Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1GF6FZHJG4817WZH4M2MAQ

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Duration:
2m 18s
Cost:
$0.004275
Provider:
Minimax

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon of The Raven's Nest hummed in the wet air like a held breath. Aurora Carter had her back to the door when she heard the voice. Oh God. She knew that voice. Knew it the way you know an old scar—you forget it is there until someone presses. "Rory?" She turned, and the glass in her hand tilted just enough to slosh whisky over her knuckle. Eva Hayes stood three feet inside the doorway, the rain from the street still caught in the dark coils of her hair. Three years. Or was it four? Aurora had stopped counting at three, which was the kind of arithmetic a person only attempted when they were trying very hard not to remember. Eva looked different. That was the first thing. Her face had thinned, the roundness of her cheeks from university days sharpened into something more angular, more careful. She wore a long grey coat that was too expensive for the kind of evening that ended in Soho, and her left hand bore a ring Aurora had never seen before—a thin gold band, the kind that said something to the world without raising its voice. "Hi," Aurora said. The word came out thin and slightly wrong, as if it had traveled a long distance to reach her mouth. Eva's eyes moved across her—quickly, the way a person reads a book they have already finished. Taking inventory. The hair shorter than she remembered. The boots scuffed. The scar on the wrist, that one from the fence at the holiday cottage when they were eleven, still there, still crescent-shaped, still the most honest thing Aurora owned. "I almost didn't come in," Eva said. "I saw the sign and I thought—Silas, isn't it? I thought I was misremembering." "You weren't." Aurora gestured to the empty stool beside her, the gesture of someone who had learned to be cautious with hospitality. Eva sat. Her coat pooled around her like a held breath, and the stool creaked faintly under her, the old wood settling as it had settled a thousand times for a thousand other people who had come here to drink away something they could not name. From behind the bar, Silas Blackwood looked up. He did not say anything, but he set a second glass down on the counter without being asked, and poured two fingers of whisky into it with the practiced economy of a man who had learned long ago to mind his own business. His eyes, hazel and watchful, lingered a moment on Aurora's face. Then he limped back toward the far end of the bar, and the conversation became, by unspoken agreement, a private thing. "You cut your hair," Eva said. "I did a lot of things." The sentence landed harder than Aurora had meant it to. She took a breath. Took a sip. Let the whisky do its slow, dull work in her chest. "I tried to call," Eva said, "after Cardiff. After the thing with—" She stopped. Regrouped. "I tried." "I know. I saw the messages." "And you didn't—?" "I couldn't." The words sat between them on the bar, small and ugly and true. Eva's thumb moved across the rim of her untouched glass, round and round, the way she had used to spin a pen between her fingers in the back row of Professor Llewellyn's torts lectures, while Aurora had scribbled furious, illegible notes and pretended she wanted to be a barrister. She had been good at pretending, back then. She had pretended all the way through three years of pre-law and a year of attempting the conversion, and then one night in a flat in Cathays she had stopped pretending altogether, and the next morning she had been on a train. "You look well," Aurora said. It was a lie, but a kind one. Eva looked like a woman who slept enough and ate enough and had someone who noticed when she didn't. She looked like a woman who had been allowed to remain herself. "You don't," Eva said, softly. It should have stung, but it didn't. It was the first honest thing anyone had said to Aurora in months, and she found, to her surprise, that she was grateful. She lifted her glass and drank. "How long have you been here?" Eva asked. "In London, I mean." "Four years, give or take." "And the bar—" "Silas lets me have the flat upstairs. I work delivery for a Chinese place during the day." Aurora paused. "Golden Empress. On Lisle Street." Eva's mouth opened, then closed. She was doing the math, Aurora could see her doing it. The girl who had arrived at Cardiff with two suitcases and a copy of Blackstone's Commentaries under her arm, who had argued mock motions in the student union and drunk cheap red wine in the park and sworn, hand over heart, that she would never end up like her mother's friends—the ones who had got married young and disappeared into kitchen renovations. That girl, delivering spring rolls in the rain for fourteen pounds an hour. "I thought you'd have chambers by now," Eva said. "So did I." A long pause. Somewhere behind them, the soft tick of a dart hitting a board. The murmur of a couple arguing in low Welsh, a sound that made something in Aurora's chest clench unexpectedly. She had not heard Welsh spoken in months. Cardiff felt like a country she had once emigrated from and could not now get a visa to return to. "Why didn't you call me?" Eva said. "After. When you left." The question was a small, careful thing, like a hand extended over a ledge. "Because you would have come," Aurora said. "And I didn't want to be the reason you came." Eva's breath caught. "That's not—" She stopped. Tried again. "Rory, I would have—" "I know. That's why." The green neon outside buzzed faintly. A taxi hissed past on the wet street, throwing a wash of yellow light across the floorboards and then withdrawing. Silas, at the far end of the bar, was polishing a glass with the slow, ritual patience of a man who had spent a lifetime waiting for other people's silences to end. Eva looked down at the bar, and Aurora saw that her hand was trembling slightly against the glass. Not from the cold. Not from the drink. "I got married," Eva said. "Last spring." "Congratulations." "You don't have to say it like that." "Like what?" "Like you're handing me something that doesn't belong to you." Aurora almost laughed. The whisky had warmed her enough, or perhaps it was the absurdity of it, the way old friendships were like old houses—still standing, technically, but the roof gone, the windows dark, and you standing outside in the rain arguing with the door. "His name's Tom," Eva said. "He's a solicitor. He has a dog. He'll like you, I think." "You think." "I think he would have." Aurora set her glass down very carefully, as if the sound of it might break something that was already barely holding. "I'm glad you came in," she said. And meant it. Eva looked at her then, really looked, and whatever she saw made her eyes go bright and wet in a way she would, Aurora knew, never admit to in the morning. "I should have come sooner." "Yes," Aurora said. "You should have." It was the cruelest thing she had said in years, and it was also the truest. She felt the weight of it leave her the moment it was spoken, like a held breath finally let go, and in its place was something quieter, something that did not have a name in any language she knew. Eva reached across the bar and put her hand over Aurora's wrist—the scarred one, the honest one—and did not say anything for a long time. Outside, the rain kept falling, and the green sign kept humming, and somewhere in the back of the room a bookshelf stood slightly ajar, hiding whatever it was hiding, and the world went on, the way it always does, indifferent to the small, ragged reconciliations that happen in dim rooms, in the hours before closing, between two people who used to know each other and now must begin again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.372
leniency0.744
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
67.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1390
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count3
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"carefully"
count1
5
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
2"quickly"
3"softly"
4"carefully"
5"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
92.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1390
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"unspoken"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"unspoken"
1"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences85
matches
0"was grateful"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences85
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen69
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1382
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
60.64% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions61
wordCount1175
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity1.79
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
God1
Hayes1
Soho1
Aurora21
Silas2
Blackwood1
Regrouped1
Professor1
Llewellyn1
Cathays1
Eva20
Cardiff2
Blackstone1
Commentaries1
Welsh2
Tried1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Hayes"
4"Aurora"
5"Silas"
6"Blackwood"
7"Llewellyn"
8"Eva"
9"Blackstone"
10"Welsh"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cathays"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.606
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like a woman who slept enough and"
1"looked like a woman who had been allowed"
2"felt like a country she had once emigra"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1382
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences112
matches
0"knew that voice"
1"saw that her"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean25.59
std26.79
cv1.047
sampleLengths
016
113
222
31
470
573
623
756
821
92
1066
1183
126
136
1428
1517
166
173
182
19112
2044
215
2236
2312
245
253
2624
2791
289
293
3062
3111
3214
3317
3413
354
3658
3726
387
391
408
412
4210
4345
4417
452
465
4721
4810
4936
88.75% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences85
matches
0"being asked"
1"been allowed"
2"got married"
3"was spoken"
75.39% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs214
matches
0"were trying"
1"was doing"
2"was polishing"
3"was hiding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences112
ratio0.054
matches
0"Knew it the way you know an old scar—you forget it is there until someone presses."
1"She wore a long grey coat that was too expensive for the kind of evening that ended in Soho, and her left hand bore a ring Aurora had never seen before—a thin gold band, the kind that said something to the world without raising its voice."
2"Eva's eyes moved across her—quickly, the way a person reads a book they have already finished."
3"The girl who had arrived at Cardiff with two suitcases and a copy of Blackstone's Commentaries under her arm, who had argued mock motions in the student union and drunk cheap red wine in the park and sworn, hand over heart, that she would never end up like her mother's friends—the ones who had got married young and disappeared into kitchen renovations."
4"The whisky had warmed her enough, or perhaps it was the absurdity of it, the way old friendships were like old houses—still standing, technically, but the roof gone, the windows dark, and you standing outside in the rain arguing with the door."
5"Eva reached across the bar and put her hand over Aurora's wrist—the scarred one, the honest one—and did not say anything for a long time."
91.28% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1183
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"drunk cheap red wine"
adverbCount51
adverbRatio0.04311073541842773
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.01267962806424345
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean12.34
std13.11
cv1.062
sampleLengths
016
113
22
34
416
51
617
722
82
94
1025
113
125
1319
1446
153
1620
1716
182
196
203
2129
227
2314
242
2520
262
2744
288
2943
3011
3121
326
336
3410
354
363
3711
3814
391
402
416
423
432
4413
4549
468
4742
485
498
56.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.38392857142857145
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners43
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences65
matches
0"Then he limped back toward"
1"Somewhere behind them, the soft"
ratio0.031
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences65
matches
0"She knew that voice."
1"She turned, and the glass"
2"Her face had thinned, the"
3"She wore a long grey"
4"Her coat pooled around her"
5"He did not say anything,"
6"His eyes, hazel and watchful,"
7"She took a breath."
8"She had been good at"
9"She had pretended all the"
10"It was a lie, but"
11"She looked like a woman"
12"It should have stung, but"
13"It was the first honest"
14"She lifted her glass and"
15"She was doing the math,"
16"She had not heard Welsh"
17"It was the cruelest thing"
18"She felt the weight of"
ratio0.292
44.62% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences65
matches
0"The green neon of The"
1"Aurora Carter had her back"
2"She knew that voice."
3"She turned, and the glass"
4"Eva Hayes stood three feet"
5"Aurora had stopped counting at"
6"Eva looked different."
7"That was the first thing."
8"Her face had thinned, the"
9"She wore a long grey"
10"The word came out thin"
11"Eva's eyes moved across her—quickly,"
12"The hair shorter than she"
13"The boots scuffed."
14"The scar on the wrist,"
15"Aurora gestured to the empty"
16"Her coat pooled around her"
17"He did not say anything,"
18"His eyes, hazel and watchful,"
19"The sentence landed harder than"
ratio0.831
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
20.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"She wore a long grey coat that was too expensive for the kind of evening that ended in Soho, and her left hand bore a ring Aurora had never seen before—a thin g…"
1"Aurora gestured to the empty stool beside her, the gesture of someone who had learned to be cautious with hospitality."
2"Her coat pooled around her like a held breath, and the stool creaked faintly under her, the old wood settling as it had settled a thousand times for a thousand …"
3"The girl who had arrived at Cardiff with two suitcases and a copy of Blackstone's Commentaries under her arm, who had argued mock motions in the student union a…"
4"The murmur of a couple arguing in low Welsh, a sound that made something in Aurora's chest clench unexpectedly."
5"Silas, at the far end of the bar, was polishing a glass with the slow, ritual patience of a man who had spent a lifetime waiting for other people's silences to …"
6"Outside, the rain kept falling, and the green sign kept humming, and somewhere in the back of the room a bookshelf stood slightly ajar, hiding whatever it was h…"
93.75% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva said, softly"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.326
leniency0.651
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.7535%