Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMF9QEMGHNTV66HDDAHJMXY

Run Details

Duration:
20.2s
Cost:
$0.001190
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Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest was busy for a Tuesday night. Silas maneuvered through the crowd, a stack of menus in his hand, as he took care of an upset customer. The chrome bun of the man's feathers glinted in the neon green light cast by the sign outside, and the worn wood of the bar beneath was polished by years of hands and glasses. At a table in the corner, Rory nursed a beer, alone with her thoughts. Five years. Five years and an ocean between her and everything she left behind. The bell above the door chimed again. A woman in a black dress startled Rory from her thoughts. Aqua eyes that matched her dress scanned the room. They grew wide and came to rest on Rory. Even with the years she'd put on, Rory would recognize that face anywhere. Abigail. Rory's heart mounted the steps of its throat and chewed on her tongue. Abigail had changed. Marks of sorrow and living heavy on her face, but there was a strength there, too. The lines on her face caused by laughter and smiling that Rory had always envied. Abigail walked right to her. "Rory?" The last time she'd said Rory's name, she had been standing in the kitchen watching Rory pack a bag. "I don't know where I'm going, but I need to go." "I'll sign the apartment over to you for free." Rory signed. Rory will get the divorce hurdled. Rory would put everything in a box. Now Abigail was here, pinning her down with stingy eyes. "Tre cruzaras Santo Domingo." Rory's throat was still, silencing her. Five years on and the words made her feel like a cornered animal. "People keep telling me you got kicked out of college, left your job, your car and your girlfriend for a 30 credit hour hour class. What happened, Rory?" Rory squinted, groaning. "If you talk any louder, half of London will know my business." "Then lower your voice, Rory," Abigail hissed. "Last I checked, you were going to be a lawyer. Now you're a fucking barmaid who still can't put on a microphone for the bulla bulla." "You can't heave stones, Abby." Rory muttered. "You broke off the engagement on the day of the wedding." "I'm sorry." Abigail closed her eyes and took a heavy breath. "That was a really shitty thing to say." "I'm sorry too. It wasn't... fair to say that." A full minute passed and then another one where they drank their drinks in silence. Abigail broke first. Shifting closer, she gave Rory a soft smile. "Yumi is in the wind, yeah?" Rory shrugged dully, and nodded. "Last I heard... Clyde told me she went back out to دانشگاه فوراوت." "You got any idea where she's staying at? Or if she's even in criado? Maybe you should call her, Rory." Rory sighed and shook her head. "I wish it was that easy. This guy has this group chat and we take turns reaching out and seeing if we can get in touch with her, but..." "But then nothing?" "But then nothing. All dead ends. For now, I'm just trying to stay focused on bettering myself. I've been taking these classes and I think... maybe I can go back." Abigail smiled again and this time, it wasn't bitter. This was the way things were in the beginning, before Rory came out and broke their hearts in their own ways on account of fear. It was just seconds after seven by the time Silas came back from checking on the men in the corner. Instead of fish and chips, though they were still coming, he brought over a plate of pastelitos. "There is a difference, you know, between something that is difficult and something that is good." Rory blinked and looked down at the pastelitos. Her eyes stung. She turned to Abigail. "I'm glad you came, Abby." "I'm glad I did too." They continued to talk, and talk, until pastelitos turned to empanadas and empanadas turned to café con leche and café con leche turned to a midnight chat on a bench in the park, like old times. The air was cold and crisp but neither of them were bothered by it. Rover smiled and Abigail, well, she grinned. "Call me soon, yeah?" Sul選手 pushed her hair out of her face. "We got to pick up where we left off." Rory nodded. "I will. And Abby?" "Yeah?" "I'm sorry. For so many things. But Abby?" Abigail cleared her throat. "Yeah?" "I'm really glad we had tonight. Really glad we could talk." Abigail smiled that wide, bee-stung smiled Rory had drunk in for years. "Me too, Murdock. Chúpa mi gulo!" Rory tsked at her, but her laughter broke free. She watched as Abigail walked off into the night, feeling better than she had in a long time.
created_at"2026-05-27T10:22:18.593Z" 5/27/2026, 10:22:18 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.133
leniency0.267
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.41% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount807
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count3
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount807
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences49
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences49
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
94.25% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0.013
matches
0"\"Call me soon, yeah?\" Sul選手 pushed her hair out of her face."
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords807
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount505
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity4.36
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity8
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Tuesday1
Rory22
Abigail13
Silas2
Five3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Abigail"
3"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences35
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount807
matches(empty)
77.78% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"recognize that face"
1"smiling that Rory"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean21.81
std14.86
cv0.682
sampleLengths
063
128
249
31
447
56
630
79
815
914
1019
1128
1215
1333
1418
1519
169
1732
1818
1920
2035
213
2230
2334
2453
2520
265
2736
2821
2921
306
311
328
335
3411
3518
3627
90.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences49
matches
0"was polished"
1"were bothered"
55.07% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs92
matches
0"was still, silencing"
1"were still coming"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences75
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount506
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.025691699604743084
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.001976284584980237
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean10.76
std7.86
cv0.73
sampleLengths
09
120
234
314
42
512
67
711
89
99
1013
111
1213
133
1416
1515
165
171
1819
1911
209
212
226
237
2410
254
266
2713
2828
293
3012
317
3226
337
3411
3511
368
379
3815
393
408
416
425
4313
4420
456
4629
473
4830
499
66.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4533333333333333
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners34
77.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences43
matches
0"Instead of fish and chips,"
ratio0.023
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount6
totalSentences43
matches
0"They grew wide and came"
1"It was just seconds after"
2"Her eyes stung."
3"She turned to Abigail."
4"They continued to talk, and"
5"She watched as Abigail walked"
ratio0.14
53.02% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount35
totalSentences43
matches
0"The Raven's Nest was busy"
1"Silas maneuvered through the crowd,"
2"The chrome bun of the"
3"The bell above the door"
4"A woman in a black"
5"Aqua eyes that matched her"
6"They grew wide and came"
7"Rory's heart mounted the steps"
8"Abigail had changed."
9"The lines on her face"
10"Abigail walked right to her."
11"The last time she'd said"
12"Rory will get the divorce"
13"Rory would put everything in"
14"Rory's throat was still, silencing"
15"Rory squinted, groaning."
16"Abigail closed her eyes and"
17"A full minute passed and"
18"Abigail broke first."
19"Rory shrugged dully, and nodded."
ratio0.814
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences43
matches
0"Even with the years she'd"
1"Now Abigail was here, pinning"
ratio0.047
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Abigail hissed (hiss)"
1"Rory muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.133
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.133
88.9055%