| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said aloud [aloud]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |
| 64.59% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1271 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 9 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "truly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "deliberately" | | 3 | "very" | | 4 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 33.12% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1271 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "could feel" | | 2 | "unsettled" | | 3 | "echo" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "throb" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "gloom" | | 11 | "loomed" | | 12 | "resolved" | | 13 | "sense of" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 55 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 15 | | totalWords | 1281 | | ratio | 0.012 | | matches | | 0 | "Pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal." | | 1 | "toward" | | 2 | "that's the way out" | | 3 | "pleased" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 1264 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.4 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 5 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Eva | 2 | | November | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Silas | 2 | | Evan | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Hel" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 43.87% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.561 | | wordCount | 1281 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the slow drowsy warmth that had woken her at home, but a sharp, insistent throb, hot enough" | | 1 | "not away, she realized, but *toward* the gap in the stones, as if the air itself were be" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 38.82 | | std | 32.94 | | cv | 0.849 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 99 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 96 | | 4 | 65 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 102 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 51 | | 14 | 69 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 83 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 87 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 76 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 76 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 60 | | 27 | 53 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 60 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 28 |
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| 85.77% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "been told" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "being drawn" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 96.37% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 193 | | matches | | 0 | "was still refusing" | | 1 | "was looking" | | 2 | "was waiting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 75 | | ratio | 0.133 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant had begun pulsing two nights ago — a slow, arrhythmic warmth against her sternum that woke her from sleep, that made her press her palm flat to her chest as though she could feel a second heart beating beneath her own." | | 1 | "There was no echo, no carrying of sound across the open space — the words simply left her mouth and vanished, as though the air here had texture, density, a willingness to absorb whatever she gave it." | | 2 | "Richmond Park was never truly quiet, not even in the small hours — there was always the distant grumble of the city, the A-road hum, the occasional cry of a fox or the shuffle of deer through bracken." | | 3 | "She caught it only at the edge of her vision, the way you catch a floater in your eye, and when she snapped her gaze directly to it there was nothing — only the bark, the moonlight, the patient dark between." | | 4 | "She didn't see them go dark; she simply registered, between one heartbeat and the next, that the light was gone, and the grove had sunk into a blue-black gloom in which the standing stones loomed like the pillars of a roofless church." | | 5 | "Her breath came faster now, ragged little clouds, and each one hung and lingered and then drifted — not away, she realized, but *toward* the gap in the stones, as if the air itself were being drawn somewhere, inhaled by the dark." | | 6 | "It was the faintest sound — a long, low expulsion, more felt than heard, vibrating up through the soles of her boots." | | 7 | "It simply resolved, the way an image resolves when your eyes finally make sense of it — a tall narrow column of deeper black, head bowed beneath the lintel of stone, patient, attentive, *pleased*." | | 8 | "There was no one to hear it, and some instinct older than language told her that screaming was exactly what the thing in the gap was waiting for — the first gift she would give it, freely, the sound it would draw down into the dark along with her breath and her warmth and everything else." | | 9 | "And then, somewhere in the dark beyond the stones, something began — slowly, carefully, deliberately — to walk toward her across grass that made no sound at all." |
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| 93.93% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1257 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 59 | | adverbRatio | 0.046937151949085126 | | lyAdverbCount | 23 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018297533810660304 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 75 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 75 | | mean | 17.08 | | std | 14.69 | | cv | 0.86 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 33 | | 3 | 44 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 38 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 31 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 41 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 37 | | 43 | 42 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 55.11% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.38666666666666666 | | totalSentences | 75 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 68.48% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "She was certain of that" | | 1 | "She'd come for answers." | | 2 | "They glowed faintly from within," | | 3 | "She crouched and touched one." | | 4 | "It was warm." | | 5 | "she said aloud, and her" | | 6 | "It was the silence she" | | 7 | "She was not alone." | | 8 | "She straightened slowly, deliberately, and" | | 9 | "Her breath ghosted white in" | | 10 | "She caught it only at" | | 11 | "It was different now." | | 12 | "She backed up a step," | | 13 | "She didn't see them go" | | 14 | "Her breath came faster now," | | 15 | "It was the faintest sound" | | 16 | "She knew the oaks had" | | 17 | "She'd marked the one with" | | 18 | "It did not step forward." | | 19 | "It did not need to." |
| | ratio | 0.379 | |
| 73.64% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones were not" | | 1 | "She was certain of that" | | 2 | "The oaks marking the grove's" | | 3 | "She'd come for answers." | | 4 | "That was what she kept" | | 5 | "The pendant had begun pulsing" | | 6 | "Silas had no explanation." | | 7 | "Eva, infuriatingly, had only gone" | | 8 | "The flowers, at least, were" | | 9 | "Wildflowers bloomed in defiance of" | | 10 | "They glowed faintly from within," | | 11 | "She crouched and touched one." | | 12 | "It was warm." | | 13 | "she said aloud, and her" | | 14 | "The grove swallowed it." | | 15 | "The wildflowers nodded on a" | | 16 | "It was the silence she" | | 17 | "Richmond Park was never truly" | | 18 | "She was not alone." | | 19 | "The certainty arrived without evidence," |
| | ratio | 0.773 | |
| 75.76% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Now they seemed to lean" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks marking the grove's boundary had stood in a loose circle the last time Eva brought her here, gnarled and patient, their roots breaking the turf like th…" | | 1 | "Now they seemed to lean inward, crowding the gap she'd slipped through, and when she glanced back over her shoulder the moonlight pooled strangely between their…" | | 2 | "The pendant had begun pulsing two nights ago — a slow, arrhythmic warmth against her sternum that woke her from sleep, that made her press her palm flat to her …" | | 3 | "Wildflowers bloomed in defiance of the November cold, foxglove and meadowsweet and others she had no names for, their petals open and luminous in a way that had…" | | 4 | "Not even her own pulse in her ears, which should have been hammering, because some animal part of her had already understood what the rest of her was still refu…" | | 5 | "Not the slow drowsy warmth that had woken her at home, but a sharp, insistent throb, hot enough that she pressed her hand over it through her jumper and felt th…" | | 6 | "Her breath came faster now, ragged little clouds, and each one hung and lingered and then drifted — not away, she realized, but *toward* the gap in the stones, …" | | 7 | "She'd marked the one with the lightning scar, told herself *that's the way out*, the small careful habit of a woman who had once needed to know all the exits in…" | | 8 | "The Heartstone burned against her chest like a brand, pulsing in time with that slow enormous breathing, and Rory understood, with the cold clarity that had car…" | | 9 | "And then, somewhere in the dark beyond the stones, something began — slowly, carefully, deliberately — to walk toward her across grass that made no sound at all…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |