Run: 2026-07-01-01KWEAEGT02WJEMMX8BEPZSQJQ

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35.7s
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Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had followed her all the way from Chinatown, needling through her jacket collar, and by the time Rory pushed through the door of The Raven's Nest, the green neon sign hissing behind her, all she wanted was the particular warmth of Silas's bar—the smell of good whisky and older secrets, the low murmur of men who'd learned long ago not to speak too loudly about anything. She didn't expect to see Eva. She almost didn't recognize her at first. Eva Whitfield had put on the kind of polish that money buys—a wool coat the color of dark plums, hair cut into a sleek bob that made her look older and somehow more tired, despite the obvious expense of it. She was sitting at the far end of the bar, turning a gin and tonic in slow circles, and when she looked up and saw Rory standing there dripping on the floorboards, her face did something complicated—surprise, then delight, then something else Rory couldn't quite name. "Rory Carter," Eva said, and stood, nearly knocking over her barstool. "Christ. It is you." "Eva." Rory found herself smiling before she'd decided to. Six years. Longer, maybe, if she counted properly, though counting properly meant counting from the last night in Cardiff before everything went sideways, and she preferred not to do that kind of arithmetic. They hugged, awkwardly, the way people do when the last version of each other they remember doesn't quite match the one now standing in front of them. Eva smelled like expensive perfume and cigarettes she probably swore she'd quit. Rory smelled, she was fairly sure, like ginger and soy sauce and the inside of a delivery bag. "What are you even doing in London?" Eva asked, pulling back to look at her properly. "God, I thought you were still in Cardiff, finishing your degree, marrying some barrister like your dad wanted." "Things changed." Rory slid onto the stool beside her, and Silas, without being asked, set a glass of the Talisker in front of her—neat, the way she'd been drinking it since the nights got long and the debts got complicated. He gave Eva the briefest glance, cataloguing her the way he cataloged everyone, and then retreated to the far end of the bar to polish glasses that were already clean. "Clearly." Eva's eyes moved over her—the black hair cut shorter now, the leanness in her face that hadn't been there before, something in the way she held her shoulders, like she was always half-listening for a door. "You look—I don't know. Different. Good, but different." "You look like you married well," Rory said, nodding at the coat. Eva laughed, a real laugh, and for a second the six years folded up small enough to disappear. "Simon. You'd hate him. Or you'd like him too much, one or the other." She sipped her drink. "We have a house in Richmond. A dog. It's all very—" She waved a hand, as if the word she wanted had evaporated before she could catch it. "Domestic," Rory offered. "Domestic. Yes." Eva didn't sound entirely pleased about it, which Rory noted the way she noted most things now—filed away, unremarked upon, useful perhaps later, perhaps never. "What about you? Last I heard from anyone, you were still with Evan, still miserable, and none of us knew how to say anything because you'd stopped answering." The name landed like a dropped glass, and Rory kept her face still, the way Silas had taught her—not a flicker, not a tell, nothing that could be read across a table. "I left him," she said. "Three years ago now." "Good." Eva said it fiercely, surprising them both. "God, Rory, we were so worried. I used to lie awake— I should have come. I should have driven up there and dragged you out myself, but Simon said it wasn't our business, and I let him say it, and I've hated myself a little for that ever since." "There wasn't anything you could have done." It was true, mostly. Rory had needed to do it herself, in the end, at three in the morning with a duffel bag and a bus ticket and Eva's own voice on the phone saying *come to London, come now, I'll sort the rest*—except by the time Rory actually left, Eva had already moved to Richmond with Simon and the dog, and it was Silas's number a mutual friend had passed along instead, Silas who'd needed a delivery girl and, it turned out, so much more than that. "So what do you do now?" Eva asked. "For work, I mean. You look like you've landed on your feet, whatever happened." Rory turned her glass a quarter turn on the bar, watching the light catch the whisky. "I deliver food. Chinese place in Soho. And I do a bit of work for Silas here." She nodded toward the man behind the bar, who did not look up but who was, she knew, listening to every word with the particular attention of a man who forgot nothing. "That's it?" Eva's brow creased, kindly, the way it used to when Rory brought home a B-minus on something she should have aced. "You were meant to be a barrister, Rory. You were the smartest person I knew. You could've run circles round any of them." "Things change," Rory said again, because it was easier than the truth, which had teeth and secret rooms behind bookshelves and men who paid in information instead of money, and a version of herself that answered to other names now when the work required it. Malphora. Laila. Names that fit like borrowed coats, useful, disposable. Eva studied her for a long moment, and something crossed her face—not judgment exactly, but a kind of grief, as if she'd only just realized the friend she'd been drinking with wasn't quite the one she'd come looking for, wherever she'd expected to find her. "I miss who we were," she said quietly. "Is that a stupid thing to say?" "No," Rory said, and meant it, and felt the old ache under her ribs, the one that never fully left. "It's not stupid at all." They sat a while longer, the rain ticking against the windows, the neon sign outside humming its steady green, and neither of them tried very hard to close the distance that had opened up between who they'd been and who they'd become—only sat with it, glasses in hand, like two people visiting a grave they'd both, in their own ways, helped to dig.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Rory said again [again]"
1"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.621
leniency1
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.111
90.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1103
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1103
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"cataloged"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"grave"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"cataloged"
2"flicker"
3"grave"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences39
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences39
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences49
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen84
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords9
totalWords1093
ratio0.008
matches
0"come to London, come now, I'll sort the rest"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
54.99% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount842
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.9
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Chinatown1
Rory16
Raven1
Nest1
Silas5
Eva15
Whitfield1
Six1
Cardiff1
Talisker1
London1
Richmond1
Simon1
Malphora1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Silas"
3"Eva"
4"Whitfield"
5"Simon"
places
0"Chinatown"
1"Six"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
4"Richmond"
globalScore0.55
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"quite name"
1"quite match the one now standing in front of them"
2"smelled like expensive perfume and cigaret"
3"quite the one she'd come looking for, wherever she'd expected to find her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.915
wordCount1093
matches
0"not judgment exactly, but a kind of grief, as if she'd only just realized the friend s"
98.64% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences49
matches
0"do that kind"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean47.52
std24.64
cv0.518
sampleLengths
068
16
293
315
442
557
634
770
845
912
1064
113
1255
1341
1457
1595
1622
1765
1846
1955
2060
2125
2263
96.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences39
matches
0"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs151
matches
0"was sitting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences49
ratio0.204
matches
0"The rain had followed her all the way from Chinatown, needling through her jacket collar, and by the time Rory pushed through the door of The Raven's Nest, the green neon sign hissing behind her, all she wanted was the particular warmth of Silas's bar—the smell of good whisky and older secrets, the low murmur of men who'd learned long ago not to speak too loudly about anything."
1"Eva Whitfield had put on the kind of polish that money buys—a wool coat the color of dark plums, hair cut into a sleek bob that made her look older and somehow more tired, despite the obvious expense of it."
2"She was sitting at the far end of the bar, turning a gin and tonic in slow circles, and when she looked up and saw Rory standing there dripping on the floorboards, her face did something complicated—surprise, then delight, then something else Rory couldn't quite name."
3"\"Things changed.\" Rory slid onto the stool beside her, and Silas, without being asked, set a glass of the Talisker in front of her—neat, the way she'd been drinking it since the nights got long and the debts got complicated."
4"\"Clearly.\" Eva's eyes moved over her—the black hair cut shorter now, the leanness in her face that hadn't been there before, something in the way she held her shoulders, like she was always half-listening for a door."
5"\"Domestic. Yes.\" Eva didn't sound entirely pleased about it, which Rory noted the way she noted most things now—filed away, unremarked upon, useful perhaps later, perhaps never."
6"The name landed like a dropped glass, and Rory kept her face still, the way Silas had taught her—not a flicker, not a tell, nothing that could be read across a table."
7"Rory had needed to do it herself, in the end, at three in the morning with a duffel bag and a bus ticket and Eva's own voice on the phone saying *come to London, come now, I'll sort the rest*—except by the time Rory actually left, Eva had already moved to Richmond with Simon and the dog, and it was Silas's number a mutual friend had passed along instead, Silas who'd needed a delivery girl and, it turned out, so much more than that."
8"Eva studied her for a long moment, and something crossed her face—not judgment exactly, but a kind of grief, as if she'd only just realized the friend she'd been drinking with wasn't quite the one she'd come looking for, wherever she'd expected to find her."
9"They sat a while longer, the rain ticking against the windows, the neon sign outside humming its steady green, and neither of them tried very hard to close the distance that had opened up between who they'd been and who they'd become—only sat with it, glasses in hand, like two people visiting a grave they'd both, in their own ways, helped to dig."
89.90% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount852
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.05046948356807512
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.02112676056338028
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences49
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences49
mean22.31
std18.81
cv0.843
sampleLengths
068
16
27
340
446
511
64
79
82
931
1027
1112
1218
1316
1418
1540
1630
1737
188
1912
2018
2118
2228
233
2427
2528
2632
275
284
298
3049
3111
3284
338
3414
3516
3649
3723
3823
3945
401
411
428
4345
448
457
4620
475
4863
93.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.6122448979591837
totalSentences49
uniqueOpeners30
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences33
matches(empty)
ratio0
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences33
matches
0"She didn't expect to see"
1"She almost didn't recognize her"
2"She was sitting at the"
3"They hugged, awkwardly, the way"
4"He gave Eva the briefest"
5"She sipped her drink"
6"She waved a hand, as"
7"It was true, mostly"
8"She nodded toward the man"
9"she said quietly"
10"They sat a while longer,"
ratio0.333
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount32
totalSentences33
matches
0"The rain had followed her"
1"She didn't expect to see"
2"She almost didn't recognize her"
3"Eva Whitfield had put on"
4"She was sitting at the"
5"Eva said, and stood, nearly"
6"Rory found herself smiling before"
7"They hugged, awkwardly, the way"
8"Eva smelled like expensive perfume"
9"Rory smelled, she was fairly"
10"Eva asked, pulling back to"
11"Rory slid onto the stool"
12"He gave Eva the briefest"
13"Eva's eyes moved over her—the"
14"Rory said, nodding at the"
15"Eva laughed, a real laugh,"
16"She sipped her drink"
17"She waved a hand, as"
18"Eva didn't sound entirely pleased"
19"The name landed like a"
ratio0.97
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences33
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences14
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The rain had followed her all the way from Chinatown, needling through her jacket collar, and by the time Rory pushed through the door of The Raven's Nest, the …"
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4"They sat a while longer, the rain ticking against the windows, the neon sign outside humming its steady green, and neither of them tried very hard to close the …"
97.22% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She waved, as if the word she wanted had evaporated before she could catch it"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.31
leniency0.621
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.9750%