Run: 2026-07-01-01KWE8SAZDXK36QR80XRQVG4D6

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35.1s
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Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest smelled the way it always did on a Tuesday—stale hops and candle wax, and underneath that, the particular mustiness of old paper that came from Silas's obsession with maps nobody but him ever looked at closely. Rory had her elbows on the bar and a delivery bag from the Golden Empress sitting cold and forgotten by her feet, the noodles inside it congealing into something Yu-Fei would dock her for if she didn't hustle it over to Greek Street in the next ten minutes. But her legs wouldn't move yet. She'd just clocked the man three stools down, and something in her chest had gone very still. "Marcus?" He turned, and for a second she thought she'd made a mistake, because the Marcus she remembered had been soft around the edges in a way this man wasn't—soft-spoken, soft-bellied, the kind of nineteen-year-old who apologized to inanimate objects when he bumped into them. This man had a jaw that looked chiseled from granite and forearms roped with muscle under a rolled shirtsleeve, and there was a stillness to him that hadn't been there before, a watchfulness that reminded her, unsettlingly, of Silas. "Rory Carter," he said, and smiled, and there it was—the same smile, unchanged, the one crooked tooth up front that no orthodontist in Cardiff had ever managed to argue him into fixing. "Bloody hell. It really is you." "It's me." She slid onto the stool beside him before she'd decided to. "God, Marcus. It's been—what—" "Seven years." He said it too fast, like he'd already done the maths long before this moment, like he'd been carrying the number around in his pocket for a while. "Since Cardiff." "Seven years." She let that sit a moment, turning it over. Seven years since he'd driven her to the train station with all her boxes crammed in the back of his mum's old Fiesta, since he'd hugged her on the platform and said *call when you land, yeah?* and she never quite had, not the way she meant to, not after everything with Evan had swallowed her whole for two of those years and spat her back out changed. "You look—" She didn't finish it. She didn't know how to finish it politely. "Different," he said, supplying the word himself, and there was no bitterness in it, just a flat, appraising honesty, like he was describing weather. "I know. Everyone says it." "What happened to you?" He turned his glass a quarter turn on the bar, watching the whisky slide against the ice. "Army happened to me. Six years. Two tours." He said it the way other men might mention a job in insurance. "Came out, did some contract work. Private security, mostly. Boring stuff. Guarding boring rich people." "You hated fighting," Rory said. It came out before she could soften it. "You cried at *Saving Private Ryan.*" "I did." Something flickered behind his eyes—not quite a smile. "I still do, actually. Just not where anyone can see." Silas appeared then, unbidden, the way he always did, setting a glass of the Malbec Rory liked in front of her without being asked, his hazel eyes flicking once between the two of them with the swift, cataloguing attention of a man who noticed everything and said nothing about most of it. "Friend of yours?" he asked her, though the question was really aimed at the air between them. "Old friend," Rory said. "Marcus. We grew up together. Cardiff." "Silas Blackwood." He extended a hand, and Marcus shook it, and Rory watched the two men take each other's measure in that particular masculine way, quick and wordless, and then Silas was gone again down the bar, polishing a glass that didn't need polishing, well within earshot. "You work here?" Marcus asked. "Live above it, actually. Deliver Chinese food for a living. Very glamorous." She gestured at the bag by her feet, now thoroughly abandoned. "I was pre-law, if you can believe that." "I can't, actually." He laughed, and for a second the old Marcus surfaced in it, the boy who used to skip games lessons to sit with her in the library, arguing about whether Antigone was a hero or a fool. "You were going to be a barrister. Save the innocent. Very righteous." "Things changed." "Things change," he agreed, and there was a weight underneath the words that told her he wasn't only talking about her. They sat with that for a while, the noise of the bar filling in around them—someone's laugh at a corner table, the low murmur of the football highlights on the muted telly above the bottles. Rory found herself studying his hands, the calluses across the knuckles that hadn't been there in the Fiesta days, and thought about all the versions of a person that existed in the space of seven years, stacked up like sediment, and how strange it was to sit next to someone and see only the top layer and have to imagine all the rest buried underneath. "I thought about calling you," she said finally. "After I left. I thought about it a lot." "I know. I mean—I didn't know, but I hoped." He looked at her properly then, and the watchfulness in his face softened into something rawer, something almost boyish underneath all that granite. "I looked you up once. Couple years back. Didn't find much. Figured you didn't want to be found." "I didn't," she admitted. "Not by anyone who knew me before. It was easier that way. Pretend the person who left Cardiff wasn't the person who—" She stopped. Didn't say Evan's name. Didn't need to; some things translated in the silence around them, in the way her hand moved unconsciously to cover the crescent scar on her wrist, an old habit she thought she'd broken years ago. Marcus didn't push. That, at least, hadn't changed—he'd always known which doors not to open. "For what it's worth," he said, "the person who left Cardiff turned out alright. Sitting here. Drinking wine in a spy bar." "It's not a spy bar." "Sure it isn't." He nodded toward Silas, who was very deliberately not listening from four feet away. "Man's got a signet ring and a limp and a stare like he's reading my file. I've met enough of that type to recognize it." Rory laughed—really laughed, for the first time in what felt like months—and something in her chest that had been clenched since she sat down finally loosened. "Give me your number," she said. "This time I'll actually call." "I'll believe it when I see it," Marcus said, but he was already reaching for a napkin, already writing, and there was something in the care he took over the numbers, the deliberate neatness of it, that told her he wanted, very badly, to be believed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0.042
effectiveRatio0.042
60.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1148
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"very"
count5
1
adverb"really"
count3
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"really"
2"deliberately"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1148
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"weight"
2"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences42
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences42
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences60
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen68
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords8
totalWords1137
ratio0.007
matches
0"call when you land, yeah?"
1"Saving Private Ryan."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount871
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity0.8
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Tuesday1
Silas5
Golden1
Empress1
Yu-Fei1
Greek1
Street1
Marcus6
Cardiff1
Seven1
Fiesta2
Evan2
Rory7
Malbec1
Antigone1
Didn2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Marcus"
5"Evan"
6"Rory"
7"Malbec"
places
0"Golden"
1"Greek"
2"Street"
3"Cardiff"
4"Fiesta"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences31
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"not quite a smile"
1"felt like months—and something in her c"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1137
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"let that sit"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean39.21
std29.58
cv0.754
sampleLengths
0110
11
283
338
417
532
693
729
84
953
1019
1120
1269
1310
1447
155
1631
1752
182
1921
20100
2117
2250
2367
2437
255
2642
2737
2846
80.20% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences42
matches
0"being asked"
1"was gone"
2"been clenched"
65.77% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs149
matches
0"was describing"
1"wasn't only talking"
2"was already reaching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences60
ratio0.133
matches
0"The Raven's Nest smelled the way it always did on a Tuesday—stale hops and candle wax, and underneath that, the particular mustiness of old paper that came from Silas's obsession with maps nobody but him ever looked at closely."
1"He turned, and for a second she thought she'd made a mistake, because the Marcus she remembered had been soft around the edges in a way this man wasn't—soft-spoken, soft-bellied, the kind of nineteen-year-old who apologized to inanimate objects when he bumped into them."
2"\"Rory Carter,\" he said, and smiled, and there it was—the same smile, unchanged, the one crooked tooth up front that no orthodontist in Cardiff had ever managed to argue him into fixing."
3"\"I did.\" Something flickered behind his eyes—not quite a smile."
4"They sat with that for a while, the noise of the bar filling in around them—someone's laugh at a corner table, the low murmur of the football highlights on the muted telly above the bottles."
5"Didn't need to; some things translated in the silence around them, in the way her hand moved unconsciously to cover the crescent scar on her wrist, an old habit she thought she'd broken years ago."
6"That, at least, hadn't changed—he'd always known which doors not to open."
7"Rory laughed—really laughed, for the first time in what felt like months—and something in her chest that had been clenched since she sat down finally loosened."
90.46% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount884
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.05090497737556561
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.016968325791855202
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences60
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences60
mean18.95
std16.44
cv0.868
sampleLengths
039
148
26
317
41
544
639
732
86
913
104
1130
122
1311
1468
156
168
1724
185
194
2017
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2215
235
248
256
2610
2710
2852
2917
304
316
3247
335
3423
358
3640
3712
382
3921
4035
4165
428
439
4432
4518
464
4724
484
4935
77.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.5333333333333333
totalSentences60
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences35
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences35
matches
0"She'd just clocked the man"
1"He turned, and for a"
2"he said, and smiled, and"
3"She slid onto the stool"
4"He said it too fast,"
5"She let that sit a"
6"She didn't finish it"
7"She didn't know how to"
8"he said, supplying the word"
9"He turned his glass a"
10"He said it the way"
11"It came out before she"
12"he asked her, though the"
13"He extended a hand, and"
14"She gestured at the bag"
15"He laughed, and for a"
16"he agreed, and there was"
17"They sat with that for"
18"she said finally"
19"He looked at her properly"
ratio0.6
17.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount31
totalSentences35
matches
0"The Raven's Nest smelled the"
1"Rory had her elbows on"
2"She'd just clocked the man"
3"He turned, and for a"
4"This man had a jaw"
5"he said, and smiled, and"
6"She slid onto the stool"
7"He said it too fast,"
8"She let that sit a"
9"She didn't finish it"
10"She didn't know how to"
11"he said, supplying the word"
12"He turned his glass a"
13"He said it the way"
14"It came out before she"
15"Something flickered behind his eyes—not"
16"Silas appeared then, unbidden, the"
17"he asked her, though the"
18"He extended a hand, and"
19"She gestured at the bag"
ratio0.886
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences35
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences13
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The Raven's Nest smelled the way it always did on a Tuesday—stale hops and candle wax, and underneath that, the particular mustiness of old paper that came from…"
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4"Rory found herself studying his hands, the calluses across the knuckles that hadn't been there in the Fiesta days, and thought about all the versions of a perso…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he asked, though the question was really aimed at the air between them"
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"He laughed (laugh)"
1"he agreed (agree)"
2"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.357
leniency0.714
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.143
71.2367%