| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 46.62% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 843 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "languidly" | | 1 | "completely" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "cautiously" | | 4 | "slightly" | | 5 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 5.10% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 843 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "intricate" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "comforting" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "roaring" | | 10 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 32.97% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 835 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.17% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 806 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.12 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 6 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 2 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 9 | | Pendant | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.942 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 59.09% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "patterns that seemed to shift and change when viewed from the corner of her eye" | | 1 | "features that seemed to shift when she focused on them" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 835 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 32.12 | | std | 21.48 | | cv | 0.669 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 82 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 51 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 81 | | 5 | 48 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 36 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 53 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 43 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 31 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 45 | | 23 | 47 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 47 |
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| 99.87% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 142 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 67 | | ratio | 0.104 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood at the edge of the Fae Grove, the boundary marked by ancient oak standing stones that looked impossibly old—certainly older than Richmond Park itself." | | 1 | "The familiar night sounds of the park—the distant rustle of critters, the occasional owl call—faded into an eerie silence." | | 2 | "The map on her navigation app showed a small red pin in this general area—it was supposed to be some kind of ancient artifact, local lore suggested." | | 3 | "Yet the sound had been real—she was certain of it." | | 4 | "This was it—the artifact." | | 5 | "Something in the corner of her vision moved again—something that flickered and vanished in an instant." | | 6 | "Behind her, she heard movement—a quiet, scraping sound as something followed." |
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| 85.91% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 820 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "eerie blue-white streaks." |
| | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.04390243902439024 | | lyAdverbCount | 21 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.025609756097560974 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 67 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 67 | | mean | 12.46 | | std | 6.23 | | cv | 0.5 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 69.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.4626865671641791 | | totalSentences | 67 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood at the edge" | | 1 | "Her mother had warned her" | | 2 | "she whispered to herself, straightening" | | 3 | "She ignored the dread creeping" | | 4 | "It felt warm against her" | | 5 | "she reminded herself, gripping the" | | 6 | "She squeezed the Heartstone as" | | 7 | "she breathed, turning back and" | | 8 | "Her breathing grew shallow as" | | 9 | "It watched her." | | 10 | "she called out, her voice" | | 11 | "Her eyes never left the" | | 12 | "She turned and ran." | | 13 | "She collapsed onto the familiar" |
| | ratio | 0.233 | |
| 76.67% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "The विकिमीडिया घनात्मिका was in" | | 1 | "She stood at the edge" | | 2 | "Her mother had warned her" | | 3 | "she whispered to herself, straightening" | | 4 | "The air changed the moment" | | 5 | "The familiar night sounds of" | | 6 | "Here, she only heard the" | | 7 | "Year-round wildflowers carpeted the ground," | | 8 | "The grove stretched before her," | | 9 | "Aurora pulled her phone from" | | 10 | "The map on her navigation" | | 11 | "The battery percentage that had" | | 12 | "She ignored the dread creeping" | | 13 | "It felt warm against her" | | 14 | "The grove seemed to shift" | | 15 | "she reminded herself, gripping the" | | 16 | "A noise stopped her dead" | | 17 | "A low, guttural growl, coming" | | 18 | "She squeezed the Heartstone as" | | 19 | "Nothing but trees and the" |
| | ratio | 0.767 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 76.41% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The विकिमीडिया घनात्मिका was in Aurora's hand, its deep crimson stone pulsing with a warmth that had been non-existent just minutes ago." | | 1 | "She stood at the edge of the Fae Grove, the boundary marked by ancient oak standing stones that looked impossibly old—certainly older than Richmond Park itself." | | 2 | "Year-round wildflowers carpeted the ground, their petals catching the sliver of moonlight that made it through the canopy in eerie blue-white streaks." | | 3 | "She squeezed the Heartstone as if it could protect her, turning slowly, her eyes straining through the dark." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice cracking slightly" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "she called out (call out)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |