Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMEYPJWDXWNQQG030JZ6GD9

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Duration:
27.2s
Cost:
$0.000720
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Parasail

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The विकिमीडिया घनात्मिका was in Aurora's hand, its deep crimson stone pulsing with a warmth that had been non-existent just minutes ago. She stood at the edge of the Fae Grove, the boundary marked by ancient oak standing stones that looked impossibly old—certainly older than Richmond Park itself. Her mother had warned her about places like this when she was young, about places that weren't entirely of this world. But the Heartstone had called to her, had insisted on this late-night visit. "Right," she whispered to herself, straightening her spine and tugging the hood of her black jacket higher. "Just get in, do what you came to do, and get out." The air changed the moment she stepped beyond the standing stones. The familiar night sounds of the park—the distant rustle of critters, the occasional owl call—faded into an eerie silence. Here, she only heard the soft crunch of leaves beneath her boots and the shallow, too-quiet intake of her own breath. Year-round wildflowers carpeted the ground, their petals catching the sliver of moonlight that made it through the canopy in eerie blue-white streaks. The grove stretched before her, enormous oaks dominating the space, their gnarled roots twisting languidly across the forest floor. Aurora pulled her phone from her back pocket, flipped it open, and illuminated the screen. The map on her navigation app showed a small red pin in this general area—it was supposed to be some kind of ancient artifact, local lore suggested. But as she walked deeper into the grove, her phone itself seemed... off. The battery percentage that had been at 87% when she entered was now at 12%, having dropped frighteningly fast. And the signal bar had vanished completely. She ignored the dread creeping up her spine and kept moving, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing more insistently now. It felt warm against her chest, pulsing in time with her accelerating heart. The grove seemed to shift around her, the trees subtly changing positions whenever she turned her back. "Time moves differently here," she reminded herself, gripping the pendant. "That's all. Time and space don't work right." A noise stopped her dead in her tracks. A low, guttural growl, coming from somewhere to her left. She squeezed the Heartstone as if it could protect her, turning slowly, her eyes straining through the dark. Nothing. Nothing but trees and the ever-growing carpet of flowers. Yet the sound had been real—she was certain of it. "I'm losing it," she breathed, turning back and continuing her journey. The trail widened into a clearing, bathed in a soft, ethereal light. In the center stood an ancient stone menorah, carved with intricate patterns that seemed to shift and change when viewed from the corner of her eye. As she approached, the warmth from the Heartstone intensified, becoming uncomfortably hot against her chest. This was it—the artifact. Her destination. Aurora approached cautiously, her eyes darting between the menorah and the surrounding shadows. Something in the corner of her vision moved again—something that flickered and vanished in an instant. Her breathing grew shallow as she circled the stone menorah, her fingers trailing over the cool, weathered surface. The patterns on the menorah seemed to resonate with the Heartstone, which now pulsed with a visible red glow. The heat was almost painful now. As she rounded the rear of the stone, she saw it. A figure stood in the shadows, just beyond the edge of the grove's light. Tall, impossibly thin, with features that seemed to shift when she focused on them. It watched her. Aurora froze, her hand instinctively flying to the Heartstone. The figure didn't move, didn't speak. But she felt its presence like a weight pressing down on her chest. "Hello?" she called out, her voice cracking slightly. No response. The figure only watched. Aurora slowly, cautiously, backed away. Her eyes never left the figure, her hand still pressed against the pulsating pendant. The comforting weight that the Heartstone had provided was now replaced by terror. The wrongness of this place settled in her bones. She turned and ran. Leaves crunched underfoot as she fled back the way she had come, her pulse roaring in her ears. The grove seemed to stretch around her, the distance to the standing stones feeling impossibly far. Behind her, she heard movement—a quiet, scraping sound as something followed. With a desperate burst of speed, she shoved through the branches and stumbled beyond the boundary oaks. She collapsed onto the familiar grass of Richmond Park, gasping for air that suddenly felt clean and right. The Heartstone pendant was still warm, but its frantic pulse had calmed. Looking back through the oaks, she saw nothing but the normal parkland. The standing stones stood silent and unmoving. Aurora stayed on the ground for a long moment, her heart slowly returning to normal. Whatever was in the Fae Grove had let her go. For now. But the Heartstone's warmth was a reminder that she would have to return. And next time, she wouldn't be alone.
created_at"2026-05-27T10:16:17.257Z" 5/27/2026, 10:16:17 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
46.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount843
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"languidly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count3
3
adverb"cautiously"
count2
4
adverb"slightly"
count1
5
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"languidly"
1"completely"
2"slowly"
3"cautiously"
4"slightly"
5"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
5.10% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount843
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"warmth"
count3
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"intricate"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"comforting"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count2
9
word"roaring"
count1
10
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"familiar"
2"silence"
3"intricate"
4"flickered"
5"pulsed"
6"weight"
7"comforting"
8"pulse"
9"roaring"
10"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences65
matches(empty)
32.97% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences65
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences67
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords835
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.17% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount806
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.12
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Heartstone"
discoveredNames
Aurora6
Fae2
Grove2
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone9
Pendant1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
2"Pendant"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
globalScore0.942
windowScore1
59.09% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"patterns that seemed to shift and change when viewed from the corner of her eye"
1"features that seemed to shift when she focused on them"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount835
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean32.12
std21.48
cv0.669
sampleLengths
082
129
251
341
481
548
618
736
81
919
1011
1153
126
1329
1443
1511
1631
1728
188
196
2041
214
2245
2347
2419
2547
99.87% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"was supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs142
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences67
ratio0.104
matches
0"She stood at the edge of the Fae Grove, the boundary marked by ancient oak standing stones that looked impossibly old—certainly older than Richmond Park itself."
1"The familiar night sounds of the park—the distant rustle of critters, the occasional owl call—faded into an eerie silence."
2"The map on her navigation app showed a small red pin in this general area—it was supposed to be some kind of ancient artifact, local lore suggested."
3"Yet the sound had been real—she was certain of it."
4"This was it—the artifact."
5"Something in the corner of her vision moved again—something that flickered and vanished in an instant."
6"Behind her, she heard movement—a quiet, scraping sound as something followed."
85.91% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount820
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"eerie blue-white streaks."
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.04390243902439024
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.025609756097560974
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences67
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences67
mean12.46
std6.23
cv0.5
sampleLengths
022
126
221
313
417
512
611
719
821
922
1019
1115
1227
1312
141
1519
167
1718
1813
1917
2010
218
228
2310
2418
251
269
2710
2811
2912
3026
3115
324
332
3413
3516
3618
3719
386
3911
4014
4114
423
439
446
4513
468
472
484
495
69.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4626865671641791
totalSentences67
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences60
matches
0"She stood at the edge"
1"Her mother had warned her"
2"she whispered to herself, straightening"
3"She ignored the dread creeping"
4"It felt warm against her"
5"she reminded herself, gripping the"
6"She squeezed the Heartstone as"
7"she breathed, turning back and"
8"Her breathing grew shallow as"
9"It watched her."
10"she called out, her voice"
11"Her eyes never left the"
12"She turned and ran."
13"She collapsed onto the familiar"
ratio0.233
76.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences60
matches
0"The विकिमीडिया घनात्मिका was in"
1"She stood at the edge"
2"Her mother had warned her"
3"she whispered to herself, straightening"
4"The air changed the moment"
5"The familiar night sounds of"
6"Here, she only heard the"
7"Year-round wildflowers carpeted the ground,"
8"The grove stretched before her,"
9"Aurora pulled her phone from"
10"The map on her navigation"
11"The battery percentage that had"
12"She ignored the dread creeping"
13"It felt warm against her"
14"The grove seemed to shift"
15"she reminded herself, gripping the"
16"A noise stopped her dead"
17"A low, guttural growl, coming"
18"She squeezed the Heartstone as"
19"Nothing but trees and the"
ratio0.767
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
76.41% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The विकिमीडिया घनात्मिका was in Aurora's hand, its deep crimson stone pulsing with a warmth that had been non-existent just minutes ago."
1"She stood at the edge of the Fae Grove, the boundary marked by ancient oak standing stones that looked impossibly old—certainly older than Richmond Park itself."
2"Year-round wildflowers carpeted the ground, their petals catching the sliver of moonlight that made it through the canopy in eerie blue-white streaks."
3"She squeezed the Heartstone as if it could protect her, turning slowly, her eyes straining through the dark."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she called out, her voice cracking slightly"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
2"she called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
71.5484%