Run: 2026-07-01-01KWEA7CG8GQD5XX6V6KCJTFMJ

Run Details

Duration:
37.3s
Cost:
$0.025496
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had followed Rory all the way from Camden, soaking through the shoulders of her jacket by the time she pushed open the door of the Raven's Nest. The green neon sign buzzed faintly overhead, throwing its sickly light across the wet pavement, and she was grateful for the warmth that met her inside — the smell of old wood and spilled whiskey, the low murmur of conversation, the black-and-white photographs on the walls watching her like a jury of the dead. She'd worked a twelve-hour shift for the Golden Empress, her bag of delivery boxes finally empty, her feet aching in a way that made her wonder, not for the first time, why she hadn't stayed in Cardiff and finished the law degree her father had paid for. She wanted a drink. She wanted her own bed above this bar, three flights up, where Silas kept the heating too high and never asked questions she didn't want to answer. She didn't expect to see Eva. But there she was, at the far end of the bar, hunched over a glass of something amber, her blonde hair cropped short now instead of the long plait she used to wear tied with elastic bands stolen from the school office. Rory almost didn't recognize her. The Eva she remembered had been soft around the edges, always laughing, always the one who dragged Rory out of whatever dark spiral she'd fallen into. This woman looked carved out of something harder. Her cheekbones stood too sharp against her skin, and there was a stillness to her that hadn't been there before, like she was conserving energy for something. "Eva?" The woman turned, and for a second there was nothing in her face at all, and Rory's stomach dropped, because maybe she'd made a mistake, maybe this was some stranger who happened to share her friend's bones. Then something flickered behind the eyes, a door opening a crack. "Rory." Eva's voice was rougher than it used to be, like she'd taken up smoking, or shouting, or both. "Christ. Rory Carter." "It's just Rory now. Well — Carter, some people call me. Long story." She slid onto the stool beside her, dripping rain onto the polished wood. "What are you doing in London? I thought you were still in Cardiff." "I was." Eva turned her glass a slow half-circle on the bar top, not quite meeting her eyes. "For a while." Silas appeared from behind the bar, wiping his hands on a cloth that had seen cleaner days, his hazel eyes flicking between the two women with the quiet assessment of a man who'd spent thirty years reading rooms for a living. "The usual, Rory?" "Please, Si." He poured without asking Eva anything, which told Rory he'd already served her once tonight, maybe more than once. He set the glass down and retreated to the other end of the bar, close enough to overhear if he wanted to, far enough to pretend he wasn't. "You look good," Eva said, though it came out like a question. "I look like I've been carrying takeaway boxes up five flights of stairs all day, which I have." Rory laughed, but it died in the air between them, unanswered. "You look—" She stopped herself. She'd been about to say *different*, but that felt insufficient, felt like it was skirting the real word, which was *diminished*. "It's been what, six years?" "Seven." Eva said it too fast, like she'd been counting. Seven years since Eva had shown up outside Rory's flat in Cardiff at two in the morning, hammering on the door, telling her to get her things, that she knew a place in London, that she wasn't going to watch Evan do to her what he'd already started doing. Seven years since Eva had driven her the entire way in her rusted-out Fiesta, singing along badly to the radio to keep Rory from crying, or maybe to keep herself from it. "I never got the chance to thank you properly," Rory said. "For that night. I don't think I ever said it right." Eva's mouth twisted into something that wasn't quite a smile. "You don't have to thank me for that." "I do, though." "You really don't." There was an edge in it now, something Rory hadn't expected, and Eva took a long pull from her glass like she was trying to drown the words before they surfaced further. "I didn't exactly stick around to see how the thank-you would've gone, did I." That was true. Eva had dropped her at the mouth of this very street, told her to call once she'd found her feet, and then she'd simply — vanished. No calls returned. No messages answered. Rory had spent the better part of two years wondering what she'd done wrong, before deciding it was easier to assume Eva had just moved on, the way people did, the way lives forked without warning and left you standing at the wrong end of the road. "Where'd you go?" Rory asked. "After." Eva was quiet for a long moment. The bar noise filled the space where her answer should have been — someone's laughter near the door, the clink of ice, Silas murmuring something to a man in a flat cap at the far end. "Manchester, for a bit. Then some other places. It doesn't matter." She finally looked at Rory properly, and there was something raw in it, something that made Rory's chest tighten. "I made a mess of things, Ror. Bad choices. People. You don't want the details." "I might." "You don't." It wasn't unkind, just final, the way a door closes when someone's decided the conversation on the other side of it is over. "I heard you were doing alright, though. Someone said you were in London. I didn't believe it at first." "Small world." "Small enough that I walked into this exact bar tonight." Eva laughed, but there was no humor in it, just a kind of exhausted disbelief. "I wasn't even looking for you. I want you to know that. I wasn't — this isn't some grand reunion I planned." "I know." Rory did know. She could see it in the way Eva held herself, like she'd wandered in out of the rain the same as anyone else, looking for warmth, not looking for ghosts. They sat like that for a while, the silence stretching comfortably and then uncomfortably and then comfortably again, two women who used to finish each other's sentences now searching for the shape of new ones. Rory thought about all the versions of Eva that existed only in memory now — the girl who'd stolen hair elastics, who'd once cried at a Sunday afternoon film about a dog, who'd driven through the night without complaint because a friend needed saving. She wondered if that girl was still in there somewhere, folded up small beneath all the years that had happened since, or if she'd been spent entirely, used up in the driving and the leaving and whatever came after that neither of them would ever quite say out loud. "I should go," Eva said eventually, though she didn't move. "You don't have to." "I know." She smiled, and for just a second, it was the old smile, the real one. "But I think I will anyway." She left a note of money on the bar, more than the drink cost, and Rory watched her go, the door swinging shut behind her, the green neon sign flickering once through the glass before the rain swallowed her whole.
created_at"2026-07-01T07:45:17.844Z" 7/1/2026, 7:45:17 AM
model"anthropic/claude-sonnet-5-20260630"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency1465
moderation_latency132
generation_time36222
tokens_prompt867
tokens_completion1802
native_tokens_prompt1238
native_tokens_completion2302
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning0
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"end_turn"
service_tier"default"
usage0.025496
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"37b16f45-eeae-45f3-9b85-2137f7c6d61b"
id"msg_01QcryqMyuQkk82AtxJgj3DB"
is_byokfalse
latency1465
model_permaslug"anthropic/claude-sonnet-5-20260630"
provider_name"Amazon Bedrock"
status200
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.17.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1782891918-LK8TfB9aeQc9REXtpr0U"
session_id(null)
preset_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1782891918-6CIxxzQoywRJ48BGUV4I"
upstream_id"msg_01QcryqMyuQkk82AtxJgj3DB"
total_cost0.025496
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Amazon Bedrock"
response_cache_source_id(null)
data_region"global"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva said eventually [eventually]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.457
leniency0.914
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.057
92.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1259
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
80.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1259
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"stomach"
2"flickered"
3"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences48
matches
0"was grateful"
83.33% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences48
filterMatches
0"wonder"
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences67
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1265
ratio0.002
matches
0"different"
1"diminished"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount1043
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.73
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory17
Camden1
Raven1
Nest1
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff2
Silas3
Eva18
Seven2
London1
Evan1
Fiesta1
Sunday1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Silas"
3"Eva"
4"Evan"
5"Fiesta"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
2"Sunday"
globalScore0.637
windowScore0.5
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences39
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"not quite meeting her eyes"
1"felt like it was skirting the real word"
2"quite a smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1265
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean37.21
std31.98
cv0.86
sampleLengths
083
178
26
3108
41
548
622
739
821
944
102
1147
1212
1360
1410
1581
1622
1718
183
1949
2082
216
2243
2345
242
2544
262
2747
2835
29128
3010
314
3223
3340
97.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences48
matches
0"been spent"
87.64% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs178
matches
0"was conserving"
1"was skirting"
2"was trying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences67
ratio0.06
matches
0"The green neon sign buzzed faintly overhead, throwing its sickly light across the wet pavement, and she was grateful for the warmth that met her inside — the smell of old wood and spilled whiskey, the low murmur of conversation, the black-and-white photographs on the walls watching her like a jury of the dead."
1"Eva had dropped her at the mouth of this very street, told her to call once she'd found her feet, and then she'd simply — vanished."
2"The bar noise filled the space where her answer should have been — someone's laughter near the door, the clink of ice, Silas murmuring something to a man in a flat cap at the far end."
3"Rory thought about all the versions of Eva that existed only in memory now — the girl who'd stolen hair elastics, who'd once cried at a Sunday afternoon film about a dog, who'd driven through the night without complaint because a friend needed saving."
90.58% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1044
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount53
adverbRatio0.05076628352490421
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.012452107279693486
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences67
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences67
mean18.88
std14.9
cv0.789
sampleLengths
029
154
247
34
427
56
642
75
826
98
1027
111
1237
1311
1419
153
1626
1713
1818
193
2041
213
222
2319
2428
2512
2629
275
2821
295
3010
3149
3232
3311
3411
3510
368
373
3835
3914
403
4126
423
433
4447
455
461
477
4836
4930
45.77% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.373134328358209
totalSentences67
uniqueOpeners25
72.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences46
matches
0"Then something flickered behind the"
ratio0.022
72.17% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences46
matches
0"She'd worked a twelve-hour shift"
1"She wanted a drink."
2"She wanted her own bed"
3"She didn't expect to see"
4"Her cheekbones stood too sharp"
5"She slid onto the stool"
6"He poured without asking Eva"
7"He set the glass down"
8"She stopped herself"
9"She'd been about to say"
10"She finally looked at Rory"
11"It wasn't unkind, just final,"
12"She could see it in"
13"They sat like that for"
14"She wondered if that girl"
15"She smiled, and for just"
16"She left a note of"
ratio0.37
36.09% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount39
totalSentences46
matches
0"The rain had followed Rory"
1"The green neon sign buzzed"
2"She'd worked a twelve-hour shift"
3"She wanted a drink."
4"She wanted her own bed"
5"She didn't expect to see"
6"Rory almost didn't recognize her."
7"The Eva she remembered had"
8"This woman looked carved out"
9"Her cheekbones stood too sharp"
10"The woman turned, and for"
11"Eva's voice was rougher than"
12"She slid onto the stool"
13"Eva turned her glass a"
14"Silas appeared from behind the"
15"He poured without asking Eva"
16"He set the glass down"
17"Eva said, though it came"
18"Rory laughed, but it died"
19"She stopped herself"
ratio0.848
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The green neon sign buzzed faintly overhead, throwing its sickly light across the wet pavement, and she was grateful for the warmth that met her inside — the sm…"
1"Her cheekbones stood too sharp against her skin, and there was a stillness to her that hadn't been there before, like she was conserving energy for something."
2"Silas appeared from behind the bar, wiping his hands on a cloth that had seen cleaner days, his hazel eyes flicking between the two women with the quiet assessm…"
3"He poured without asking Eva anything, which told Rory he'd already served her once tonight, maybe more than once."
4"She'd been about to say *different*, but that felt insufficient, felt like it was skirting the real word, which was *diminished*."
5"They sat like that for a while, the silence stretching comfortably and then uncomfortably and then comfortably again, two women who used to finish each other's …"
6"She wondered if that girl was still in there somewhere, folded up small beneath all the years that had happened since, or if she'd been spent entirely, used up …"
93.75% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva turned, not quite meeting her eyes"
92.86% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Rory laughed (laugh)"
1"Eva laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.114
76.4937%