| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Naomi said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 55 | | tagDensity | 0.327 | | leniency | 0.655 | | rawRatio | 0.056 | | effectiveRatio | 0.036 | |
| 88.03% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2088 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "completely" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 85.63% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2088 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "dance" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "footsteps" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "n with surprise" | | 1 | "was proud" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 148 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 48 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2104 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 24 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 93 | | wordCount | 1534 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 2.09 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 5 | | worstWindowName | "Naomi" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Golden | 2 | | Empress | 2 | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 5 | | Wednesday | 1 | | Silas | 8 | | Laila | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 32 | | Price | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Naomi | 32 | | Pot | 1 | | Noodles | 1 | | Eva | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Laila" | | 4 | "Carter" | | 5 | "Rory" | | 6 | "Price" | | 7 | "Naomi" | | 8 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "Golden" | | 2 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.457 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "way that seemed to belong to a different species of human entirely" | | 1 | "looked like tailored trousers and heels t" | | 2 | "smelled like something floral and specific" | | 3 | "quite find their way back to ease" | | 4 | "looked like weakness showed something els" |
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| 57.41% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 1.426 | | wordCount | 2104 | | matches | | 0 | "not a handbag, but the kind of structured, oversized briefcase-purse hybrid" | | 1 | "not an invitation but something closer to a command, the way Silas said things" | | 2 | "not corporate but it matters" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 148 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 63 | | mean | 33.4 | | std | 27.42 | | cv | 0.821 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 79 | | 1 | 88 | | 2 | 93 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 51 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 89 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 60 | | 11 | 64 | | 12 | 40 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 59 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 37 | | 17 | 53 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 59 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 65 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 59 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 39 | | 30 | 63 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 36 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 71 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 53 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 39 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 73 | | 43 | 33 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 73 | | 47 | 64 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 44 |
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| 95.86% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "were painted" | | 1 | "been left" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 250 | | matches | | 0 | "was already moving" | | 1 | "was spending" | | 2 | "was looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 148 | | ratio | 0.068 | | matches | | 0 | "She ate without really tasting, her bright blue eyes drifting across the walls as they always did when she was tired — over the old maps, the black-and-white photographs of places she couldn't identify, the faded edges of a world that had existed before she was born." | | 1 | "She carried a leather bag over one shoulder — not a handbag, but the kind of structured, oversized briefcase-purse hybrid that Rory associated with people who had actual careers." | | 2 | "\"Rory Carter.\" Naomi stopped in front of her, and something flickered across her expression — a quick inventory, the kind people do when they haven't seen someone in years and can't help counting the changes." | | 3 | "\"Sit down,\" Rory said, and immediately felt foolish for the way it came out — not an invitation but something closer to a command, the way Silas said things." | | 4 | "\"Two years now. Qualified at Herbert Smith, then moved to Hartwell. Family law mostly — divorce, custody, that sort of thing. It's not corporate but it matters.\" Naomi paused, and there it was — the turn." | | 5 | "She looked at Naomi's hands — the manicured nails, the thin gold band on her right ring finger." | | 6 | "\"You don't. That's rather the point.\" Naomi reached out and touched the back of Rory's hand — just briefly, just her fingertips against Rory's skin, catching for an instant on the small crescent scar on her left wrist before withdrawing." | | 7 | "Naomi considered this with the kind of careful seriousness that Rory remembered from late-night study sessions, from the way Naomi used to approach a legal problem — methodically, turning it over until she found the angle that unlocked it." | | 8 | "She thought about the night she'd left Cardiff — Eva's voice on the phone saying come now, don't pack, just go." | | 9 | "She raised one hand — not a wave, exactly, more like a promise — and then she was gone, and the rain swallowed her footsteps, and the bar settled back into its amber quiet." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1535 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 59 | | adverbRatio | 0.038436482084690554 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010423452768729642 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 148 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 148 | | mean | 14.22 | | std | 11.21 | | cv | 0.789 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 36 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 47 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 29 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 35 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 40 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 29 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 37.84% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.2905405405405405 | | totalSentences | 148 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 64.72% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the recognition hit like" | | 1 | "Then she closed the container" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 87.96% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "She pushed through the service" | | 1 | "He glanced up at her" | | 2 | "He shook his head, the" | | 3 | "She ate without really tasting," | | 4 | "She turned on the stool." | | 5 | "Her dark hair was cut" | | 6 | "She carried a leather bag" | | 7 | "It took Rory three full" | | 8 | "They had been inseparable at" | | 9 | "She looked exactly the same" | | 10 | "Her face had thinned, sharpened." | | 11 | "She wore subtle makeup now," | | 12 | "It drew people in." | | 13 | "She was spending too much" | | 14 | "She was looking around the" | | 15 | "He had that way of" | | 16 | "He looked at Rory with" | | 17 | "He moved away." | | 18 | "She looked at Naomi's hands" | | 19 | "She used to smudge her" |
| | ratio | 0.33 | |
| 37.67% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 87 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain had been falling" | | 1 | "Rory came down the back" | | 2 | "She pushed through the service" | | 3 | "The bar was quiet for" | | 4 | "He glanced up at her" | | 5 | "He shook his head, the" | | 6 | "Rory settled onto her usual" | | 7 | "The smell of soy and" | | 8 | "She ate without really tasting," | | 9 | "Silas had never explained any" | | 10 | "The door opened, letting in" | | 11 | "Rory didn't turn." | | 12 | "People came and went." | | 13 | "That was the nature of" | | 14 | "The plastic fork stopped halfway" | | 15 | "She turned on the stool." | | 16 | "The woman standing just inside" | | 17 | "Her dark hair was cut" | | 18 | "She carried a leather bag" | | 19 | "It took Rory three full" |
| | ratio | 0.845 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "To Silas she was Rory," | | 1 | "As if what Rory had" | | 2 | "As if running was an" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 37.04% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "A few regulars hunched over their pints in the far corner, and Silas stood behind the counter polishing glasses with the unhurried patience of a man who had lea…" | | 1 | "She ate without really tasting, her bright blue eyes drifting across the walls as they always did when she was tired — over the old maps, the black-and-white ph…" | | 2 | "The woman standing just inside the doorway was tall and polished in a way that seemed to belong to a different species of human entirely." | | 3 | "Her dark hair was cut in a sharp bob that framed her face, and she wore a cream-coloured wool coat over what looked like tailored trousers and heels that clicke…" | | 4 | "She carried a leather bag over one shoulder — not a handbag, but the kind of structured, oversized briefcase-purse hybrid that Rory associated with people who h…" | | 5 | "As if what Rory had done was something brave instead of something desperate." | | 6 | "She wanted to argue, to push back, but Naomi had always had this way of reframing things, of turning a problem on its head until the side that looked like weakn…" | | 7 | "She watched Naomi stand, watched her smooth down her coat, watched her transform back into the polished solicitor who belonged to a world of offices and meeting…" |
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| 97.22% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Naomi said, as if they'd been in the middle of a conversation rather than at the edge of one" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 55 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |