| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 76.66% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 857 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "precisely" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 59.16% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 857 | | totalAiIsms | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "amidst" | | 1 | "flicker" | | 2 | "sense of" | | 3 | "glinting" | | 4 | "spectral" | | 5 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.92% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 93.15% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | gibberishSentences | 1 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 1 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0.015 | | matches | | 0 | "So many years ago, a컨teenage gambol and tumble into these very stones had left her wrist gored and their secret imprinted on her soul." |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 858 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 829 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.97 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 8 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Helen | 1 | | Severnleads | 1 | | Five | 2 | | Circles | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Iyar | 1 | | Bann | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Helen" | | 2 | "Severnleads" | | 3 | "Circles" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 858 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.04% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 29.59 | | std | 13.24 | | cv | 0.448 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 57 | | 4 | 46 | | 5 | 37 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 41 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 36 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 11 |
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| 83.67% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "was destined" | | 1 | "was fated" | | 2 | "was stifled" | | 3 | "was snagged" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 14.93% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 67 | | ratio | 0.045 | | matches | | 0 | "There, at the edge of vision—a flicker of movement." | | 1 | "It was the scene of a childhood accident - that much she knew." | | 2 | "They marked the very heart of the Grove - and the spot where that terrible event had occurred." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 30 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 1 | | adverbRatio | 0.03333333333333333 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 67 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 67 | | mean | 12.81 | | std | 6.22 | | cv | 0.486 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 82.59% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.5223880597014925 | | totalSentences | 67 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the same ancient oaks" | | 1 | "So many years ago, a컨teenage" | | 2 | "Exactly as it was fated." | | 3 | "Distantly, she sensed it slowing" | | 4 | "Simply the blood rushing in" | | 5 | "Then the sound of roots" | | 6 | "Systematically, precisely, the earth heaved" |
| | ratio | 0.111 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "It was well past midnight" | | 1 | "She had been here before," | | 2 | "She closed her eyes, willing" | | 3 | "It was the scene of" | | 4 | "She opened her eyes." | | 5 | "They marked the very heart" | | 6 | "She pulled the pendant from" | | 7 | "It had come to her" | | 8 | "She was destined to pass" | | 9 | "She froze, the sense of" | | 10 | "It's like the diagram, her" | | 11 | "It lay directly before Rory," | | 12 | "Her parents, her heritage, the" | | 13 | "She stepped forward and grasped" | | 14 | "She could see the Iyar" |
| | ratio | 0.238 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Heart thumping, Rory picked her" | | 1 | "It was well past midnight" | | 2 | "She had been here before," | | 3 | "The usual birdsong was absent," | | 4 | "There, at the edge of" | | 5 | "Rory whirled, heart in throat," | | 6 | "She closed her eyes, willing" | | 7 | "Rory had fled to the" | | 8 | "It was the scene of" | | 9 | "She opened her eyes." | | 10 | "They marked the very heart" | | 11 | "Rory pressed her thumb to" | | 12 | "She pulled the pendant from" | | 13 | "The chain was silver, the" | | 14 | "It had come to her" | | 15 | "The portal to Helen would" | | 16 | "She was destined to pass" | | 17 | "The air seemed to turn" | | 18 | "Stranger still was the absence" | | 19 | "Stone, smooth and carved." |
| | ratio | 0.619 | |
| 79.37% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "As if sound itself was" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 82.07% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The usual birdsong was absent, replaced by an unsettling stillness that prickled at her skin and sent her blue eyes darting this way and that." | | 1 | "The air seemed to turn viscous here, as if she'd walked into something dense and quivering." | | 2 | "Her parents, her heritage, the magic that animated her veins." | | 3 | "Hundreds of eyes opened all at once in the earth behind each smaller circle, each one glowing a piercing lemon color, their light pulseing faint and fainter." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |