| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "a delivery van parked illegally [illegally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |
| 80.76% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1819 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "gently" | | 3 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 64.27% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1819 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "down her spine" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "weight" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "let out a breath" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 133 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 133 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 133 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 68 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 10 | | markdownWords | 53 | | totalWords | 1829 | | ratio | 0.029 | | matches | | 0 | "Lock the door tonight, Laila," | | 1 | "One hour." | | 2 | "You're being stupid," | | 3 | "You're tired. It's late. You're alone in a park and your eyes are playing tricks." | | 4 | "Aurora," | | 5 | "Do not answer if you are called. Do not give your name back to the wood." | | 6 | "Rory." | | 7 | "shifted," | | 8 | "outside," | | 9 | "Richmond Park, the path, the gate, the road" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 1804 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 0.44 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Silas | 3 | | Eva | 4 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Rory | 8 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Isolde | 1 | | September | 1 | | Ovid | 1 | | London | 1 | | Softer | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Carter | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Silas" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Empress" | | 4 | "Softer" | | 5 | "Yu-Fei" | | 6 | "Carter" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 58.54% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed closer here than it had any right to be" | | 1 | "not quite sight, the part that lived in the back of the skull, and it was there, and then it was not" | | 2 | "sounded like hers" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.547 | | wordCount | 1829 | | matches | | 0 | "not all at once, but in slow, terrible pieces, each one undeniable" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "understanding that some" | | 1 | "know that looking" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 46.9 | | std | 32.96 | | cv | 0.703 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 109 | | 2 | 45 | | 3 | 106 | | 4 | 59 | | 5 | 37 | | 6 | 125 | | 7 | 33 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 46 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 84 | | 16 | 47 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 68 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 74 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 56 | | 25 | 46 | | 26 | 34 | | 27 | 49 | | 28 | 72 | | 29 | 80 | | 30 | 102 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 63 | | 33 | 72 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 95 | | 37 | 66 | | 38 | 28 |
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| 89.43% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "been gone" | | 1 | "been replaced" | | 2 | "been told" | | 3 | "being stepped" | | 4 | "been dragged" | | 5 | "are called" |
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| 54.01% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 274 | | matches | | 0 | "was actually going" | | 1 | "were still waiting" | | 2 | "were lying" | | 3 | "was trying" | | 4 | "was already beginning" | | 5 | "was deciding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 133 | | ratio | 0.068 | | matches | | 0 | "They crowded the clearing in impossible profusion — pale moonwort and bloodroot, dog roses blooming beside frost-hardy gentian, all of it luminous under a moon that seemed closer here than it had any right to be." | | 1 | "Not quiet — silent." | | 2 | "The wildflowers thinned at the center, giving way to a small ring of bare earth the color of old iron, and in that ring — nothing." | | 3 | "His coat had been the wrong color in the way that a word is the wrong color when you read it in a dream — you can see it, you can name it, but the name doesn't fit the thing." | | 4 | "But in the half-second before her mind overruled her eyes, she had seen it — a hundred pale blooms swiveling on their stems to track her movement, like a small attentive audience." | | 5 | "Not rose, not set — *shifted,* sliding sideways across the sky in a way that made her stomach drop, and when she looked back down the grove was subtly different." | | 6 | "Aware of the small sounds her body made — the creak of her jacket, the soft click of her teeth, the slow thump of her pulse in the hollow of her throat where the pendant lay." | | 7 | "From somewhere far away — far in the way that meant *outside,* the way that meant *Richmond Park, the path, the gate, the road* — she heard a fox bark." | | 8 | "The realization arrived the way dawn arrives when you have been awake all night — not all at once, but in slow, terrible pieces, each one undeniable." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1776 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "beside frost-hardy gentian," |
| | adverbCount | 57 | | adverbRatio | 0.03209459459459459 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00731981981981982 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 133 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 133 | | mean | 13.75 | | std | 13.02 | | cv | 0.947 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 36 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 30 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 34 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 40 | | 30 | 32 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 32 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 40 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 32.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 32 | | diversityRatio | 0.3383458646616541 | | totalSentences | 133 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the wind, which had" | | 1 | "Just darkness and the smell" | | 2 | "Of course no signal." | | 3 | "Somewhere in the bruised trees," |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 81.95% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "They crowded the clearing in" | | 1 | "She stepped between the ancient" | | 2 | "She lifted the Heartstone pendant" | | 3 | "She had told Silas she'd" | | 4 | "She'd told Eva she'd text" | | 5 | "She had told neither of" | | 6 | "She uncurled her fingers from" | | 7 | "She had come because of" | | 8 | "He had been polite." | | 9 | "He had been very polite." | | 10 | "His coat had been the" | | 11 | "She had said no, because" | | 12 | "She took a step into" | | 13 | "She let out a breath" | | 14 | "She pulled her phone out." | | 15 | "She put it back." | | 16 | "She was almost certain of" | | 17 | "She did not look directly" | | 18 | "She had read enough, been" | | 19 | "She kept her gaze on" |
| | ratio | 0.345 | |
| 48.50% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 93 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory told herself she would" | | 1 | "The wildflowers disagreed." | | 2 | "They crowded the clearing in" | | 3 | "She stepped between the ancient" | | 4 | "The owls had stopped." | | 5 | "The foxes had stopped." | | 6 | "She lifted the Heartstone pendant" | | 7 | "The crimson gem caught the" | | 8 | "Whatever she had come looking" | | 9 | "She had told Silas she'd" | | 10 | "She'd told Eva she'd text" | | 11 | "She had told neither of" | | 12 | "Eva would worry in the" | | 13 | "Silas would simply lock the" | | 14 | "The grove opened before her" | | 15 | "The wildflowers thinned at the" | | 16 | "Rory checked the pendant again." | | 17 | "She uncurled her fingers from" | | 18 | "She had come because of" | | 19 | "He had been polite." |
| | ratio | 0.823 | |
| 44.25% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "To her left this time," |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 50.26% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "They crowded the clearing in impossible profusion — pale moonwort and bloodroot, dog roses blooming beside frost-hardy gentian, all of it luminous under a moon …" | | 1 | "She had told neither of them where she was actually going, because explaining a Fae-touched pocket grove to people who thought the supernatural started and ende…" | | 2 | "Just darkness and the smell of green things and the faintest undercurrent of something older, something that smelled the way stone smells after lightning." | | 3 | "She let out a breath that came out more ragged than she meant it to, and the breath hung in the air in a thin white line, which was wrong because it was Septemb…" | | 4 | "The silver birches she remembered from the path had been replaced by something older, something with bark the color of a bruise and branches that hung too low, …" | | 5 | "The wildflowers she had passed were lying flat now, in a trail that pointed back the way she had come, as if something heavy had been dragged through them." | | 6 | "From somewhere far away — far in the way that meant *outside,* the way that meant *Richmond Park, the path, the gate, the road* — she heard a fox bark." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |