| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.16% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1894 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | adverb | "reluctantly" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "reluctantly" | | 5 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 60.40% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1894 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "furrowed" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "throb" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "dance" | | 7 | "footfall" | | 8 | "raced" | | 9 | "beacon" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 155 | | matches | | |
| 87.56% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 155 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "tended to" | | 3 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 155 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 72 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 14 | | totalWords | 1914 | | ratio | 0.007 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond. The old stones. Midnight. Bring what she gave you. Answers about Evan." | | 1 | "Laila." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 1907 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 0.47 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Evan" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Golden | 2 | | Empress | 2 | | Cardiff | 3 | | London | 3 | | Eva | 3 | | Evan | 4 | | Sheen | 1 | | Gate | 1 | | October | 1 | | Pre-Law | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Aurora | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Empress" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Yu-Fei" | | 5 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Golden" | | 3 | "Cardiff" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "Sheen" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "luminescence that seemed to come from the flowers themselves, or from the ground, or from nowhere at all" | | 1 | "looked like it might offer anything" | | 2 | "something between the standing stones" | | 3 | "felt like the part of her brain that ha" | | 4 | "felt like a mistake" | | 5 | "felt like to be hungry" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.522 | | wordCount | 1914 | | matches | | 0 | "not carved, exactly, but grown, as if the bark had formed itself into shapes" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "knew that the" | | 1 | "understood that the" | | 2 | "find that a" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 45.57 | | std | 33.41 | | cv | 0.733 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 120 | | 2 | 65 | | 3 | 109 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 70 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 75 | | 8 | 94 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 64 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 47 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 58 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 50 | | 18 | 89 | | 19 | 58 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 71 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 57 | | 26 | 42 | | 27 | 75 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 61 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 79 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 61 | | 34 | 85 | | 35 | 115 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 49 | | 38 | 46 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 5 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "was made" |
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| 52.79% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 317 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "was watching" | | 2 | "was looking" | | 3 | "was descending" | | 4 | "was grounding" | | 5 | "was draining" | | 6 | "was darkening" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 20 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 155 | | ratio | 0.084 | | matches | | 0 | "She knew this stretch of the park — the dips and rises, the clusters of ancient oaks, the places where the deer gathered at dusk." | | 1 | "The pendant around her neck pulsed once — a single slow throb of warmth against her sternum — and she pressed her fingers to the deep crimson gemstone without thinking." | | 2 | "Not temperature — it wasn't colder, exactly — but texture." | | 3 | "She could see them even in the dark — white petals catching light from a source she couldn't identify, a faint luminescence that seemed to come from the flowers themselves, or from the ground, or from nowhere at all." | | 4 | "Like bare feet on damp grass, but wrong — too slow, too deliberate, each step placed with a care that suggested the walker did not want to be heard but was not trying hard enough." | | 5 | "As she approached, she noticed markings on the trunk — not carved, exactly, but grown, as if the bark had formed itself into shapes." | | 6 | "That wet, deliberate footfall, and beneath it now, something else — a breathing, or a breathing-like sound, a slow rasp that might have been wind through reeds except there was no wind and no reeds." | | 7 | "She couldn't see its face — couldn't confirm it had a face — but she felt its attention like a point of heat, like someone pressing a magnifying glass to her skin on a sunny day." | | 8 | "The movement was wrong — too far, too fluid, like a bird examining something it intended to eat." | | 9 | "The grass didn't compress under its foot — or whatever it had instead of a foot — but the wildflowers darkened where it stepped, their glow dimming to nothing before slowly, reluctantly, returning." | | 10 | "The pendant's glow was steady now, a small crimson beacon against her chest, and the thing's attention — she was certain now — kept flicking between her face and the stone." | | 11 | "Above her, the sky — which should have been the muddy orange of London's light pollution — was clear and full of stars she didn't recognize." | | 12 | "It was close now — ten meters, maybe less — and she could see more of it, though seeing it felt like a mistake." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1890 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "hot, pressing against her" |
| | adverbCount | 70 | | adverbRatio | 0.037037037037037035 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0068783068783068784 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 155 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 155 | | mean | 12.35 | | std | 12.39 | | cv | 1.004 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 30 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 39 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 34 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 30 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 38.96% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 25 | | diversityRatio | 0.33116883116883117 | | totalSentences | 154 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "Of course no answer." | | 1 | "Just enough to catch the" | | 2 | "Too many joints in its" | | 3 | "Too much space between its" |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 79.54% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "They shouldn't have been here." | | 1 | "She knew this stretch of" | | 2 | "They stood in a rough" | | 3 | "She dismounted and leaned her" | | 4 | "It was warm." | | 5 | "It was always a little" | | 6 | "She had come because of" | | 7 | "She had left him in" | | 8 | "She had climbed the fence" | | 9 | "She stepped through the gap" | | 10 | "It didn't fade." | | 11 | "It stopped, as if someone" | | 12 | "She could see them even" | | 13 | "They shouldn't have been blooming." | | 14 | "It was October." | | 15 | "She was halfway to the" | | 16 | "Her hand went to the" | | 17 | "It was hot now, genuinely" | | 18 | "Her voice sounded wrong in" | | 19 | "She was alone in a" |
| | ratio | 0.351 | |
| 89.77% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 97 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose out" | | 1 | "Rory had passed through Richmond" | | 2 | "They shouldn't have been here." | | 3 | "She knew this stretch of" | | 4 | "They stood in a rough" | | 5 | "She dismounted and leaned her" | | 6 | "The pendant around her neck" | | 7 | "It was warm." | | 8 | "It was always a little" | | 9 | "She had come because of" | | 10 | "The old stones." | | 11 | "Answers about Evan.* That last" | | 12 | "She had left him in" | | 13 | "Rory checked her phone." | | 14 | "The screen's blue light felt" | | 15 | "The park had closed hours" | | 16 | "She had climbed the fence" | | 17 | "She stepped through the gap" | | 18 | "The air changed." | | 19 | "The atmosphere thickened, pressed against" |
| | ratio | 0.74 | |
| 76.34% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "As if someone had borrowed" | | 1 | "As if the park itself" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "They stood in a rough semicircle at the edge of a clearing she also did not recognize, their surfaces gnarled and furrowed like bark, like wood that had forgott…" | | 1 | "It was always a little warm, but tonight it pulsed with a rhythm that felt deliberate, like a heartbeat that wasn't hers." | | 2 | "She could see them even in the dark — white petals catching light from a source she couldn't identify, a faint luminescence that seemed to come from the flowers…" | | 3 | "But the clearing was lush and soft underfoot, and the scent that rose from the flowers was sweet in a way that made her think of overripe fruit, of things just …" | | 4 | "Like bare feet on damp grass, but wrong — too slow, too deliberate, each step placed with a care that suggested the walker did not want to be heard but was not …" | | 5 | "She knew that the way she knew her own name, with a certainty that bypassed logic and settled in her bones." | | 6 | "Something had been here since she arrived, maybe longer, maybe always, and it was watching her with a patience that felt geological." | | 7 | "That wet, deliberate footfall, and beneath it now, something else — a breathing, or a breathing-like sound, a slow rasp that might have been wind through reeds …" | | 8 | "The grass didn't compress under its foot — or whatever it had instead of a foot — but the wildflowers darkened where it stepped, their glow dimming to nothing b…" | | 9 | "The thought should have been terrifying, and it was, but beneath the terror was something colder, something that felt like the part of her brain that had gotten…" | | 10 | "Above her, the sky — which should have been the muddy orange of London's light pollution — was clear and full of stars she didn't recognize." | | 11 | "Its body was wood and bark and stone, fused together in a shape that approximated human without achieving it." | | 12 | "And where its face should have been, there was only smooth bark, featureless, except for a single vertical line that might have been a mouth or might have been …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |