| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 72.30% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1083 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "quickly" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "utterly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 63.07% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1083 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "searing" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "resolve" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "footsteps" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.57% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 65 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 21 | | totalWords | 1076 | | ratio | 0.02 | | matches | | 0 | "that isn't a deer" | | 1 | "nothing walks like that" | | 2 | "arriving" | | 3 | "lean" | | 4 | "run, girl, run now, do not look back at the grove" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 14 | | wordCount | 1025 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.29 | | worstName | "Eva" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 3 | | October | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Wrong | 1 | | Isolde | 3 | | Rory | 3 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "October" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 93.18% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "quite judge, because the dark out here didn't work the way dark should" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.929 | | wordCount | 1076 | | matches | | 0 | "not gradually, but all at once, a completeness" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 41.38 | | std | 26.08 | | cv | 0.63 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 63 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 60 | | 3 | 60 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 97 | | 8 | 47 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 76 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 68 | | 16 | 45 | | 17 | 59 | | 18 | 39 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 81 | | 21 | 57 | | 22 | 53 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 71 | | 25 | 9 |
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| 99.95% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 177 | | matches | | 0 | "was going" | | 1 | "was listening" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 67 | | ratio | 0.104 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks marking the boundary stood exactly where Eva's directions said they would, two black shapes against a sky that hadn't earned its darkness honestly—too deep, too starless, like something had been poured over the park rather than night simply falling." | | 1 | "The grove opened around her the way water opens around a stone dropped into it—not gradually, but all at once, a completeness that made the mind stutter." | | 2 | "First it was the quiet—too complete, the kind of silence that has weight, that presses on the eardrums until you become aware of your own pulse as an intrusion." | | 3 | "It came in a slow, unhurried procession—step, pause, step—circling her at a distance she couldn't quite judge, because the dark out here didn't work the way dark should." | | 4 | "More an absence that traveled—a patch of the dark between two oaks that seemed, for half a second, to bulge toward her before retreating, the way a held breath moves a curtain." | | 5 | "A shape detached itself from the treeline—not stepping out so much as *arriving*, fully formed, where a moment before there had been only bark and shadow." | | 6 | "The pendant blazed white-hot against her sternum, and this time she didn't just feel the heat—she heard something, a thin, high whine like a wire drawn tight, and beneath it, wrong and close, a voice that might have been Isolde's saying *run, girl, run now, do not look back at the grove* —" |
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| 78.51% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 897 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 55 | | adverbRatio | 0.06131549609810479 | | lyAdverbCount | 21 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.023411371237458192 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 67 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 67 | | mean | 16.06 | | std | 15.11 | | cv | 0.941 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 41 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 26 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 32 | | 45 | 32 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 33 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 60.10% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.42424242424242425 | | totalSentences | 66 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the sound started." | | 1 | "More an absence that traveled—a" |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 77.14% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked the time before" | | 1 | "She slipped between the standing" | | 2 | "she said, because Eva had" | | 3 | "She watched them for a" | | 4 | "She faced forward again and" | | 5 | "It came in a slow," | | 6 | "It didn't fade with distance." | | 7 | "It simply ended, in a" | | 8 | "Her own voice sounded thin" | | 9 | "She fixed her eyes on" | | 10 | "She hadn't noticed it happen." | | 11 | "She backed toward the standing" | | 12 | "she said, to the dark," | | 13 | "Her voice cracked on the" | | 14 | "It was too tall." | | 15 | "It did not have a" | | 16 | "She would try, lying awake" | | 17 | "She did not remember crossing" | | 18 | "She remembered only the standing" | | 19 | "She didn't stop running until" |
| | ratio | 0.357 | |
| 40.36% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks marking the boundary" | | 1 | "Rory checked her phone." | | 2 | "She checked the time before" | | 3 | "She slipped between the standing" | | 4 | "The pendant had been warm" | | 5 | "The heat ebbed the moment" | | 6 | "The grove opened around her" | | 7 | "Wildflowers she couldn't name in" | | 8 | "she said, because Eva had" | | 9 | "That was fine." | | 10 | "Eva had warned her the" | | 11 | "Rory found a flat stone" | | 12 | "The wrongness didn't arrive as" | | 13 | "Richmond Park, even at night," | | 14 | "Here there was none of" | | 15 | "The wildflowers didn't sway." | | 16 | "She watched them for a" | | 17 | "A soft, wet rhythm, somewhere" | | 18 | "The trees at the grove's" | | 19 | "She faced forward again and" |
| | ratio | 0.839 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks marking the boundary stood exactly where Eva's directions said they would, two black shapes against a sky that hadn't earned its darkness honestly—too …" | | 1 | "First it was the quiet—too complete, the kind of silence that has weight, that presses on the eardrums until you become aware of your own pulse as an intrusion." | | 2 | "She watched them for a long moment to be sure, and they held themselves perfectly, unnaturally still, as though someone had told them to." | | 3 | "A moment ago they'd been full, straining upward, and now they lay flat and blackened at the edges as if a frost had passed through only that patch of ground, sp…" | | 4 | "Some older, quieter part of her brain had simply taken the wheel, and she let it, because the part of her that reasoned things out had started producing sentenc…" | | 5 | "Converging, unhurried, from different points around the circle, as though whatever owned them had all the time in creation and had simply decided this was worth…" | | 6 | "The pendant blazed white-hot against her sternum, and this time she didn't just feel the heat—she heard something, a thin, high whine like a wire drawn tight, a…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |