| 28.57% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Bethan gestured vaguely [vaguely]" | | 1 | "Bethan said quickly [quickly]" | | 2 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.371 | | leniency | 0.743 | | rawRatio | 0.231 | | effectiveRatio | 0.171 | |
| 91.09% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1122 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 82.17% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1122 | | totalAiIsms | 4 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "absolutely" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "practiced ease" | | 3 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 43.19% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 43 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 51 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 1137 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "me" | | 1 | "it's fine" | | 2 | "know" | | 3 | "something" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 46.07% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 866 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 2.08 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Mrs | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Silas | 4 | | Pryce | 1 | | Bethan | 10 | | Cardiff | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Raven" | | 2 | "Mrs" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Pryce" | | 5 | "Bethan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "Golden" | | 2 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.461 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 24.10% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.759 | | wordCount | 1137 | | matches | | 0 | "not Silas, one of the younger ones — had brought Rory a whisky she hadn't ordered but somehow needed" | | 1 | "not from humor, but from the sheer accuracy of it landing somewhere she didn't e" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 34.45 | | std | 28.13 | | cv | 0.816 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 94 | | 1 | 70 | | 2 | 1 | | 3 | 86 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 36 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 58 | | 9 | 53 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 37 | | 15 | 63 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 48 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 106 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 38 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 55 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 63 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 21 |
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| 80.78% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | | 0 | "being tired" | | 1 | "being lived " | | 2 | "was meant" | | 3 | "being looked" |
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| 14.81% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 144 | | matches | | 0 | "was strangling" | | 1 | "was watching" | | 2 | "was deciding" | | 3 | "was testing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 64 | | ratio | 0.109 | | matches | | 0 | "But something made her look twice — the particular way the woman held her glass, thumb hooked over the rim like she was strangling it, a habit Rory hadn't seen in six years and hadn't known she'd remembered until this exact moment." | | 1 | "Bethan Pryce looked older in the way people look older who have spent a decade being tired rather than a decade being lived — soft where she used to be sharp, her hair darker at the roots than the ends, like she couldn't be bothered to keep up the dye job anymore." | | 2 | "She gave him a small shake of her head — *it's fine* — and he went back to his glasses, though she knew he'd be listening anyway." | | 3 | "\"So,\" Bethan said, once the barman — not Silas, one of the younger ones — had brought Rory a whisky she hadn't ordered but somehow needed." | | 4 | "Rory kept her face still — she'd gotten good at that, better than good — but her fingers tightened around the whisky." | | 5 | "Rory almost laughed — not from humor, but from the sheer accuracy of it landing somewhere she didn't expect to be hit." | | 6 | "She'd never been the pushing kind — that had always been Rory's job, back when Rory had still believed most problems could be solved by asking the right question loudly enough." |
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| 90.18% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 859 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.051222351571594875 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012805587892898719 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 64 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 64 | | mean | 17.77 | | std | 14.08 | | cv | 0.793 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 44 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 52 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 44 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 49 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 34 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 44 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 37 | | 42 | 41 | | 43 | 38 | | 44 | 27 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 72.92% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.484375 | | totalSentences | 64 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "Almost walked past her the" | | 1 | "Instead she reached over and" |
| | ratio | 0.05 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd give it another few" | | 1 | "She almost didn't see the" | | 2 | "She said it like a" | | 3 | "She gave him a small" | | 4 | "He always was." | | 5 | "It wasn't a lie" | | 6 | "It also wasn't the whole" | | 7 | "She made a gesture that" | | 8 | "she said finally" | | 9 | "It was such a plain" | | 10 | "She thought of Silas watching" | | 11 | "She'd never been the pushing" |
| | ratio | 0.3 | |
| 35.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain had turned Soho" | | 1 | "Cheung's usual customer hadn't answered" | | 2 | "She'd give it another few" | | 3 | "The bar was quiet for" | | 4 | "She almost didn't see the" | | 5 | "The woman turned, and for" | | 6 | "Bethan Pryce looked older in" | | 7 | "She said it like a" | | 8 | "Rory set the delivery bag" | | 9 | "Bethan gestured vaguely, as if" | | 10 | "Rory glanced toward the bar," | | 11 | "She gave him a small" | | 12 | "He always was." | | 13 | "Bethan said, once the barman" | | 14 | "It wasn't a lie" | | 15 | "It also wasn't the whole" | | 16 | "Bethan turned the word over" | | 17 | "She made a gesture that" | | 18 | "Bethan repeated, and there was" | | 19 | "The name landed like a" |
| | ratio | 0.85 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 49.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 23 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Bethan didn't know about the flat above the bar, or the hidden room behind the bookshelf, or the things Rory had learned to do with a blade in the dark that had…" | | 1 | "Bethan knew a girl who cried during storms and hated confrontation and once threw up before a court moot because she was so afraid of being watched." | | 2 | "She thought of Silas watching her from behind the bar, of the quiet danger that had become the architecture of her days, of how rarely anymore she thought of Ca…" |
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| 86.54% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Bethan gestured vaguely, as if the last six years could be summed up in the wave of a hand" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Bethan repeated (repeat)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.057 | |