Run: 2026-07-01-01KWE8WC2DAQDRG2A5MC8F1YJP

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43.6s
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$0.031996
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had followed Rory in from the street, beading on her jacket, dripping onto the scarred wood floor as she shouldered the door of The Raven's Nest shut behind her. She smelled of ginger and soy sauce, the last delivery bag from the Golden Empress folded under her arm, empty now except for a receipt gone soft with damp. She wanted nothing more than the stool at the end of the bar, a whisky Silas wouldn't charge her for, and twenty minutes of silence before she went upstairs to sleep. She got three steps in before she saw her. Catrin Pryce was sitting at a table near the window, turning a glass of red wine in slow circles, her dark curls pulled back the way they always had been for exams, for interviews, for anything that mattered. She hadn't changed — that was the first thing Rory's mind registered, an almost physical jolt, like missing a stair. The same round face, the same gold hoops in her ears, the same crease between her eyebrows when she was thinking too hard about something. Six years dissolved in the time it took Rory's stomach to drop. Catrin looked up. For a moment there was nothing — a stranger's polite disinterest — and then recognition broke over her face like weather changing. "Aurora?" she said, and stood so fast she nearly upended the table. "Aurora Carter?" Rory's hand tightened on the strap of the delivery bag. Nobody called her that anymore, not in London, not the way Catrin said it — full name, both syllables of the surname, like a roll call from a lecture hall in Cardiff. "Catrin." She made herself smile. It came easier than she expected, and that surprised her too. "God. It's been — " "Years." Catrin was already crossing the room, arms open, and Rory let herself be hugged, stiffly at first, then not. Catrin smelled of the same drugstore perfume she'd worn at nineteen, something with vanilla in it, and for one disorienting second Rory was back in a shared kitchen on Colum Road, arguing about tort law over cold toast. "What are you even doing here?" Catrin pulled back, held her by the shoulders, studied her the way people did when they were recalibrating an old photograph against a new face. "In London. In a — " she glanced round at the maps on the walls, the black-and-white photographs of men Rory doubted she'd ever be told the names of — "in a place like this." "I live here. Well — above it." Rory gestured vaguely at the ceiling. "Long story." "You look —" Catrin stopped herself, and Rory watched her friend's eyes do the arithmetic: the black hair cut shorter and blunter than it used to be, the leanness in her face that hadn't been there in university, something guarded behind the blue eyes that Catrin couldn't place but clearly registered as loss. "You look well," she said instead, which both of them understood was not what she'd meant to say. They sat. Silas caught Rory's eye from behind the bar, one eyebrow lifting in silent inquiry — trouble? — and she shook her head almost imperceptibly. He went back to polishing a glass that was already clean, but she felt his attention linger, the old habit of a man who had spent thirty years reading rooms for a living. "I'm here for a conference," Catrin said, sliding back into her chair. "Contract law, if you can believe I ended up doing something so boring. Three days of PowerPoints and warm Chardonnay. I saw the green sign from the street and thought, well, it looks like the kind of place that would serve something better than warm Chardonnay." "It does." "So you actually did it," Catrin said. "London. I always thought you would, you know. Even when you were slogging through contracts with the rest of us, hating every second. You never let anyone see you sweat, not really. Not like me." She laughed, a little embarrassed by her own memory. "I used to be so jealous of that." Rory looked down at the table. There was a groove in the wood, worn pale by decades of glasses set down in the same spot. "I didn't finish the degree," she said. "I know. Your mum told my mum. Everyone was so — " Catrin caught herself, softened it. "We worried about you. You just vanished. No calls, nothing on Facebook, and then Eva said you'd gone to London and that was that. I thought you'd hate me for saying this, but I used to lie awake wondering if you were even — " She didn't finish it. "I'm fine," Rory said, too quickly, the way she always said it, the way that made it sound like a door closing rather than an answer. Catrin's eyes dropped, just for a second, to Rory's left wrist, where the crescent scar showed pale against her skin in the low light. She didn't ask. She had never known, in the years they'd shared a kitchen and a laundry rota and secrets about boys, what that scar was from, and Rory had never told her, and there was a whole unspoken history folded into that not-asking now, six years thicker than it had been. "Evan," Catrin said carefully, testing the name like a step that might not hold. "Are you two still — " "No." The word came out flat, final, closing a door that had already been shut a long time. "That ended. A while ago." "Good," Catrin said, and something in her voice suggested she understood more than Rory had given her credit for, that perhaps she'd always understood more than she let on, back when they were girls sharing a fridge and pretending everything was fine. "Good," she said again, softer. The silence that followed wasn't uncomfortable so much as full — full of the versions of themselves that had once sat up until 3 a.m. planning lives that hadn't happened, full of the space between the girl who wanted to be a barrister and the woman who delivered Chinese food and lived above a bar with secrets in its walls, full of everything that six years and one unspoken wound could put between two people who had once known each other completely. "We should get a drink," Catrin said finally, brightening with the particular effort of someone trying to rescue an evening. "For old times. God knows we earned it, that final year." Rory looked at her — really looked, at the face that time hadn't touched the way it had touched her own — and felt something in her chest twist, gently, like an old bruise remembering itself. "Yeah," she said. "Let's."
created_at"2026-07-01T07:21:48.376Z" 7/1/2026, 7:21:48 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"Catrin pulled back [back]"
1"Rory gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
2"she said instead [instead]"
3"Catrin said carefully [carefully]"
4"she said again [again]"
5"Catrin said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.645
leniency1
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.3
72.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1107
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"completely"
count1
4
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"quickly"
2"carefully"
3"completely"
4"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1107
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"eyebrow"
count1
3
word"unspoken"
count2
highlights
0"silence"
1"stomach"
2"eyebrow"
3"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences46
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences46
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences57
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen57
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1128
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
60.39% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount837
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.79
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory15
Raven1
Nest1
Golden1
Empress1
Silas2
Pryce1
London1
Catrin13
Cardiff1
Colum1
Road1
Chinese1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Empress"
4"Silas"
5"Catrin"
places
0"Golden"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Colum"
4"Road"
globalScore0.604
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1128
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean43.38
std26.86
cv0.619
sampleLengths
091
19
295
325
414
542
621
758
866
915
1071
1159
1258
132
1459
1532
1666
1726
1876
1920
2023
2147
2282
2331
2436
254
97.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences46
matches
0"been shut"
9.52% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs140
matches
0"was sitting"
1"was thinking"
2"was already crossing"
3"were recalibrating"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences57
ratio0.123
matches
0"She hadn't changed — that was the first thing Rory's mind registered, an almost physical jolt, like missing a stair."
1"For a moment there was nothing — a stranger's polite disinterest — and then recognition broke over her face like weather changing."
2"Nobody called her that anymore, not in London, not the way Catrin said it — full name, both syllables of the surname, like a roll call from a lecture hall in Cardiff."
3"Silas caught Rory's eye from behind the bar, one eyebrow lifting in silent inquiry — trouble?"
4"— and she shook her head almost imperceptibly."
5"The silence that followed wasn't uncomfortable so much as full — full of the versions of themselves that had once sat up until 3 a.m."
6"Rory looked at her — really looked, at the face that time hadn't touched the way it had touched her own — and felt something in her chest twist, gently, like an old bruise remembering itself."
97.23% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount556
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.04316546762589928
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.008992805755395683
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences57
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences57
mean19.79
std15.1
cv0.763
sampleLengths
031
129
231
39
438
520
625
712
83
922
1012
112
1210
1332
145
1511
165
1720
1838
1931
2035
2113
222
2353
2418
252
2616
278
2833
2912
3046
312
327
3344
348
356
3619
377
3817
3949
4026
4124
423
4349
4414
456
4618
475
4842
495
84.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.5789473684210527
totalSentences57
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.14% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences42
matches
0"She smelled of ginger and"
1"She wanted nothing more than"
2"She got three steps in"
3"She hadn't changed — that"
4"she said, and stood so"
5"She made herself smile"
6"It came easier than she"
7"she glanced round at the"
8"she said instead, which both"
9"He went back to polishing"
10"She laughed, a little embarrassed"
11"She didn't finish it"
12"She didn't ask."
13"She had never known, in"
14"she said again, softer"
ratio0.357
7.62% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount38
totalSentences42
matches
0"The rain had followed Rory"
1"She smelled of ginger and"
2"She wanted nothing more than"
3"She got three steps in"
4"Catrin Pryce was sitting at"
5"She hadn't changed — that"
6"The same round face, the"
7"Catrin looked up."
8"she said, and stood so"
9"Rory's hand tightened on the"
10"Nobody called her that anymore,"
11"She made herself smile"
12"It came easier than she"
13"Catrin was already crossing the"
14"Catrin smelled of the same"
15"Catrin pulled back, held her"
16"she glanced round at the"
17"Rory gestured vaguely at the"
18"she said instead, which both"
19"Silas caught Rory's eye from"
ratio0.905
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences42
matches
0"— and she shook her"
ratio0.024
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The rain had followed Rory in from the street, beading on her jacket, dripping onto the scarred wood floor as she shouldered the door of The Raven's Nest shut b…"
1"Catrin Pryce was sitting at a table near the window, turning a glass of red wine in slow circles, her dark curls pulled back the way they always had been for ex…"
2"He went back to polishing a glass that was already clean, but she felt his attention linger, the old habit of a man who had spent thirty years reading rooms for…"
3"The silence that followed wasn't uncomfortable so much as full — full of the versions of themselves that had once sat up until 3 a.m."
4"planning lives that hadn't happened, full of the space between the girl who wanted to be a barrister and the woman who delivered Chinese food and lived above a …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said again, softer"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.387
leniency0.774
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.065
75.9852%