| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory said aloud [aloud]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |
| 73.33% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1125 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 60.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1125 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 34 | | totalWords | 1133 | | ratio | 0.03 | | matches | | 0 | "Just stand in the center," | | 1 | "and wait, and don't speak to anything that speaks first." | | 2 | "Don't speak to anything that speaks first." | | 3 | "It only does that near a portal." | | 4 | "A door. The bad kind." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 1124 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.53 | | worstName | "Eva" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 6 | | Park | 1 | | South | 1 | | Circular | 1 | | October | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Rory | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "October" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 97.92% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like one of Eva's superstitions, t" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1133 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 41.96 | | std | 42.83 | | cv | 1.021 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 100 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 67 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 99 | | 8 | 91 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 89 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 107 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 93 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 155 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 48 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 5 |
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| 91.04% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "been told" | | 1 | "been told" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 94.18% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 189 | | matches | | 0 | "were standing" | | 1 | "were swaying" | | 2 | "was standing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 76 | | ratio | 0.092 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd cut through it a hundred times on the bike, the city's hum always present at the edges — a siren two miles off, the drone of the South Circular, the occasional aircraft stitching the dark overhead." | | 1 | "The clearing opened wide and gentle before her, knee-deep in wildflowers — foxglove, cornflower, things she had no name for — all of them glowing faintly in a light that came from nowhere she could find." | | 2 | "Not a voice — she would have welcomed a voice, would have known what to do with words." | | 3 | "The ripple came again from the right this time, faster, closer, and again she caught nothing at the end of it — only the suggestion of motion, the swing of grass settling back, the impression that something had ducked below the level of the blooms the instant her eyes found it." | | 4 | "Then it pulsed — a slow, deliberate beat, out of time with her heart, a heat that bloomed and faded and bloomed again like something breathing against her chest." | | 5 | "At the corner of her eye a shape stood between two oaks — tall, narrow, wrong in its proportions, a smear of deeper dark against the dark." | | 6 | "The pendant pulsed hard, once, a heat that nearly burned, and in the awful quiet that followed Rory heard it at last — close, very close, just behind her left shoulder, at the level of her ear, soft as a secret and shaped exactly like her mother's voice." |
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| 90.72% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1120 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 49 | | adverbRatio | 0.04375 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010714285714285714 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 76 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 76 | | mean | 14.91 | | std | 12.47 | | cv | 0.836 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 38 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 27 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 33 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 60.09% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.40789473684210525 | | totalSentences | 76 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 98.04% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "*Just stand in the center,*" | | 1 | "Then it pulsed — a" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 78.82% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd cut through it a" | | 1 | "She stopped at the boundary" | | 2 | "She'd worn it for weeks" | | 3 | "It had not so much" | | 4 | "She pressed her palm flat" | | 5 | "She stepped between the oaks." | | 6 | "She'd come for answers." | | 7 | "She walked to the center." | | 8 | "She turned a slow circle." | | 9 | "She'd come in through a" | | 10 | "She counted again." | | 11 | "She felt the realization arrive" | | 12 | "She turned toward it and" | | 13 | "She held to it." | | 14 | "She watched the place where" | | 15 | "It was so faint at" | | 16 | "She pressed her hand to" | | 17 | "*It only does that near" | | 18 | "She was standing in front" | | 19 | "she said, and hated how" |
| | ratio | 0.353 | |
| 55.59% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "The directions Eva had given" | | 1 | "A gap in the bracken," | | 2 | "Rory followed the left branch" | | 3 | "Richmond Park did not feel" | | 4 | "She'd cut through it a" | | 5 | "Here there was nothing." | | 6 | "The kind of nothing that" | | 7 | "She stopped at the boundary" | | 8 | "The standing stones were trees." | | 9 | "Trees were standing stones." | | 10 | "Both at once, somehow, depending" | | 11 | "Rory said aloud, because the" | | 12 | "The pendant lay cool against" | | 13 | "She'd worn it for weeks" | | 14 | "It had not so much" | | 15 | "She pressed her palm flat" | | 16 | "She stepped between the oaks." | | 17 | "That was the wrongness, the" | | 18 | "The October chill she'd carried" | | 19 | "The clearing opened wide and" |
| | ratio | 0.809 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 87.91% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The clearing opened wide and gentle before her, knee-deep in wildflowers — foxglove, cornflower, things she had no name for — all of them glowing faintly in a l…" | | 1 | "When she turned back, the flowers behind her were swaying, a long ripple bending away from her through the meadow as if something had passed through them, low a…" | | 2 | "Then it pulsed — a slow, deliberate beat, out of time with her heart, a heat that bloomed and faded and bloomed again like something breathing against her chest…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said aloud, because the silence wanted breaking" |
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| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |