| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said aloud [aloud]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |
| 77.95% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1134 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.09% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1134 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "footsteps" | | 2 | "echo" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "firmly" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "flicker" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "could feel" | | 9 | "throb" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 51 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1143 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 11 | | wordCount | 1129 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.35 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 3 | | Rory | 4 | | Park | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 25.02% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.75 | | wordCount | 1143 | | matches | | 0 | "not one voice but several, soft" | | 1 | "no longer faintly aglow but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 45.72 | | std | 37.16 | | cv | 0.813 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 110 | | 2 | 73 | | 3 | 86 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 123 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 72 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 63 | | 12 | 93 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 81 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 56 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 89 | | 19 | 33 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 82 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 24 |
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| 94.94% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone " | | 1 | "being looked" |
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| 91.89% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 185 | | matches | | 0 | "was holding" | | 1 | "were looking" | | 2 | "was pulsing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 71 | | ratio | 0.141 | | matches | | 0 | "The deer were somewhere out in the dark; she'd heard them earlier, the soft thud of hooves, a bark that carried strange and hollow across the open ground." | | 1 | "Three weeks of half-glimpsed things and dreams that left her waking with her heart slamming, and the pendant — she pressed her palm flat against her sternum, where it hung beneath her jacket — the pendant that had started all of it." | | 2 | "The air was warmer here, and it carried the heavy sweetness of flowers — and that was wrong too, because it was late autumn, and yet the clearing before her was thick with blossom." | | 3 | "She'd half hoped it would do something — warm, pulse, give her a sign that she'd come to the right place." | | 4 | "She told herself it had been a fox — they could sound like that, like babies crying, like people, everyone knew that." | | 5 | "She didn't decide to; her feet simply carried her on, deeper toward the centre of the clearing where the grass thinned into a worn circle of bare earth." | | 6 | "She snapped her head round and it was gone — but she'd seen it, a shape low and quick, pale, darting between two of the oaks." | | 7 | "She felt it first as heat — a sudden bloom of warmth against her breastbone, sharp enough that she gasped and pressed her hand to it through her jacket." | | 8 | "The words surfaced from somewhere — the note that had come with the thing, in handwriting she didn't recognise." | | 9 | "Not glimpsed at the edges of things, not teased — looked at, full and steady, by something directly ahead of her in the dark beyond the bare circle of earth." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1123 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lay cool against her" | | 1 | "angry coal-red light" |
| | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.037399821905609976 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01068566340160285 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 71 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 71 | | mean | 16.1 | | std | 11.94 | | cv | 0.742 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 34 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 39 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 28 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 26 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 51 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 58.22% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.4084507042253521 | | totalSentences | 71 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 62.42% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd left the car on" | | 1 | "She heard nothing of them" | | 2 | "Their trunks were thick as" | | 3 | "Her own footsteps went soft" | | 4 | "she said aloud, just to" | | 5 | "She walked forward into the" | | 6 | "She'd half hoped it would" | | 7 | "It did nothing at all," | | 8 | "She was perhaps twenty paces" | | 9 | "It was light and bright" | | 10 | "Her own voice was unsteady" | | 11 | "She told herself it had" | | 12 | "She told herself this firmly" | | 13 | "She kept walking." | | 14 | "She didn't decide to; her" | | 15 | "She snapped her head round" | | 16 | "Her breath came short." | | 17 | "She turned a slow circle," | | 18 | "It was the sound of" | | 19 | "She felt it first as" |
| | ratio | 0.394 | |
| 35.76% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "The directions Eva had given" | | 1 | "Richmond Park at this hour" | | 2 | "She'd left the car on" | | 3 | "The deer were somewhere out" | | 4 | "She heard nothing of them" | | 5 | "The oaks rose ahead of" | | 6 | "Their trunks were thick as" | | 7 | "Rory came for answers." | | 8 | "That was the reason she" | | 9 | "Eva swore the Grove held" | | 10 | "The change was immediate, and" | | 11 | "Her own footsteps went soft" | | 12 | "The air was warmer here," | | 13 | "Wildflowers crowded the grass in" | | 14 | "she said aloud, just to" | | 15 | "The word landed flat, swallowed" | | 16 | "She walked forward into the" | | 17 | "The flowers brushed her shins," | | 18 | "The pendant lay cool against" | | 19 | "She'd half hoped it would" |
| | ratio | 0.848 | |
| 75.76% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Now there was only the" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The deer were somewhere out in the dark; she'd heard them earlier, the soft thud of hooves, a bark that carried strange and hollow across the open ground." | | 1 | "Three weeks of half-glimpsed things and dreams that left her waking with her heart slamming, and the pendant — she pressed her palm flat against her sternum, wh…" | | 2 | "The flowers brushed her shins, releasing more of that cloying scent with every step, and she found she was holding her breath against it without quite knowing w…" | | 3 | "She told herself this firmly and did not believe it, because the laugh had been a laugh, joyful and knowing, and a fox did not laugh as if it had seen something…" | | 4 | "She turned a slow circle, scanning the ring of trees, and now they were everywhere and nowhere, these movements: a flicker to her right, a stirring of grass to …" | | 5 | "The laughter came again, and this time it was not one voice but several, soft and overlapping, rising up all around her in a delighted murmur that prickled the …" | | 6 | "The Heartstone hung from her fist, and its crimson stone was no longer faintly aglow but burning, an angry coal-red light that threw the shadows of her fingers …" | | 7 | "The words surfaced from somewhere — the note that had come with the thing, in handwriting she didn't recognise." | | 8 | "In the absolute silence that followed, Rory understood, with a cold and total certainty that had nothing to do with reason, that she was being looked at." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |