Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1JA9WCZ537WHQ9Y3HG8D71

Run Details

Duration:
2m 25s
Cost:
$0.003560
Provider:
Minimax

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon of the Raven's Nest bled into the wet pavement like something alive and unwell. Aurora Carter had been watching it for the better part of an hour, her chin propped on her palm, a half-finished pint of Black Sheep sweating a ring onto the bar in front of her. Tuesday nights were quiet. Tuesdays were hers. She liked the bar best when it was nearly empty. The old maps and the black-and-white photographs on the walls had time to breathe then, the murmuring faces in the frames tilting toward her as if to ask what she was doing down here again instead of sleeping in the flat upstairs. Some nights she told them. Some nights she lied. Most nights she simply sat with the silence and let it have its way with her. Silas was in his usual corner, polishing a glass with a cloth so threadbare it was more suggestion than fabric. His limp was worse tonight, the left knee clicking audibly as he shifted his weight. He didn't look at her when he spoke. "You're brooding." "I'm thinking." "Same thing, with worse posture." He set the glass down and reached for another. "You'll miss the delivery window if you sit there much longer." "It's half nine. I've got an hour." "Yu-Fei doesn't pay you to sit in my bar and feel things." Aurora smiled at her pint. "Yu-Fei pays me precisely nothing to feel things. That's a private enterprise." Silas grunted, the closest he ever came to laughing, and turned away to rearrange a shelf of bottles that needed no rearranging. Aurora let her gaze drift back to the door, to the window, to the slick of rain crawling down the pane. Soho on a Tuesday in late autumn. The city wearing its oldest mask, the one that pretended to be tired. That was when she saw her. Across the street, under the awning of the closed chemist's, a woman stood with her collar turned up and her phone in her hand, the screen light catching the sharp angles of her face. She was looking at the green sign as if trying to place it, the way you might look at a word you'd once known in a language you no longer spoke. Then she looked up, not at Aurora but at the building above the bar, at the small dark window of the flat where Aurora slept, and something in her expression shifted. Aurora's hand tightened around her glass. She knew that face. She would have known it anywhere, in any weather, at any hour. The cheekbones were the same. The stubborn set of the mouth. But the hair was different, cropped close and professionally blond, and the clothes were the clothes of a woman who had stopped being a girl a long time ago. Sian Llewellyn pushed open the door of the Raven's Nest and stepped inside. The little bell above the frame gave its two-note chime, and Aurora felt it travel through her like a crack in ice. She didn't move. She watched Sian pause in the doorway to let her eyes adjust, watched her take in the dimness, the long mahogany bar, the pressed-tin ceiling, the photographs of men in dead wars. Watched her find Aurora, and stop. For a long, awful second, neither of them spoke. Then Sian walked forward, her heels sharp on the warped floorboards, and slid onto the stool two seats down, leaving a careful gap between them as if the wood between them were a small, respectable country. "Rory," she said. The name was a relic. Aurora hadn't heard anyone say it like that in years, with that particular Cardiff lilt turning the single syllable into something almost tender. Her mother said it that way. Eva said it. Brendan, when he was feeling generous, which was not often. "Aurora, now, actually." She said it before she could stop herself, and then she wanted to take it back. The words sounded like a defense. Sian was not attacking. "Of course," Sian said. "I heard you'd changed it." "How did you hear?" Sian's mouth twitched. "Mae Hughes still talks to your mother. Mae talks to everyone. It's her gift and her curse." She set her phone face-down on the bar, very precisely, as if it might otherwise leap up and betray her. "I came down for a meeting at the Inns of Court. I wasn't going to look you up." "But you did." "I was going to walk past. And then I saw the sign, and I thought, that's a funny name for a bar in Soho. And then I looked up, and I saw your window. The one with the geranium box." "I haven't had geraniums in two years." "I know. I came up anyway." Sian signaled Silas, who approached with the particular caution of a man who had learned to read rooms the way other men read newspapers. "A gin and tonic, please. Hendrick's, if you have it." Silas produced a bottle without comment and began to pour. Aurora watched the bubbles rise. "You look well," she said, and the lie was a kindness. Sian laughed, a short dry sound. "I look like what I am. A junior partner at a chambers that bills by the quarter hour. I have two hundred and twelve unread emails and a meeting at nine tomorrow that I will spend the entire night preparing for, and I am sitting in a bar in Soho because a girl I used to know once told me she dreamed of living above one." "That was a long time ago." "It was." Silas set the drink in front of Sian and withdrew. The two women sat with the glass between them, the gin catching the low light, and Aurora felt the years settle in the silence like sediment in a river. She had not thought of Sian in a very long time. She had made a point of not thinking of Sian. Sian had been the one who stayed. Sian had been the one who went on to law school, who clerked, who was called to the Bar, who did all the things Aurora had been supposed to do and hadn't. Sian had been the one who wrote, twice, the year Aurora left Cardiff, and who received nothing back, and who had, in the end, stopped writing. "I'm sorry," Aurora said. She didn't know what she was apologizing for. All of it, maybe. The silence. The years. The window without geraniums. Sian lifted the glass and drank. "What for?" "For not answering. For any of it." "You're not obliged to answer anyone." Sian's voice was careful, measured, the voice of a woman who had learned to be careful with her words because her words were currency. "You left. You had your reasons." "I had my reasons." "I know." Sian set the glass down. "Mae told me, eventually. About Evan. About what he did." She paused. "I'm sorry I didn't see it." "You weren't supposed to see it. No one was. That was sort of the point." "I knew something was wrong. I chose not to know. That's not the same as not knowing, Rory— Aurora." Sian corrected herself, but the old name still hung in the air between them like smoke. "I chose the version of you that was convenient to me. The one who was going to come back in September and be brilliant, and make us all look bad in tutorials, and be my friend. I chose that one because she was easier to love." Aurora stared at her. The bar was very quiet. Somewhere in the back, a clock ticked with the patience of a thing that had outlived its usefulness. "You didn't choose me," she said, slowly. "I left." "I could have looked for you." "I didn't want to be looked for." "I know." Sian's voice cracked, almost imperceptibly, a hairline fracture in the polished surface. "I know that now. I didn't know it then. I thought you were being dramatic. I thought you'd come home." The word *home* did something to Aurora's chest. She reached, without thinking, for the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, traced it once with her thumb, and let her hand fall. "Silsoe," Sian said, after a while. "You work in a bar called the Raven's Nest, you deliver food for a Chinese restaurant, and you live in a flat with a geranium box that has no geraniums in it." She was not mocking. She was reciting, as if trying to fit the pieces of Aurora into a shape she recognized. "In Cardiff, you were going to read law." "In Cardiff, I was a great many things I am not anymore." "Are you happy?" It was not the question Aurora had expected. She had expected accusation, or pity, or the careful diplomacy of a woman who billed by the quarter hour. *Are you happy* was the question of a friend, and she was no longer sure Sian was one. She thought about it. She thought about the flat above the bar, with its narrow bed and its single window looking out onto a city that had not yet learned to frighten her. She thought about the hum of the delivery bike beneath her, the weight of stacked bamboo containers, the smell of ginger and scallion and Yu-Fei's quiet laugh when she came back early. She thought about Silas and his limp and his habit of saying nothing that was not worth saying. She thought about Eva, two streets over, who had opened her door that first night and asked no questions and given her a bed. "I'm learning," she said. "I'm not unhappy." Sian nodded. She did not smile. She lifted her gin and drank again, and the clock ticked, and the green neon bled its slow color into the dark. "Stay a minute," Aurora said. "Tell me about the Inns of Court." "God," Sian said, "don't ask me that." "I'm asking." Sian laughed then, a real one this time, ragged at the edges, and she settled on the stool and closed the careful distance between them, and for a little while the two women sat in the dim bar as the rain kept falling, and the old maps on the walls watched them, and the silence that had lived in the space between them began, very slowly, to change its shape.
created_at"2026-06-01T12:25:10.801Z" 6/1/2026, 12:25:10 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Sian's voice cracked almost [almost]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.327
leniency0.654
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.038
76.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1737
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count4
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"precisely"
1"very"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.09% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1737
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"silence"
count4
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"lilt"
count1
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"weight"
2"lilt"
3"measured"
4"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences95
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences128
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen70
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords4
totalWords1737
ratio0.002
matches
0"home"
1"Are you happy"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions65
wordCount1249
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.92
worstName"Sian"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Sian"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Carter1
Black1
Sheep1
Aurora19
Tuesday2
Llewellyn1
Sian24
Cardiff2
Silas6
Bar1
Yu-Fei1
Eva2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Sheep"
4"Aurora"
5"Llewellyn"
6"Sian"
7"Silas"
8"Yu-Fei"
9"Eva"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Bar"
globalScore0.539
windowScore0
29.03% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if trying to place it, the way you might look at a word you'd once known in a language you no longer spoke"
1"sounded like a defense"
2"as if trying to fit the pieces of Aurora into a shape she recognized"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.576
wordCount1737
matches
0"not at Aurora but at the building above the bar, at the small dark window of t"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences128
matches
0"knew that face"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean29.95
std29.47
cv0.984
sampleLengths
059
177
243
32
42
525
67
712
817
963
106
1196
1262
1313
1463
159
1636
173
1847
1929
209
214
2258
233
2440
257
2640
2715
2811
2972
306
312
32125
3324
348
357
3636
374
3825
3915
4081
4127
429
436
447
4534
4631
4767
4812
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"was called"
1"been supposed"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs216
matches
0"was doing"
1"was looking"
2"was feeling"
3"was not attacking"
4"was apologizing"
5"was not mocking"
6"was reciting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences128
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1257
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.03341288782816229
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007159904534606206
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean13.57
std12.7
cv0.936
sampleLengths
017
135
24
33
410
542
65
74
816
920
1015
118
122
132
1414
1511
167
1712
185
1912
2022
2121
227
2313
246
2534
2631
2731
286
294
3012
315
326
3329
3413
3522
363
3732
386
399
4036
413
425
4323
446
453
4610
4719
486
494
32.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats25
diversityRatio0.3125
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners40
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences85
matches
0"Then she looked up, not"
1"Then Sian walked forward, her"
2"Somewhere in the back, a"
ratio0.035
83.53% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences85
matches
0"She liked the bar best"
1"His limp was worse tonight,"
2"He didn't look at her"
3"He set the glass down"
4"She was looking at the"
5"She knew that face."
6"She would have known it"
7"She didn't move."
8"She watched Sian pause in"
9"Her mother said it that"
10"She said it before she"
11"She set her phone face-down"
12"she said, and the lie"
13"She had not thought of"
14"She had made a point"
15"She didn't know what she"
16"she said, slowly"
17"She reached, without thinking, for"
18"She was not mocking"
19"She was reciting, as if"
ratio0.341
18.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences85
matches
0"The green neon of the"
1"Aurora Carter had been watching"
2"Tuesday nights were quiet."
3"Tuesdays were hers."
4"She liked the bar best"
5"The old maps and the"
6"Some nights she told them."
7"Some nights she lied."
8"Silas was in his usual"
9"His limp was worse tonight,"
10"He didn't look at her"
11"He set the glass down"
12"Aurora smiled at her pint."
13"Silas grunted, the closest he"
14"Aurora let her gaze drift"
15"Soho on a Tuesday in"
16"The city wearing its oldest"
17"That was when she saw"
18"She was looking at the"
19"Aurora's hand tightened around her"
ratio0.882
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
51.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The old maps and the black-and-white photographs on the walls had time to breathe then, the murmuring faces in the frames tilting toward her as if to ask what s…"
1"But the hair was different, cropped close and professionally blond, and the clothes were the clothes of a woman who had stopped being a girl a long time ago."
2"Then Sian walked forward, her heels sharp on the warped floorboards, and slid onto the stool two seats down, leaving a careful gap between them as if the wood b…"
3"She thought about the flat above the bar, with its narrow bed and its single window looking out onto a city that had not yet learned to frighten her."
4"Sian laughed then, a real one this time, ragged at the edges, and she settled on the stool and closed the careful distance between them, and for a little while …"
66.18% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, and the lie was a kindness"
1"she said, slowly"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Sian corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.212
leniency0.423
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.038
77.7487%