| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.714 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 67.29% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1070 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 57.94% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1070 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sentinel" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "echo" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 9 | | totalWords | 1085 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "wrong" | | 1 | "quality" | | 2 | "One. Two. Three." | | 3 | "this was a mistake" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 18 | | wordCount | 1036 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.39 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 2 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | June | 1 | | December | 1 | | London | 1 | | Isolde | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Rory | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "them to be so obviously *wrong* — too symme" | | 1 | "felt like ten minutes" | | 2 | "seemed entirely sure which" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.922 | | wordCount | 1085 | | matches | | 0 | "not abruptly, but with a kind of courtesy, as though whatever made it understo" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 43.4 | | std | 28 | | cv | 0.645 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 53 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 89 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 76 | | 7 | 65 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 89 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 62 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 65 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 70 | | 17 | 56 | | 18 | 32 | | 19 | 52 | | 20 | 59 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 68 | | 23 | 53 | | 24 | 18 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 173 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 71 | | ratio | 0.141 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory hadn't expected them to be so obviously *wrong* — too symmetrical for nature, too deliberate, like teeth set in a jaw that had forgotten how to close." | | 1 | "But the wildflowers underfoot were blooming — actually blooming, dog violets and campion thick as a June morning despite the frost she'd walked through to get here, despite the black bones of the December trees beyond the stones." | | 2 | "Not silence — the grove was never silent, she'd learn that later, there was always some small percussion of insect or leaf." | | 3 | "This was what Eva had promised — a pocket between worlds, time running strange, an hour here worth a day out there, or a day worth an hour, nobody seemed entirely sure which." | | 4 | "The path — if it was a path, if the flattened grass constituted a path — curved deeper into the grove, and the trees here were not the trees of Richmond Park." | | 5 | "Nothing — the stones, the dark, the flowers nodding slightly though there was no wind she could feel on her face." | | 6 | "It should have — the clearing was wide, ringed with those old and listening trees — but the word went out of her mouth and simply stopped, as if the air here swallowed sound before it could travel." | | 7 | "She hadn't known that was a thing that could happen, sound just — ending." | | 8 | "The rustle stopped too — not abruptly, but with a kind of courtesy, as though whatever made it understood the rules of the game and had merely paused its turn." | | 9 | "Somewhere far off — impossibly far, given how small the grove had seemed from outside the stones — something made a sound like laughter with all the joy filed out of it, thin and dry as paper tearing." |
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| 89.35% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 115 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 6 | | adverbRatio | 0.05217391304347826 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017391304347826087 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 71 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 71 | | mean | 15.28 | | std | 12.38 | | cv | 0.81 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 34 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 39 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 38 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 33 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 38 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 34 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 38 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 27 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 30 |
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| 57.28% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.43661971830985913 | | totalSentences | 71 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, behind her, a twig" | | 1 | "Somewhere far off — impossibly" |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 35.87% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked her phone." | | 1 | "She'd walked for what felt" | | 2 | "She closed her fingers around" | | 3 | "she said, to no one," | | 4 | "She crouched and touched a" | | 5 | "It was warm." | | 6 | "It was soft." | | 7 | "It was very slightly wrong" | | 8 | "She stood, and that was" | | 9 | "She told herself this was" | | 10 | "She was here to find" | | 11 | "She was here because the" | | 12 | "She kept walking." | | 13 | "They were older." | | 14 | "Their bark had the look" | | 15 | "She was almost disappointed." | | 16 | "She stood very still and" | | 17 | "Her voice didn't echo." | | 18 | "It should have — the" | | 19 | "She hadn't known that was" |
| | ratio | 0.46 | |
| 55.24% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "The stones were exactly where" | | 1 | "Rory hadn't expected them to" | | 2 | "She checked her phone." | | 3 | "She'd walked for what felt" | | 4 | "The Heartstone Pendant sat warm" | | 5 | "She closed her fingers around" | | 6 | "she said, to no one," | | 7 | "The grove didn't answer." | | 8 | "Groves didn't, generally." | | 9 | "She crouched and touched a" | | 10 | "It was warm." | | 11 | "It was soft." | | 12 | "It was very slightly wrong" | | 13 | "She stood, and that was" | | 14 | "A moment ago there had" | | 15 | "She told herself this was" | | 16 | "This was what Eva had" | | 17 | "She was here to find" | | 18 | "She was here because the" | | 19 | "She kept walking." |
| | ratio | 0.81 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Now there was nothing beyond" | | 1 | "As if the world past" |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 12.99% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory hadn't expected them to be so obviously *wrong* — too symmetrical for nature, too deliberate, like teeth set in a jaw that had forgotten how to close." | | 1 | "The Heartstone Pendant sat warm against her collarbone, a small and stubborn heat that had started the moment she crossed between the second and third standing …" | | 2 | "Their bark had the look of skin stretched too tight over something that wanted to move." | | 3 | "Rory had grown up on her mother's fireside stories, the kind with teeth in them, and some animal part of her brain kept flinching at each trunk as though it mig…" | | 4 | "It should have — the clearing was wide, ringed with those old and listening trees — but the word went out of her mouth and simply stopped, as if the air here sw…" | | 5 | "The dragging sound came again, closer now, unhurried still, from the right this time, as if it had circled her without ever crossing her line of sight." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 7.14% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |