Run: 2026-05-29-01KSSKBMEV1A2RQ9SZVTXBFG6H

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45.4s
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

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The green neon sign threw its sickly light across the wet pavement outside, and inside The Raven's Nest the rain had pushed in a thin crowd of people who didn't want to go home yet. Rory liked the bar best on nights like this, when the maps on the walls seemed to soften at their edges and the photographs—men in trench coats, women squinting against foreign suns—looked less like decoration and more like company. She had finished her last delivery an hour ago. The grease of the Golden Empress still clung faintly to her sleeves, but Silas had poured her a whisky and waved off her money, and she had let the warmth of it loosen the knot that lived between her shoulders. She didn't see the woman come in. She heard her. "God, it's biblical out there." The voice arrived before the face did, and even after seven years it landed in Rory's chest like a key turning in a long-disused lock. She set down her glass. By the door, shaking the rain from a camel coat that probably cost more than a month of Rory's wages, stood Eva. For a moment Rory thought she might be wrong. The Eva she remembered had been all elbows and cheap hair dye, a girl who laughed too loudly in libraries and stole chips off other people's plates. This woman was smoothed down, finished, lacquered like a piece of good furniture. Her hair was a careful honey colour now. Her nails were short and immaculate. But then she turned, scanning the room with that old restless hunger, and her gaze snagged on Rory and stopped. "No," Eva said. "No, that's not—Rory?" "Hi, Eva." The space between them seemed enormous and then no distance at all. Eva crossed it in three strides and pulled Rory off the stool into a hug that smelled of perfume and rain, and for a second Rory forgot the seven years entirely, forgot London and the bar and the long careful work of becoming someone new. Then Eva drew back, hands still gripping Rory's arms, and looked at her the way you look at a photograph you've found at the bottom of a drawer. "Your hair," Eva said. "You cut it all off. And it's black—you've gone and dyed it black." "It suits the city," Rory said. "It's so strange." Eva laughed, but the laugh had a brittle edge. "I keep thinking I see people from home and it's never them. And then it's you." Rory gestured at the stool beside her. Silas, who missed nothing, was already setting down a second glass without being asked, his signet ring catching the light as he poured. He gave Rory a look—an eyebrow, no more—and then drifted to the far end of the bar to leave them to it. "Who's that?" Eva murmured, sliding onto the stool, slipping out of the coat. "Silas. He owns the place. I live upstairs." "You live above a *bar*." Eva said it the way she might have said *you live in a skip*. She had not meant it unkindly, Rory thought. Eva had never meant much unkindly. She simply spoke in prices, in the unconscious arithmetic of a life that had gone the way it was supposed to. "I'm in London for work. A conference. I almost didn't come out tonight." "What is it you do now?" "Consultancy. It's boring. I'd bore you." Eva waved the question away and drank. "Tell me about you. Last anyone heard you'd dropped off the face of the earth. Your mum wouldn't say where you'd gone. Brendan looked like he'd aged ten years." The mention of her father sat in Rory's stomach like a swallowed stone. She turned her glass slowly on the bar, watching the whisky climb the sides. "I needed to disappear for a while," she said. Eva's eyes flicked, just once, to Rory's left wrist, to the small crescent scar there, white against the skin. She had been there the day Rory got it—a fall from the Ellises' garden wall, the two of them nine years old and certain they could fly. Rory saw the memory pass behind Eva's face and saw her decide not to reach for it. "It was Evan, wasn't it," Eva said quietly. "I should have said something. I knew. I think I always knew, and I just—I told myself it wasn't my business." "It wasn't anyone's business. That was the problem." "I could have made it mine." Eva pressed her lips together. "We told each other everything once. Do you remember? We used to sit on that wall and swear we'd never let the other one make a stupid decision." "We made a lot of stupid decisions on that wall." "Different kind of stupid." Eva turned her glass between her fingers. "I rang you. After you'd gone. About a hundred times. The number was dead." "I got a new phone. New everything." Rory shrugged, but it cost her. "It wasn't about you, Eva. I had to cut all of it. The whole shape of who I'd been. He knew everyone I knew. I couldn't keep one thread, or he'd have pulled the whole thing toward him." Eva nodded slowly, and Rory watched the old guilt settle over her like the rain still drying on her shoulders. Seven years. They had been the kind of close that only children can manage, the kind that assumes it will last forever precisely because it has never had to survive anything. And then it had been asked to survive something, and it hadn't, and here they were—two strangers wearing the faces of two girls who had once believed they would grow old next door to each other. "You look well, though," Eva offered. "You do. You look—steady." "I am, mostly." Rory was surprised to find it was true. "It's a small life. I deliver food. I drink Silas's whisky. I read books I never read at uni because nobody's making me. It's quiet. After everything, quiet felt like the most extravagant thing in the world." Eva looked at her for a long moment, and something moved across her smoothed-down face—a crack, Rory thought, in the lacquer. "I have a house," Eva said. "And a fiancé called Marcus who plays squash. And I cannot, for the life of me, remember the last time I felt steady." She laughed at herself, shook her head. "Listen to me. You've had a worse time than anyone and I'm sat here feeling sorry for myself." "It's not a competition," Rory said. "It never was. That's the thing nobody tells you. You can have the wall and the house and still lose the people who knew you on it." Outside the rain kept on, and the green light bled through the window onto the old maps, onto the dead spies smiling in their frames. Eva reached across the bar and laid her manicured hand over Rory's scarred one, and neither of them said anything, because there was nothing to say that the years hadn't already said for them.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.472
leniency0.944
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.056
87.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1189
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"precisely"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
78.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1189
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"eyebrow"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"scanning"
2"eyebrow"
3"stomach"
4"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences53
matches
0"was surprised"
61.99% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences53
filterMatches
0"look"
1"decide"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences72
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords6
totalWords1178
ratio0.005
matches
0"bar"
1"you live in a skip"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount773
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.85
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Golden1
Empress1
Silas2
Rory22
Eva21
London1
persons
0"Empress"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
places
0"Raven"
1"London"
globalScore0.077
windowScore0
89.02% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed enormous and then no distance at all"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1178
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"say that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean36.81
std30.51
cv0.829
sampleLengths
0123
110
25
352
483
56
62
785
817
96
1028
1152
1213
138
1467
156
1642
1727
189
1963
2029
218
2239
2310
2425
2551
2687
2710
2848
2975
3033
3159
72.16% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences53
matches
0"was smoothed"
1"being asked"
2"was supposed"
3"been asked"
4"was surprised"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs145
matches
0"was already setting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences72
ratio0.069
matches
0"Rory liked the bar best on nights like this, when the maps on the walls seemed to soften at their edges and the photographs—men in trench coats, women squinting against foreign suns—looked less like decoration and more like company."
1"He gave Rory a look—an eyebrow, no more—and then drifted to the far end of the bar to leave them to it."
2"She had been there the day Rory got it—a fall from the Ellises' garden wall, the two of them nine years old and certain they could fly."
3"And then it had been asked to survive something, and it hadn't, and here they were—two strangers wearing the faces of two girls who had once believed they would grow old next door to each other."
4"Eva looked at her for a long moment, and something moved across her smoothed-down face—a crack, Rory thought, in the lacquer."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount782
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.03836317135549872
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.011508951406649617
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences72
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences72
mean16.36
std10.88
cv0.665
sampleLengths
035
139
29
340
47
53
65
725
85
922
109
1127
1213
138
146
1520
163
173
182
1912
2045
2128
224
2313
246
2512
2616
277
2823
2922
3013
318
3219
338
346
3521
3613
376
3813
3929
4013
4114
429
4319
4427
4517
468
4721
488
4911
58.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4166666666666667
totalSentences72
uniqueOpeners30
74.07% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences45
matches
0"Then Eva drew back, hands"
ratio0.022
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences45
matches
0"She had finished her last"
1"She didn't see the woman"
2"She heard her."
3"She set down her glass."
4"Her hair was a careful"
5"Her nails were short and"
6"He gave Rory a look—an"
7"She had not meant it"
8"She simply spoke in prices,"
9"She turned her glass slowly"
10"She had been there the"
11"They had been the kind"
12"She laughed at herself, shook"
ratio0.289
26.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount39
totalSentences45
matches
0"The green neon sign threw"
1"Rory liked the bar best"
2"She had finished her last"
3"The grease of the Golden"
4"She didn't see the woman"
5"She heard her."
6"The voice arrived before the"
7"She set down her glass."
8"The Eva she remembered had"
9"This woman was smoothed down,"
10"Her hair was a careful"
11"Her nails were short and"
12"The space between them seemed"
13"Eva crossed it in three"
14"Eva laughed, but the laugh"
15"Rory gestured at the stool"
16"Silas, who missed nothing, was"
17"He gave Rory a look—an"
18"Eva murmured, sliding onto the"
19"Eva said it the way"
ratio0.867
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The green neon sign threw its sickly light across the wet pavement outside, and inside The Raven's Nest the rain had pushed in a thin crowd of people who didn't…"
1"The grease of the Golden Empress still clung faintly to her sleeves, but Silas had poured her a whisky and waved off her money, and she had let the warmth of it…"
2"The Eva she remembered had been all elbows and cheap hair dye, a girl who laughed too loudly in libraries and stole chips off other people's plates."
3"Eva crossed it in three strides and pulled Rory off the stool into a hug that smelled of perfume and rain, and for a second Rory forgot the seven years entirely…"
4"And then it had been asked to survive something, and it hadn't, and here they were—two strangers wearing the faces of two girls who had once believed they would…"
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva laughed, but the laugh had a brittle edge"
38.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Eva laughed (laugh)"
1"Eva murmured (murmur)"
2"Eva pressed (press)"
3"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.222
75.4363%