| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.61% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1737 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "really" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "truly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.31% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1737 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "stomach" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "resolve" | | 4 | "vibrated" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "quickened" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "stark" | | 10 | "calculating" | | 11 | "could feel" | | 12 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 143 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 143 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 143 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 14 | | totalWords | 1751 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "It knows I'm coming. It's waiting." | | 1 | "Steady, Rory. Steady. We'll sort it." | | 2 | "It's waiting." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The knife was not for protection, she told herself." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1726 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.7 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 11 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | London | 3 | | Rory | 12 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 3 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 98.45% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Something between the two, as if the air itself" | | 1 | "seemed closer brighter, as if the sky had lowered itself toward the earth and was pressing down" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.571 | | wordCount | 1751 | | matches | | 0 | "not in the wind, because there was no wind, but as if they were leaning inward, closing the circle, narrowin" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 143 | | matches | | 0 | "written that the" | | 1 | "saw that the" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 43.78 | | std | 28.7 | | cv | 0.656 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 75 | | 2 | 85 | | 3 | 70 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 71 | | 7 | 78 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 64 | | 12 | 46 | | 13 | 73 | | 14 | 66 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 58 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 51 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 54 | | 22 | 95 | | 23 | 67 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 82 | | 26 | 51 | | 27 | 69 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 62 | | 30 | 32 | | 31 | 57 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 96 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 33 | | 37 | 53 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 8 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 143 | | matches | | |
| 60.63% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 287 | | matches | | 0 | "was pressing" | | 1 | "was watching" | | 2 | "was doing" | | 3 | "was not trying" | | 4 | "was testing" | | 5 | "was waiting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 143 | | ratio | 0.105 | | matches | | 0 | "What Eva's notes hadn't captured was the way the stones made her feel — a deep, primal unease that coiled in her stomach and refused to unclench." | | 1 | "Eva had written that the pendant responded to portals — to places where the boundary between worlds grew thin." | | 2 | "The temperature held, but the quality of the air was different — thicker, sweeter, carrying a scent she couldn't name." | | 3 | "The pages were dense with her friend's cramped handwriting, marginalia in three different ink colours, sketches of standing stones and wildflower patterns and a symbol that recurred like a motif — a circle bisected by a wavy line." | | 4 | "She was good under pressure; always had been." | | 5 | "The night held its breath around her, and in that held breath, she became aware of something else — a low, almost subsonic hum that vibrated in her molars and the joints of her jaw." | | 6 | "Not wrong in a way she could articulate — the constellations were there, familiar patterns in their expected positions, but they seemed closer, brighter, as if the sky had lowered itself toward the earth and was pressing down." | | 7 | "Not dramatically — a shift of inches, perhaps, the carpet of glowing petals rearranged so that the pattern they formed was different." | | 8 | "The hum climbed higher still, and now she could hear something beneath it — a wet, rhythmic sound, like breathing, but not." | | 9 | "Her mind was doing what it always did under threat — cataloguing options, calculating exits, running scenarios." | | 10 | "The trees at the far edge of the clearing shifted — not in the wind, because there was no wind, but as if they were leaning inward, closing the circle, narrowing the space." | | 11 | "She looked down at it and saw that the crimson glow had developed a pulse within its pulse — a secondary rhythm, faster, more erratic, like a heart beating too hard." | | 12 | "She snapped her head toward it and saw nothing — but the wildflowers in that spot had flattened, pressed to the ground as if something heavy had stepped there." | | 13 | "She could feel the air moving — displaced, pushed toward her in slow exhalations that carried the scent of the grove intensified, that not-floral, not-decay smell turned up to a concentration that made her eyes water." | | 14 | "And at the edge of the clearing, half-hidden by the ancient oaks, a figure stood watching — human-shaped, wrong-proportioned, its face a smooth expanse of pale skin where features should have been." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 225 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 7 | | adverbRatio | 0.03111111111111111 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013333333333333334 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 143 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 143 | | mean | 12.24 | | std | 10.01 | | cv | 0.818 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 29 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 38 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 33.22% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 24 | | diversityRatio | 0.22377622377622378 | | totalSentences | 143 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 72.31% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused at the edge" | | 1 | "She had passed joggers early" | | 2 | "She checked her phone." | | 3 | "She pocketed it quickly and" | | 4 | "It was just sensible." | | 5 | "It happened instantly, a shift" | | 6 | "They should have been grey" | | 7 | "She took a second step." | | 8 | "She didn't look down to" | | 9 | "She opened Eva's journal." | | 10 | "Her last entry read simply:" | | 11 | "Her hands were steady." | | 12 | "She was good under pressure;" | | 13 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 14 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 15 | "It was hot now, almost" | | 16 | "She pulled it free of" | | 17 | "She was not alone." | | 18 | "It was simply there, complete" | | 19 | "She turned again, slower this" |
| | ratio | 0.369 | |
| 33.08% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 111 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "Rory had expected them, of" | | 2 | "Eva's notes had been precise:" | | 3 | "She paused at the edge" | | 4 | "The tube ride had taken" | | 5 | "The walk through darkened paths" | | 6 | "She had passed joggers early" | | 7 | "The distant grind of traffic" | | 8 | "The sodium glow of streetlamps" | | 9 | "She checked her phone." | | 10 | "The screen seemed too bright," | | 11 | "She pocketed it quickly and" | | 12 | "The knife was not for" | | 13 | "It was just sensible." | | 14 | "The Heartstone pulsed again, warmer" | | 15 | "Eva had written that the" | | 16 | "The grove was supposed to" | | 17 | "The reason Rory had come." | | 18 | "Eva had been missing for" | | 19 | "Rory stepped between two of" |
| | ratio | 0.854 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | | 0 | "By the time she reached" | | 1 | "If she walked back the" | | 2 | "To the left, near the" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 16.13% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "They should have been grey or black at this hour, muted by darkness, but they glowed with their own faint luminescence, as if each petal held a trapped ember." | | 1 | "Rory's breath came out slow and visible, a pale cloud that lingered too long before dispersing." | | 2 | "The pendant's pulse had steadied into a rhythm that matched her own heartbeat, or perhaps her heartbeat had adjusted to match it." | | 3 | "The pages were dense with her friend's cramped handwriting, marginalia in three different ink colours, sketches of standing stones and wildflower patterns and a…" | | 4 | "The night held its breath around her, and in that held breath, she became aware of something else — a low, almost subsonic hum that vibrated in her molars and t…" | | 5 | "Not wrong in a way she could articulate — the constellations were there, familiar patterns in their expected positions, but they seemed closer, brighter, as if …" | | 6 | "The wildflowers it touched went dull, their inner light extinguished, and for a moment she saw the clearing as it truly was: brown grass, dead leaves, soil that…" | | 7 | "The trees at the far edge of the clearing shifted — not in the wind, because there was no wind, but as if they were leaning inward, closing the circle, narrowin…" | | 8 | "Rory watched one of the ancient oaks adjust its position by what might have been inches or might have been feet, the bark-face twisted now in a way that was unm…" | | 9 | "She snapped her head toward it and saw nothing — but the wildflowers in that spot had flattened, pressed to the ground as if something heavy had stepped there." | | 10 | "She could feel the air moving — displaced, pushed toward her in slow exhalations that carried the scent of the grove intensified, that not-floral, not-decay sme…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |