Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1GY8GXSH99KNJWG1DFBH7Q

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Duration:
2m 8s
Cost:
$0.003520
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Minimax

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon of the sign bled into the wet Soho pavement like something spilled, and Aurora Carter stood across the street with her hands shoved deep into the pockets of her jacket, reading the words THE RAVEN'S NEST as though they might rearrange themselves into something she recognized less. Five years. She counted them off in the back of her mind the way she always did, automatic, a habit from the bad years, the years when counting was how she measured whether she had made it to morning. Five years since she had stood on this pavement. Five years since she had walked through that door and been called *lass* by a man with a silver ring and a limp and a quiet way of looking at her that made her feel, for the first time in London, like a person and not a piece of driftwood the city had picked up and not yet decided what to do with. She had not come back to find him. She had come back because the room above the laundromat in Hackney smelled of bleach and the radiator clanged like something trying to escape, and because there was a job waiting for her at the Golden Empress, and because Eva had said, in that particular tone of hers, *Rory, you cannot keep running from places just because Evan happened to be in them.* But that was a different reason, and not the one she would say out loud, and certainly not the one she was going to give to the man behind the bar if he asked. She pushed through the door. The Nest was smaller than she remembered, or she was larger inside, which amounted to the same thing. The same dim lighting, the same smell of old wood and spilled bitter and the faintest trace of the lemon oil Silas used on the bar top. The same walls papered with maps and black-and-white photographs, though some of the photographs had changed, and one of the maps had been replaced with a newer one of a coastline she did not recognize. The clock above the back shelf still did not work. She had always liked that about the place. It meant nothing in here was in a hurry. He was at the far end of the bar, not the near end, and he was polishing a glass with the kind of attention that meant his mind was somewhere else entirely. His beard was the same, neat, threaded with grey, but the grey had spread up into the auburn of his hair, and the hair itself had thinned at the temples in a way that made her think of her father, which was a thought she did not want just then. His shoulders were narrower. Or perhaps it was the coat he was wearing, a dark wool coat, indoors, which he had not used to do. He used to wear the sleeves rolled up, the silver of his signet ring catching the light when he poured. She stepped up to the bar and set her palms flat on the wood and did not say a word. Silas Blackwood looked up. His hands went still on the glass. For a long moment he simply looked at her, the way he had once told her he used to look at doors in Prague, as if each one might be the last thing he ever saw, and he wanted to be sure of it before it closed. Then he set the glass down and said, very quietly, "Well. Rory." "You remember." "I remember everything, lass. It's the job." He had not quite smiled, but something in the line of his mouth had shifted, something tired, something glad. "I heard you'd gone south. I heard a few things after that. I chose not to ask which of them were true." "They weren't any of them true. That was the trick of it." She heard her own voice come out flat and was annoyed by it. She had wanted to sound like the girl he had known, the one who could make him laugh without trying. "They were all of them true. That was the other trick." He nodded as if this made perfect sense, and perhaps to him it did. He reached beneath the bar and produced a bottle of something amber and a glass and poured two measures without asking, sliding one across to her. She looked at it. She did not pick it up. "I came back for the room," she said. "Eva said you might still have it." "The room's not been let in five years, Rory." "I know. She said that too." "I wasn't going to let it." He lifted his own glass, considered it, did not drink. "I kept telling myself I'd heard wrong about Cardiff. That you'd come through that door any Tuesday and tell me I was being a sentimental old fool." "I would have." "You would have. And you'd have been right." He did drink then, a small one, and set the glass down with the careful precision of a man who had spent his life setting things down carefully. "You look like your mother." The words landed somewhere in her chest like a stone dropped into water. "You met her." "Once. Your father brought her to a thing in Kensington. Years ago. You were a child. You had a scrape on your wrist you were very proud of." She looked down at her left wrist. The crescent scar was still there, faded to a pale comma, but still there. She did not remember being proud of it. She remembered, suddenly, a man in a dark coat at a long table, who had looked at her bandaged hand and said, *That'll be a story, in time.* She had not known then that he meant it. "You were at that dinner," she said. "You were at that dinner in Kensington." "I was. I was a great many dinners in those days. Fewer now." He gestured around the empty bar with a kind of rueful grace, the silver ring catching what little light there was. "I made this place quieter than it used to be. That was on purpose, for a while. Then it became the only way I knew how to keep it." She thought of all the things she might say. She thought of *I'm sorry I disappeared.* She thought of *I would have come sooner but I couldn't find the road back.* She thought of *I have been so tired, Silas, I have been so tired of being the girl who runs.* She said none of them. "You kept the clock stopped," she said instead. "I did." "Why?" He looked at her for a long moment, and the tiredness in his face was the tiredness of a man who had been waiting for a long time and had only just now realized he had been waiting at all. "Because it was the only hour I didn't want to see end." Outside, the green neon hummed on, indifferent, patient. Aurora picked up the glass at last, and they drank together in the quiet of the old maps, two people who had not been those people for a long time, learning, slowly, whether they might still be anyone to each other at all.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
40.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He gestured around [around]"
1"she said instead [instead]"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.36
leniency0.72
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.16
79.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1225
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"carefully"
2"suddenly"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1225
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"the last thing"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"the last thing"
2"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences47
matches(empty)
51.67% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences47
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"think"
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences63
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen97
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords55
totalWords1225
ratio0.045
matches
0"lass"
1"Rory, you cannot keep running from places just because Evan happened to be in them."
2"That'll be a story, in time."
3"I'm sorry I disappeared."
4"I would have come sooner but I couldn't find the road back."
5"I have been so tired, Silas, I have been so tired of being the girl who runs."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount987
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.3
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Five"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Aurora2
Carter1
London1
Hackney1
Golden1
Empress1
Eva1
Evan1
Nest1
Silas3
Blackwood1
Prague1
Five3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Eva"
3"Evan"
4"Silas"
5"Blackwood"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Golden"
3"Prague"
globalScore1
windowScore1
85.90% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences39
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite smiled, but something in the line of his mouth had shifted, something tired, something glad"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.816
wordCount1225
matches
0"not quite smiled, but something in the line of his mouth had shifted, something ti"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean40.83
std35.23
cv0.863
sampleLengths
050
1111
2105
35
4107
5127
620
758
812
92
1048
1156
1250
1315
149
156
1643
173
1841
1916
2028
2166
2214
2363
2456
258
262
271
2852
2951
82.87% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences47
matches
0"been called"
1"been replaced"
2"was annoyed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs162
matches
0"was polishing"
1"was wearing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences63
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount989
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.033367037411526794
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.008088978766430738
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences63
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences63
mean19.44
std17.75
cv0.913
sampleLengths
050
12
237
39
463
58
697
75
818
927
1035
1110
128
139
1432
1550
164
1721
1820
1920
204
217
2247
2312
242
2526
2622
2725
2820
2911
3014
3126
324
336
348
357
369
376
3816
3927
403
4136
425
4313
443
4528
467
4714
488
4937
25.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.30158730158730157
totalSentences63
uniqueOpeners19
75.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences44
matches
0"Then he set the glass"
ratio0.023
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences44
matches
0"She counted them off in"
1"She had not come back"
2"She had come back because"
3"She pushed through the door."
4"She had always liked that"
5"It meant nothing in here"
6"He was at the far"
7"His beard was the same,"
8"His shoulders were narrower."
9"He used to wear the"
10"She stepped up to the"
11"His hands went still on"
12"He had not quite smiled,"
13"She heard her own voice"
14"She had wanted to sound"
15"He nodded as if this"
16"He reached beneath the bar"
17"She looked at it."
18"She did not pick it"
19"He lifted his own glass,"
ratio0.659
28.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount38
totalSentences44
matches
0"The green neon of the"
1"She counted them off in"
2"She had not come back"
3"She had come back because"
4"She pushed through the door."
5"The Nest was smaller than"
6"The same dim lighting, the"
7"The same walls papered with"
8"The clock above the back"
9"She had always liked that"
10"It meant nothing in here"
11"He was at the far"
12"His beard was the same,"
13"His shoulders were narrower."
14"He used to wear the"
15"She stepped up to the"
16"Silas Blackwood looked up."
17"His hands went still on"
18"He had not quite smiled,"
19"She heard her own voice"
ratio0.864
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The green neon of the sign bled into the wet Soho pavement like something spilled, and Aurora Carter stood across the street with her hands shoved deep into the…"
1"Five years since she had walked through that door and been called *lass* by a man with a silver ring and a limp and a quiet way of looking at her that made her …"
2"She had come back because the room above the laundromat in Hackney smelled of bleach and the radiator clanged like something trying to escape, and because there…"
3"He was at the far end of the bar, not the near end, and he was polishing a glass with the kind of attention that meant his mind was somewhere else entirely."
4"His beard was the same, neat, threaded with grey, but the grey had spread up into the auburn of his hair, and the hair itself had thinned at the temples in a wa…"
5"She remembered, suddenly, a man in a dark coat at a long table, who had looked at her bandaged hand and said, *That'll be a story, in time.* She had not known t…"
6"She thought of *I'm sorry I disappeared.* She thought of *I would have come sooner but I couldn't find the road back.* She thought of *I have been so tired, Sil…"
7"He looked at her for a long moment, and the tiredness in his face was the tiredness of a man who had been waiting for a long time and had only just now realized…"
8"Aurora picked up the glass at last, and they drank together in the quiet of the old maps, two people who had not been those people for a long time, learning, sl…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he set (set)"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.16
leniency0.32
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.08
78.5662%