| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.18% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1170 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 70.09% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1170 | | totalAiIsms | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "grave" | | 1 | "could feel" | | 2 | "trembled" | | 3 | "resolved" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "was afraid" | | 1 | "was afraid" |
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| 40.82% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "happen to" | | 2 | "happened to" | | 3 | "seem to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 64 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 34 | | totalWords | 1184 | | ratio | 0.029 | | matches | | 0 | "Between the third and fourth stone, where the bracken thins, at night, alone." | | 1 | "This is where I'm meant to be," | | 2 | "This is fine." | | 3 | "A Hel portal," | | 4 | "It only does that near a Hel portal." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 9 | | wordCount | 1164 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.17 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Hel" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 2 | | Park | 1 | | November | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Hel | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like the first mistake in a night" | | 1 | "quite let the word go" | | 2 | "quite believed it until this moment, standing in a clearing where the moon — if that's what hung above the canopy, low and swollen and the wrong shade of silver — didn't seem to move at all" | | 3 | "seemed closer than they'd been a moment ago, though she hadn't seen any of them move, the way you never see a clock's hand crawl but know, somehow, that it has" | | 4 | "felt like the thing it wanted" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.534 | | wordCount | 1184 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the scrubby, half-dead things she'd have expected under November trees, but full-throated blooms, white" | | 1 | "not one of the boundary oaks, but a slab of pale rock, flat-topped, like an altar" | | 2 | "not steadily, but like something with a pulse of its own, quickening" |
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| 25.82% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "up, that she" | | 1 | "does that near" | | 2 | "told that this" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 40.83 | | std | 32.49 | | cv | 0.796 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 75 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 79 | | 7 | 52 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 104 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 106 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 87 | | 18 | 66 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 73 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 87 | | 24 | 41 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 62 | | 28 | 49 |
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| 85.21% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "been told" | | 1 | "been sent" | | 2 | "been told" | | 3 | "been told" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 8 | | totalVerbs | 196 | | matches | | 0 | "was shaping" | | 1 | "were rehearsing" | | 2 | "was being" | | 3 | "were having" | | 4 | "was standing" | | 5 | "was pulsing " | | 6 | "were moving" | | 7 | "was drawing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 71 | | ratio | 0.141 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks marked the boundary the way headstones mark a grave — old, leaning, half-swallowed by moss, standing in a loose circle that Rory had to squint to see as a circle at all." | | 1 | "The word came out smaller than she meant it to, and the grove — because that was what this was, she understood that now, some fold of space that didn't belong entirely to the park anymore — did not answer, but it also didn't quite let the word go." | | 2 | "Not hot — just warm, like a coal banked low — and she wrapped her fingers around it without deciding to." | | 3 | "Nothing — just the pale flowers, the black trunks, the too-bright dark." | | 4 | "She hadn't quite believed it until this moment, standing in a clearing where the moon — if that's what hung above the canopy, low and swollen and the wrong shade of silver — didn't seem to move at all." | | 5 | "Better to treat this like a job, like a delivery — get in, get whatever this was, get out, back to the noise and the exhaust fumes and Yu-Fei shouting at her for being three minutes late with the Golden Empress order." | | 6 | "The trees pulled back into a wider clearing, and in the center of it stood a single stone — not one of the boundary oaks, but a slab of pale rock, flat-topped, like an altar or a table, half-sunk into the earth as though it had been growing up out of the ground for a thousand years and had barely broken the surface." | | 7 | "It happened all at once, a cold that slid down the back of her neck and settled into her shoulders, and with it came a smell — green and wet and faintly like the inside of a flower left too long in a vase, sweet turning to rot." | | 8 | "Actually burned now, a heat sharp enough to make her gasp and yank it away from her skin, and beneath her fingers it was pulsing — not steadily, but like something with a pulse of its own, quickening." | | 9 | "Not from wind — there was still no wind — but as if something vast and low to the ground were moving through them in a wide arc around her, unhurried, patient, the kind of patient that only comes from something that has already decided how a thing will end and is simply enjoying the shape of the waiting." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 93 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "grave — old, leaning, half-" |
| | adverbCount | 2 | | adverbRatio | 0.021505376344086023 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010752688172043012 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 71 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 71 | | mean | 16.68 | | std | 15.33 | | cv | 0.919 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 34 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 38 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 49 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 36 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 33 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 32 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 39 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 41 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 42 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 63 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 70.42% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.4647887323943662 | | totalSentences | 71 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Almost a footstep, if a" | | 1 | "Then the temperature dropped." | | 2 | "Actually burned now, a heat" | | 3 | "Instead she stood very still" |
| | ratio | 0.063 | |
| 93.02% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd been told to look" | | 1 | "She checked the pendant at" | | 2 | "She'd walked through it before," | | 3 | "She turned sideways to pass" | | 4 | "She stopped walking." | | 5 | "she said, mostly to hear" | | 6 | "It seemed to sit in" | | 7 | "She crouched to look at" | | 8 | "She kept walking because standing" | | 9 | "She watched it happen to" | | 10 | "She'd read once that fae" | | 11 | "She hadn't quite believed it" | | 12 | "She kept the pendant in" | | 13 | "She approached it slowly." | | 14 | "It happened all at once," | | 15 | "She became aware, in the" | | 16 | "She turned in a slow" | | 17 | "*It only does that near" | | 18 | "She had not been told" | | 19 | "She had not been told" |
| | ratio | 0.317 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks marked the boundary" | | 1 | "She'd been told to look" | | 2 | "Notes from unknown benefactors rarely" | | 3 | "She checked the pendant at" | | 4 | "Richmond Park at midnight was" | | 5 | "She'd walked through it before," | | 6 | "The gap between the third" | | 7 | "She turned sideways to pass" | | 8 | "She stopped walking." | | 9 | "she said, mostly to hear" | | 10 | "The word came out smaller" | | 11 | "It seemed to sit in" | | 12 | "Wildflowers grew at her feet." | | 13 | "She crouched to look at" | | 14 | "The pendant was warm now." | | 15 | "*This is where I'm meant" | | 16 | "*This is fine.*" | | 17 | "She kept walking because standing" | | 18 | "The trees here were wrong" | | 19 | "She watched it happen to" |
| | ratio | 0.698 | |
| 79.37% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "As if someone had reached" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the scrubby, half-dead things she'd have expected under November trees, but full-throated blooms, white and gold, glowing faintly of their own accord, as if…" | | 1 | "Told herself again when it happened to a tree ahead of her, one she hadn't reached yet, as though the grove were rehearsing its next move before she arrived to …" | | 2 | "She kept the pendant in her fist and made herself walk on, because turning back meant admitting she was afraid, and admitting she was afraid meant she might act…" | | 3 | "The trees pulled back into a wider clearing, and in the center of it stood a single stone — not one of the boundary oaks, but a slab of pale rock, flat-topped, …" | | 4 | "It happened all at once, a cold that slid down the back of her neck and settled into her shoulders, and with it came a smell — green and wet and faintly like th…" | | 5 | "Something rustled to her right in answer, as though the two sounds were having a conversation and she was standing in the space between." | | 6 | "Not from wind — there was still no wind — but as if something vast and low to the ground were moving through them in a wide arc around her, unhurried, patient, …" | | 7 | "Instead she stood very still at the edge of the pale stone, pendant scalding her palm, and listened to the grass part in a slow, deliberate circle that was draw…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |