| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "He looked around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.452 | | leniency | 0.903 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.065 | |
| 82.29% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1129 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 82.29% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1129 | | totalAiIsms | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 54 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 62 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1123 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 43.90% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 754 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 2.12 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Silas | 16 | | Central | 1 | | Europe | 1 | | Daniel | 7 | | Lagavulin | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.439 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 21.91% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.781 | | wordCount | 1123 | | matches | | 0 | "no longer announced itself but" | | 1 | "not at the whisky but at the memory" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 36.23 | | std | 28.48 | | cv | 0.786 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 67 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 49 | | 7 | 78 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 58 | | 10 | 51 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 57 | | 16 | 77 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 79 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 74 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 94 | | 26 | 64 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 69 |
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| 92.27% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "been rebuilt" | | 1 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 138 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 70 | | ratio | 0.086 | | matches | | 0 | "Twenty-six years had a way of changing a man's features—softening the jaw, hollowing the cheeks, salting the hair—but it could never quite reach the gait." | | 1 | "The bar held its breath around them—the dim amber lamps, the old maps with their borders that no longer existed, the smell of spilled whisky soaked so deep into the wood it had become a kind of foundation." | | 2 | "Men like them never fully retired; they only changed the labels on their files." | | 3 | "The lamplight caught the back of his hand—a tremor there, fine and constant, the kind that no longer announced itself but simply lived in a body now." | | 4 | "But then time was never kind; it was only thorough." | | 5 | "His own hand, he noticed, was steady—the body's last small lie." |
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| 98.25% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 762 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.04199475065616798 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01837270341207349 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 70 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 70 | | mean | 16.04 | | std | 13.85 | | cv | 0.863 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 41 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 33 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 45 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 46 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 62.38% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4 | | totalSentences | 70 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "He knew the walk before" | | 1 | "he said, because it was" | | 2 | "He pushed back the hood" | | 3 | "He smiled, and the smile" | | 4 | "He had not expected the" | | 5 | "He probably did." | | 6 | "He glanced down at Silas's" | | 7 | "He looked around at the" | | 8 | "he searched for the word" | | 9 | "It stayed soft, almost gentle," | | 10 | "He finally drank, a small" | | 11 | "His own hand, he noticed," |
| | ratio | 0.261 | |
| 14.35% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 41 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "The green neon hummed its" | | 1 | "He knew the walk before" | | 2 | "This one came in with" | | 3 | "Silas set down the glass" | | 4 | "he said, because it was" | | 5 | "The man stopped beneath the" | | 6 | "He pushed back the hood" | | 7 | "Rain dripped from the hem" | | 8 | "Silas felt the years drop" | | 9 | "He smiled, and the smile" | | 10 | "The shape of it was" | | 11 | "The warmth behind it had" | | 12 | "The bar held its breath" | | 13 | "Silas had built this place" | | 14 | "He had not expected the" | | 15 | "Daniel took the stool at" | | 16 | "He probably did." | | 17 | "Men like them never fully" | | 18 | "Silas poured two measures of" | | 19 | "Daniel turned the glass in" |
| | ratio | 0.891 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 85.71% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 25 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Twenty-six years had a way of changing a man's features—softening the jaw, hollowing the cheeks, salting the hair—but it could never quite reach the gait." | | 1 | "Silas looked at the man before him and tried to find, beneath the ruined face and the shaking hand, the young officer who had quoted poetry in three languages a…" |
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| 89.29% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "He smiled, and the smile was the thing that had changed least and most all at once" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.258 | | leniency | 0.516 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.065 | |