| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 70.82% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1542 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 74.06% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1542 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "grave" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "furrowed" | | 4 | "resolved" | | 5 | "could feel" | | 6 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 114 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 67.67% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 114 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "appeared to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "seemed to" | | 3 | "began to" | | 4 | "appear to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 114 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 89 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1550 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 12 | | wordCount | 1550 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.19 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Caerphilly | 1 | | Roman | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | October | 1 | | England | 1 | | Aurora | 3 | | Carter | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Roman" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Carter" |
| | places | | 0 | "Caerphilly" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "October" | | 4 | "England" | | 5 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite a color, a shape that was not quite a shape, and then it was gone, and the wildflowers at that spot were bent, all of them leaning the same way, as if something heavy had passed" | | 1 | "not quite a shape, and then it was gone, and the wildflowers at that spot were bent, all of them leaning the same way, as if something heavy had passed" |
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| 70.97% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.29 | | wordCount | 1550 | | matches | | 0 | "not a gap but a place" | | 1 | "not hers but might, soon, have to be" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 45.59 | | std | 44.94 | | cv | 0.986 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 92 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 134 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 126 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 105 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 112 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 73 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 82 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 98 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 84 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 98 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 56 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 104 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 78 | | 31 | 69 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 89 |
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| 86.80% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "were arranged" | | 1 | "was furrowed" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "been used" | | 4 | "were lit" | | 5 | "gets noticed" | | 6 | "being noticed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 240 | | matches | | 0 | "were exhaling" | | 1 | "was watching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 114 | | ratio | 0.053 | | matches | | 0 | "The park had been ordinary enough — the pale paths, the distant lowing of deer, the sodium lights of the perimeter road picking out the silhouettes of bare-branched oaks." | | 1 | "Wildflowers grew in it — white things, star-shaped, the kind that did not bloom in October, that did not bloom in England at all — and they were luminous in a way that had nothing to do with moonlight, because there was no moon." | | 2 | "That was the first thing she had tried to tell herself, when she first pushed through into the clearing an hour ago — or ten minutes ago, or two days ago, she could not be sure." | | 3 | "There — at the edge of the clearing, where the wildflowers thinned to bare earth, something moved." | | 4 | "The instinct to call out — hello, is someone there, who are you — was a bright, hot thing in her chest, and she swallowed it." | | 5 | "The crimson light ran down the silver chain and pooled in the hollow of her throat, and for a moment she could see the clearing as if it were lit by a small, fierce sun — the white flowers, the bent stalks, the oaks with their patient, almost-faces, the standing stones throwing long black shadows that did not point in the same direction as her own." |
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| 99.93% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1547 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 62 | | adverbRatio | 0.0400775694893342 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005817711700064641 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 114 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 114 | | mean | 13.6 | | std | 14.32 | | cv | 1.053 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 44 | | 23 | 33 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 43 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 36 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 30 |
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| 25.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 33 | | diversityRatio | 0.23684210526315788 | | totalSentences | 114 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the slow, patient pulse" | | 1 | "More the suggestion of a" | | 2 | "Somewhere to her left, just" | | 3 | "Then the light dimmed." | | 4 | "Somewhere between the two, something" |
| | ratio | 0.048 | |
| 31.54% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "She had the crescent scar" | | 1 | "She had not meant to" | | 2 | "She had been cutting through" | | 3 | "She had stopped on the" | | 4 | "She had stepped through." | | 5 | "She could not hear the" | | 6 | "She could not hear anything" | | 7 | "She watched it for a" | | 8 | "It did not move again." | | 9 | "She was not sure it" | | 10 | "She touched it with two" | | 11 | "It pulsed against her finger" | | 12 | "She walked on." | | 13 | "They were not in a" | | 14 | "They were in a shape." | | 15 | "It had a kind of" | | 16 | "Their bark was furrowed in" | | 17 | "She stopped walking." | | 18 | "She had been hearing something" | | 19 | "She stood very still and" |
| | ratio | 0.471 | |
| 32.12% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 89 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose out" | | 1 | "Aurora counted them as she" | | 2 | "A ninth, half-buried, its grain" | | 3 | "She had the crescent scar" | | 4 | "The necklace hung against her" | | 5 | "She had not meant to" | | 6 | "She had been cutting through" | | 7 | "She had stopped on the" | | 8 | "The park had been ordinary" | | 9 | "The wrong gap." | | 10 | "The gap that was not" | | 11 | "She had stepped through." | | 12 | "She could not hear the" | | 13 | "She could not hear anything" | | 14 | "The clearing opened around her" | | 15 | "Wildflowers grew in it —" | | 16 | "The sky above the grove" | | 17 | "She watched it for a" | | 18 | "It did not move again." | | 19 | "She was not sure it" |
| | ratio | 0.856 | |
| 48.08% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers grew in it — white things, star-shaped, the kind that did not bloom in October, that did not bloom in England at all — and they were luminous in a w…" | | 1 | "It pulsed against her finger like a second heartbeat, slower than her own, and she thought, with the clear, distant part of her mind that was still Aurora Carte…" | | 2 | "A breath that was not her own, because her own was short and shallow and the other was long, and slow, and seemed to come from several directions at once." | | 3 | "She saw the suggestion of a shoulder, a color that was not quite a color, a shape that was not quite a shape, and then it was gone, and the wildflowers at that …" | | 4 | "Stupid was not a thing she was going to be, not here, not with the pendant warming and cooling against her breastbone in a rhythm that was not hers." | | 5 | "The crimson light ran down the silver chain and pooled in the hollow of her throat, and for a moment she could see the clearing as if it were lit by a small, fi…" | | 6 | "The air, which had been still, was now moving in a thin, deliberate current against the back of her neck, as if something behind her were exhaling." | | 7 | "The wildflowers thinned and thickened under her boots in a pattern that felt, against all reason, intentional." | | 8 | "Somewhere between the two, something was watching her with a patience that was older than the oaks and more attentive than any of them." | | 9 | "She turned, very slowly, the way you turn in a house you do not believe is empty, and the standing stones rose around her in their nameless shape, and the wildf…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |