognition – perhaps even approval." | | 10 | "At her feet, ancient flowers began to brighten, as if nourished by some offering beyond blood alone – by truth, perhaps, or intention." | | 11 | "She was an intercessor, a bridge – someone who had listened when most would have fled." | | 12 | "The flowers glowed normally, the night sounds returned – the hoot of an owl, the rustle of leaves above – as if some ancient otherworldly visitor had never crossed her path." |
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| 90.70% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1302 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 65 | | adverbRatio | 0.04992319508448541 | | lyAdverbCount | 27 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.020737327188940093 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 88 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 88 | | mean | 15.5 | | std | 8.4 | | cv | 0.542 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 36 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 62.12% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.42045454545454547 | | totalSentences | 88 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 82.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "More present in her mind" | | 1 | "Instead, a long, delicate finger" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 96.54% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath came out in" | | 1 | "She had memorized the directions" | | 2 | "Her fingers closed reflexively around" | | 3 | "she whispered to herself, stepping" | | 4 | "She froze, turning her head" | | 5 | "Her heart pounded against her" | | 6 | "She continued to the center," | | 7 | "she called out softly, proud" | | 8 | "It was just at the" | | 9 | "Its rhythmic pulse seemed to" | | 10 | "Her mother had brushed it" | | 11 | "she asked, louder this time" | | 12 | "It moved without a sound," | | 13 | "She needed a weapon if" | | 14 | "she whispered, watching as the" | | 15 | "It had no mouth, but" | | 16 | "She understood suddenly why the" | | 17 | "She understood what lay buried" | | 18 | "she said, realizing the truth" | | 19 | "She was no longer an" |
| | ratio | 0.309 | |
| 77.28% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora pulled her hood over" | | 1 | "The night was unnaturally quiet," | | 2 | "Her breath came out in" | | 3 | "The standing stones appeared suddenly," | | 4 | "She had memorized the directions" | | 5 | "Her fingers closed reflexively around" | | 6 | "The Heartstone had no business" | | 7 | "she whispered to herself, stepping" | | 8 | "Air thickened like syrup and" | | 9 | "Moonlight filtered through the canopy" | | 10 | "The place was impossibly beautiful," | | 11 | "Aurora moved toward the center" | | 12 | "A flash of movement –" | | 13 | "She froze, turning her head" | | 14 | "Her heart pounded against her" | | 15 | "czasu moves differently here, the" | | 16 | "An hour inside might pass" | | 17 | "Time had already started to" | | 18 | "The quiet had settled deeper," | | 19 | "She continued to the center," |
| | ratio | 0.765 | |
| 61.73% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Now she understood why the" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 47.62% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The quiet had settled deeper, closer, as though even the air itself was holding its breath." | | 1 | "Inside lay a dagger made from a silver król Blake had left in last month's delivery – a delivery that had seemed strange even at the time." | | 2 | "The flowers seemed to brighten in anticipation, their luminescent petals swaying as if caressed by gentle wind that didn't reach her." | | 3 | "It moved without a sound, closer now, moving not so much walking as gliding, its form shifting between solid and wispy with each step." | | 4 | "It had no mouth, but she felt its presence in her mind – a cold, ancient intelligence that had watched humanity lumber and stumble through the ages, watching no…" | | 5 | "The wildflowers around the thing began to dim, their luminescent glow dimming as if being throttled by some unseen force." | | 6 | "At her feet, ancient flowers began to brighten, as if nourished by some offering beyond blood alone – by truth, perhaps, or intention." | | 7 | "The flowers glowed normally, the night sounds returned – the hoot of an owl, the rustle of leaves above – as if some ancient otherworldly visitor had never cros…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she called out (call out)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.6 | |