| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 89.42% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1418 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.11% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1418 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "wavered" | | 6 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 130 | | matches | | 0 | "was afraid" | | 1 | "t with warmth" |
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| 65.93% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 130 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "began to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 131 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 10 | | markdownWords | 14 | | totalWords | 1411 | | ratio | 0.01 | | matches | | 0 | "Time moves differently here." | | 1 | "watched" | | 2 | "hunger" | | 3 | "waiting" | | 4 | "remember" | | 5 | "watching her" | | 6 | "empty" | | 7 | "her" | | 8 | "occupied" | | 9 | "Mine." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 1410 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.28 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "London" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 3 | | London | 3 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 4 | | Evan | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Aurora | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Pendant" | | 5 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 78.57% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite" | | 1 | "felt like *hunger* and *waiting* and *r" |
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| 58.26% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.417 | | wordCount | 1411 | | matches | | 0 | "Not black, but *empty*, as if the light inside it had been sucked out" | | 1 | "Not by one presence, but by many" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 29.4 | | std | 25.65 | | cv | 0.873 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 67 | | 2 | 66 | | 3 | 75 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 70 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 60 | | 12 | 54 | | 13 | 72 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 59 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 64 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 45 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 55 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 54 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 62 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 39 | | 31 | 48 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 66 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 64 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 55 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 42 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 22 |
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| 83.67% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | | 0 | "been erased" | | 1 | "been sucked" | | 2 | "were arranged" | | 3 | "was gone" | | 4 | "was trapped" | | 5 | "was gone" | | 6 | "was swallowed" | | 7 | "been claimed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 245 | | matches | | 0 | "was pushing" | | 1 | "was still pulsing" |
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| 55.62% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 131 | | ratio | 0.031 | | matches | | 0 | "The wildflowers at their base—foxglove, nightshade, something with petals the colour of old blood—bloomed with a vigour that made her skin prickle." | | 1 | "It had the shape of a voice but none of the substance—a word almost caught, a name almost spoken." | | 2 | "Even the distant hum of London traffic—constant, city white noise—had been erased, as if the grove had cut itself free of the map entirely." | | 3 | "Not much—a foot, maybe two—but they were arranged differently, their angles shifted, their shadows cast in directions that didn't match the hidden moon." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1420 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.03169014084507042 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006338028169014085 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 131 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 131 | | mean | 10.77 | | std | 9.04 | | cv | 0.839 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 30 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 25.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 33 | | diversityRatio | 0.26717557251908397 | | totalSentences | 131 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 87.72% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, an hour ago, it" | | 1 | "Even the distant hum of" | | 2 | "Just the shifting dark between" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 69.12% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "She should have trusted the" | | 1 | "It had been quiet for" | | 2 | "They rose from the earth" | | 3 | "She checked her phone." | | 4 | "She checked the time." | | 5 | "She needed to know who" | | 6 | "It was a whisper, but" | | 7 | "It seemed to come from" | | 8 | "It had the shape of" | | 9 | "Her breath misted in the" | | 10 | "She moved deeper, because going" | | 11 | "She'd left Evan." | | 12 | "She'd fled to London." | | 13 | "She'd built a new life" | | 14 | "She wasn't about to let" | | 15 | "It flickered and broke apart," | | 16 | "It came from behind her." | | 17 | "She turned, and the whisper" | | 18 | "It had been standing at" | | 19 | "She looked down at it," |
| | ratio | 0.377 | |
| 87.19% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 85 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "She should have trusted the" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stood at the" | | 2 | "The Heartstone hung against her" | | 3 | "It had been quiet for" | | 4 | "The park was a ghost" | | 5 | "The grove opened before her" | | 6 | "They rose from the earth" | | 7 | "The wildflowers at their base—foxglove," | | 8 | "She checked her phone." | | 9 | "She checked the time." | | 10 | "The battery read 9:47 PM," | | 11 | "The thought arrived unbidden, a" | | 12 | "She needed to know who" | | 13 | "The first wrong sound came" | | 14 | "It was a whisper, but" | | 15 | "A rustle, but not quite." | | 16 | "It seemed to come from" | | 17 | "It had the shape of" | | 18 | "Rory turned, sharp and fast," | | 19 | "The word fell flat." |
| | ratio | 0.746 | |
| 43.86% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "To Richmond Park after closing" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 17.54% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "One moment she was pushing through a wall of hawthorn, the next she stood in a circle of standing stones that hadn't been there this afternoon." | | 1 | "They rose from the earth like black teeth, ancient and lichen-crusted, their surfaces catching a light that came from nowhere." | | 2 | "The wildflowers at their base—foxglove, nightshade, something with petals the colour of old blood—bloomed with a vigour that made her skin prickle." | | 3 | "She moved deeper, because going back meant admitting she was afraid, and Rory Carter had spent the last year of her life refusing to be afraid." | | 4 | "It flickered and broke apart, scattering into motes of red light that drifted to the ground and died." | | 5 | "The kind of silence that pressed against her ears, that made her hear the rush of her own blood, the creak of her own pulse." | | 6 | "From the stones at her back, their surfaces slick with something that hadn't been there a moment ago." | | 7 | "She was trapped in a pocket of time that didn't belong to the world she knew, surrounded by something that had waited in the dark for longer than she could comp…" | | 8 | "She turned, searching for another way out, and found only more stone, more thorns, more of the dark sheen that coated everything like a living skin." | | 9 | "And Aurora Carter stood alone in the circle of stones, the mark of the Heartstone branded into her flesh, with the certain knowledge that she had been claimed b…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |