| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said aloud [aloud]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |
| 88.85% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1345 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 33.09% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1345 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "perfect" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "quickened" | | 7 | "raced" | | 8 | "throbbed" | | 9 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 101 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 61 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 15 | | totalWords | 1352 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "Come to the grove at midnight. Come alone. You'll understand what the Heartstone is for." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 1347 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.45 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heathley | 1 | | November | 1 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Evan | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 6 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Heathley" | | 3 | "November" | | 4 | "Cardiff" | | 5 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 22.88% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed stronger" | | 1 | "as if responding to a signal she couldn't hear" | | 2 | "starlight, that seemed to absorb it" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.219 | | wordCount | 1352 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the stale warmth of a summer night but something older, something" | | 1 | "not brown or dead but deepened, like a bruise spreading through the ground itself" | | 2 | "not painful but insistent, a pressure behind her eyes, a sound at the edge o" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 48.29 | | std | 39.35 | | cv | 0.815 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 120 | | 2 | 117 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 54 | | 5 | 94 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 76 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 86 | | 11 | 66 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 75 | | 14 | 59 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 57 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 90 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 51 | | 23 | 95 | | 24 | 67 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 109 | | 27 | 4 |
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| 84.21% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "was folded" | | 1 | "been decided" | | 2 | "been raised" | | 3 | "been chosen" | | 4 | "been held" | | 5 | "been invited" | | 6 | "been summoned" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 218 | | matches | | 0 | "was beginning" | | 1 | "were humming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 101 | | ratio | 0.059 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory had found the grove exactly where the note said she would — past the pemberton oaks, through a gap in the fence that shouldn't have been there, down a slope she'd never noticed in all the years she'd wandered Richmond Park." | | 1 | "It had done that since she'd received it two weeks prior — another anonymous gift, another mystery — but tonight the pulse seemed stronger." | | 2 | "It was eleven-fifty now — or it had been when she'd checked — and some stubborn, furious part of her needed to know." | | 3 | "She grabbed it without thinking and the heat raced up her arm, not painful but insistent, a pressure behind her eyes, a sound at the edge of hearing that was almost a voice, almost a word, almost—" | | 4 | "Don't acknowledge what your peripheral vision is already showing you — the shape that isn't human, that is too long and too low and has too many joints, pulling itself into the grove with a patience that suggests it has done this many times before and has never once been in a hurry." | | 5 | "Not with eyes — the pressure of its attention was more fundamental than that, a weight against the back of her skull, a coldness spreading through the meat of her shoulders." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1342 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.028315946348733235 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005961251862891207 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 101 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 101 | | mean | 13.39 | | std | 14.02 | | cv | 1.047 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 42 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 61 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 54 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 28 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 48.51% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.3564356435643564 | | totalSentences | 101 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 77.52% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Just silence, and the grove," | | 1 | "Just the taste of it" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped between two of" | | 1 | "She checked her phone." | | 2 | "You'll understand what the Heartstone" | | 3 | "She'd found it tucked into" | | 4 | "It had done that since" | | 5 | "It was wet." | | 6 | "She lifted her hand to" | | 7 | "It stayed on her skin." | | 8 | "She rubbed her thumb against" | | 9 | "she said aloud, because the" | | 10 | "It was eleven-fifty now —" | | 11 | "She stood and walked the" | | 12 | "It traveled up her arm" | | 13 | "She looked down." | | 14 | "She grabbed it without thinking" | | 15 | "Her hands were steady." | | 16 | "Her mind was clear." | | 17 | "She catalogued what she knew:" | | 18 | "It had not said she" | | 19 | "She could feel it watching" |
| | ratio | 0.279 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "Rory had found the grove" | | 2 | "The stones marked the boundary" | | 3 | "She stepped between two of" | | 4 | "She checked her phone." | | 5 | "The screen's light felt obscene" | | 6 | "The note was folded into" | | 7 | "You'll understand what the Heartstone" | | 8 | "She'd found it tucked into" | | 9 | "The Heartstone pendant hung warm" | | 10 | "It had done that since" | | 11 | "The grove was roughly forty" | | 12 | "The wildflowers carpeted the ground" | | 13 | "The air was warm." | | 14 | "Rory crouched near the center" | | 15 | "It was wet." | | 16 | "She lifted her hand to" | | 17 | "It stayed on her skin." | | 18 | "She rubbed her thumb against" | | 19 | "she said aloud, because the" |
| | ratio | 0.663 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 9.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The stones marked the boundary in a rough circle, each one ancient oak turned to something harder than wood, darker than bone, their surfaces slick with moss th…" | | 1 | "Not the stale warmth of a summer night but something older, something that felt held in place, as if the temperature had been decided upon and simply maintained…" | | 2 | "She rubbed her thumb against her fingers and the sensation faded, the blood simply ceasing to be, as if it had never been there at all." | | 3 | "Needed to understand why someone had given her a pendant that pulsed like a living thing, why a grove existed in Richmond Park that defied every natural law she…" | | 4 | "It traveled up her arm and settled in her chest, resonating with the Heartstone until both frequencies matched and she had to pull away, gasping, her pulse skit…" | | 5 | "Don't acknowledge what your peripheral vision is already showing you — the shape that isn't human, that is too long and too low and has too many joints, pulling…" | | 6 | "Close enough that she could smell it, and the smell was wrong in a way she couldn't articulate, wrong like a chord played in a key that doesn't exist, wrong lik…" | | 7 | "A releasing of air that had been held for a very long time, and it carried with it a sound that might have been her name, might have been a word in a language t…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said aloud, because the silence was beginning to feel deliberate" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |