| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said aloud [aloud]" | | 1 | "it said again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.455 | | leniency | 0.909 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.364 | |
| 77.78% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1125 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 51.11% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1125 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "throb" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "lilt" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 85 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 32 | | totalWords | 1142 | | ratio | 0.028 | | matches | | 0 | "Meet me at the grove. Don't tell Silas. Bring the pendant." | | 1 | "blooming" | | 2 | "near the doorways, the bad ones," | | 3 | "That way out. Whatever happens, that way out." | | 4 | "out" | | 5 | "do not turn around," | | 6 | "Rory's" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 1111 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.72 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 7 | | Rory | 8 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 | | November | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Essex | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Tuesday" | | 5 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Essex" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 96.81% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "one object it apparently wanted" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.876 | | wordCount | 1142 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the residual warmth of a sun-baked afternoon but a living warmth, like skin" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 32.63 | | std | 28.94 | | cv | 0.887 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 35 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 78 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 72 | | 6 | 65 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 58 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 42 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 52 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 86 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 54 | | 21 | 42 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 47 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 85 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 38 | | 30 | 91 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 42 |
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| 90.44% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "been frightened" | | 1 | "been seen" | | 2 | "were blocked" |
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| 48.48% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 176 | | matches | | 0 | "were *blooming" | | 1 | "was not laughing" | | 2 | "was standing" | | 3 | "was crossing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 17 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 77 | | ratio | 0.156 | | matches | | 0 | "The directions Eva had given her made no sense in daylight and even less now, but Rory found the standing stones exactly where the text message claimed they'd be — two ancient oaks at the eastern edge of Richmond Park, their trunks twisted together at the base like clasped hands." | | 1 | "Bring the pendant.* And then nothing — three days of nothing — and so here Rory was, twenty past eleven on a Tuesday, stepping between two oaks because her oldest friend had asked her to." | | 2 | "London never went quiet; even at three in the morning there was the low oceanic hum of it, sirens and trains and the breathing of nine million people." | | 3 | "Wildflowers grew thick across it — foxglove, cornflower, things she couldn't name — and they were *blooming*, brilliant and full, in the second week of November." | | 4 | "She felt it through her shirt — a single throb of heat, there and gone, like a heartbeat that wasn't hers." | | 5 | "The pendant only did that near — Eva had been the one to tell her, *near the doorways, the bad ones,* and Rory had laughed and called her dramatic, and now she stood in a field of impossible flowers with a stone going warm against her heart and she was not laughing." | | 6 | "A field like this, warm and blooming, should have been loud with them — crickets, the whine of midges, the rustle of small living things going about their business." | | 7 | "They hadn't moved — surely they hadn't moved — but the foxgloves that had pointed away a moment ago now leaned in her direction, every bell-shaped bloom angled at her like a hundred small ears." | | 8 | "To the left, between the trees — a pale shape, tall, gone the instant she looked directly at it." | | 9 | "It used Eva's voice — pitched it perfectly, the slight Essex flatness, the upward lilt at the end — but it spoke from the wrong place, from the way *out*, and it said only her name." | | 10 | "And time moved strangely here — an hour could be a minute, a minute could be days — which meant Eva's three-day silence might have been three of *Rory's* minutes, or three of something else's, and she had walked into the mouth of it carrying the one object it apparently wanted." | | 11 | "And in the silence that followed — vast, patient, alive — the moon dimmed, just slightly, as though something enormous had passed in front of it, and the warm grass beneath her bare-pricked feet began, very gently, to close around her ankles." |
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| 90.75% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1098 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 48 | | adverbRatio | 0.04371584699453552 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017304189435336976 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 77 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 77 | | mean | 14.83 | | std | 15.07 | | cv | 1.016 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 52 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 29 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 35 |
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| 79.22% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.5064935064935064 | | totalSentences | 77 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Then it pulsed." | | 1 | "Instead the silence had a" | | 2 | "Just bark and shadow." | | 3 | "Just her eyes inventing shapes" |
| | ratio | 0.061 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked her phone." | | 1 | "she said aloud, mostly to" | | 2 | "She hadn't realized how much" | | 3 | "Her voice didn't carry." | | 4 | "It dropped at her feet" | | 5 | "She felt it through her" | | 6 | "She pressed her hand flat" | | 7 | "She turned a slow circle." | | 8 | "She fixed them in her" | | 9 | "They hadn't moved — surely" | | 10 | "She took a step back." | | 11 | "she said, and hated how" | | 12 | "It used Eva's voice —" | | 13 | "She did not turn around." | | 14 | "it said again, closer" | | 15 | "She closed her hand around" |
| | ratio | 0.242 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "The directions Eva had given" | | 1 | "She checked her phone." | | 2 | "The little crescent scar on" | | 3 | "she said aloud, mostly to" | | 4 | "The moment she crossed the" | | 5 | "That was the only way" | | 6 | "London never went quiet; even" | | 7 | "She hadn't realized how much" | | 8 | "Wildflowers grew thick across it" | | 9 | "The moon hung fat and" | | 10 | "Her voice didn't carry." | | 11 | "It dropped at her feet" | | 12 | "Rory stepped into the clearing." | | 13 | "The grass was warm." | | 14 | "The Heartstone Pendant lay cool" | | 15 | "She felt it through her" | | 16 | "She pressed her hand flat" | | 17 | "The crimson stone glowed faintly" | | 18 | "The pendant only did that" | | 19 | "She turned a slow circle." |
| | ratio | 0.712 | |
| 75.76% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "To the left, between the" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 12.99% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "She felt it through her shirt — a single throb of heat, there and gone, like a heartbeat that wasn't hers." | | 1 | "They hadn't moved — surely they hadn't moved — but the foxgloves that had pointed away a moment ago now leaned in her direction, every bell-shaped bloom angled …" | | 2 | "Every animal instinct she owned had gone rigid and screaming, and the one thing it screamed was *do not turn around,* because the thing that had said her name w…" | | 3 | "Rory's mind, the cool quick part of it that had gotten her out of worse rooms than this, did the arithmetic in half a second." | | 4 | "And time moved strangely here — an hour could be a minute, a minute could be days — which meant Eva's three-day silence might have been three of *Rory's* minute…" | | 5 | "And in the silence that followed — vast, patient, alive — the moon dimmed, just slightly, as though something enormous had passed in front of it, and the warm g…" |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 59.09% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.455 | | leniency | 0.909 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.182 | |