"The light cast shadows across her palm, and in those shadows she saw movement - a flicker at the edge of her vision, gone before she could focus on it."
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"The pendant blazed against her chest, so hot now she could feel it through her jacket, and the figure tilted its head - a gesture that should have been impossible, the neck bending at an angle that suggested bone had been replaced with something more flexible."
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"At first she'd tried to ignore it, telling herself it was just the stress of the past weeks catching up, the late shifts at Golden Empress, the sleepless nights…"
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"The grove was half a mile in, tucked behind a stand of ancient oaks that had stood since before the park was officially established."
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"The temperature rose by ten degrees, the cold November air replaced by something thick and humid, carrying the scent of flowers that shouldn't have been bloomin…"
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"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible colors, their petals catching a light source she couldn't identify, glowing faintly like embers."
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"They were old oak, petrified into something harder than stone, their grain visible in swirling patterns that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking directly at…"
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"The grove was maybe thirty feet across, surrounded on all sides by trees that looked older than the ones outside the circle, their bark dark and furrowed, their…"
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"It was too deliberate, too measured, the sound of dry leaves being dragged across stone in a pattern that approximated footsteps."
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"She turned, her heart hammering now, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps."
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"It was laughter, she realized, a dry, ancient laughter that came from the stones themselves, from the very ground beneath her feet."
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"It was humanoid but not human, its body flickering like a candle flame in the periphery of her vision, solidifying and dissolving and solidifying again."
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"The pendant blazed against her chest, so hot now she could feel it through her jacket, and the figure tilted its head - a gesture that should have been impossib…"
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"She just moved, her legs pumping, her arms outstretched, crashing through the wall of flowers toward the tree line."
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"The standing stones blurred past her, their positions shifting as she ran, the circle distorting into something that didn't obey Euclidean geometry."
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"The pendant swung wildly on its chain, its light casting long, leaping shadows that seemed to reach for her."
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"She ran until her lungs burned, until her legs gave out, until she collapsed onto damp grass that felt normal beneath her hands."