| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said aloud [aloud]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |
| 89.06% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1828 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 2 |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 26.15% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1828 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "throbbed" | | 3 | "furrowed" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "footsteps" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "resolved" | | 12 | "measured" | | 13 | "lurch" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 175 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 175 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 177 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 52 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1845 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 1832 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.44 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 8 | | Richmond | 4 | | Park | 3 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Neolithic | 1 | | Salisbury | 1 | | October | 1 | | England | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Like | 4 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Salisbury" | | 3 | "England" | | 4 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "as if checking a fever" | | 1 | "not quite but warm enough that Rory kept reaching for it, pressing her fingers against the deep crimson stone through the fabric of her hoodie as if checking a fever" | | 2 | "felt like minutes, but the oaks behind" | | 3 | "quite hear but could feel in her teeth" | | 4 | "tasted like — copper and adrenaline and t" | | 5 | "not quite the same" | | 6 | "appeared ahead like a doorway" | | 7 | "felt like twenty minutes" |
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| 91.60% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.084 | | wordCount | 1845 | | matches | | 0 | "not shadow, not the absence of light, but something present" | | 1 | "not the absence of light, but something present" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 177 | | matches | | 0 | "knew that nothing" | | 1 | "hated that it" | | 2 | "feel that certainty" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 41 | | std | 33.84 | | cv | 0.825 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 106 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 96 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 76 | | 6 | 97 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 105 | | 9 | 67 | | 10 | 80 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 39 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 89 | | 17 | 59 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 47 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 44 | | 24 | 86 | | 25 | 59 | | 26 | 34 | | 27 | 43 | | 28 | 101 | | 29 | 56 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 59 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 66 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 47 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 80 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 66 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 8 |
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| 95.24% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 175 | | matches | | 0 | "was swallowed" | | 1 | "been open" | | 2 | "was accompanied" | | 3 | "being circled" | | 4 | "were allowed" |
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| 25.71% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 8 | | totalVerbs | 306 | | matches | | 0 | "was burning" | | 1 | "was seeing" | | 2 | "were turning" | | 3 | "were tilting" | | 4 | "weren't moving" | | 5 | "were circling" | | 6 | "was pointing" | | 7 | "was bleeding " |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 17 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 177 | | ratio | 0.085 | | matches | | 0 | "Not hot — not quite — but warm enough that Rory kept reaching for it, pressing her fingers against the deep crimson stone through the fabric of her hoodie as if checking a fever." | | 1 | "The standing stones — if you could call them that — were not what she'd expected." | | 2 | "Richmond Park had been quiet in the way parks are quiet at three in the morning — the muffled hum of a city that never fully sleeps, the occasional rustle of something small in the undergrowth." | | 3 | "Even in the dark, she could see them — pale shapes scattered across the clearing, petals catching light from a source she couldn't identify." | | 4 | "Three weeks ago, it had appeared in her flat — no note, no packaging, just the pendant on its silver chain sitting on her pillow when she came home from a shift at the Golden Empress." | | 5 | "Faint at first — a warmth that came and went like a blush." | | 6 | "She pressed her hand flat against it and felt the beat sync with something else — something in the ground, something in the air, a rhythm she couldn't quite hear but could feel in her teeth." | | 7 | "Not the oak sentinels from the boundary — these were thinner, closer together, their branches interlocking overhead in a lattice that filtered the ambient glow into shifting patterns on the ground." | | 8 | "A sound like a footstep, except wrong — too soft, too long, like someone dragging a palm across fabric." | | 9 | "The patterns had resolved into something she could almost read, shapes that almost resolved into letters, almost, almost —" | | 10 | "Evan had taught her what fear tasted like — copper and adrenaline and the sour certainty that the person hurting you was someone who once said they loved you." | | 11 | "The ground shifted beneath her, and for a moment she thought she'd stumbled, but no — the moss was moving." | | 12 | "The gaps between the trunks had narrowed, and in those gaps she could see darkness — not shadow, not the absence of light, but something present and dense and waiting." | | 13 | "Then, from directly behind her, close enough that she felt the displacement of air against the back of her neck —" | | 14 | "And the scar on her wrist was bleeding — a thin line of red where the old crescent had split open, fresh and warm against her fingers." |
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| 93.83% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1816 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "thinner, closer together, their" |
| | adverbCount | 73 | | adverbRatio | 0.040198237885462555 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006607929515418502 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 177 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 177 | | mean | 10.42 | | std | 10.65 | | cv | 1.022 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 36 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 47 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 36 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 27 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 37.85% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 28 | | diversityRatio | 0.3220338983050847 | | totalSentences | 177 | | uniqueOpeners | 57 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 146 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the oaks had grown" | | 1 | "Just the thin trees and" | | 2 | "Slowly, incrementally, the flowers at" | | 3 | "Then, from directly behind her," | | 4 | "Instead, she turned." | | 5 | "Just the trees." | | 6 | "Just the light." | | 7 | "Just the endless, impossible bloom" | | 8 | "Then she ran." |
| | ratio | 0.062 | |
| 91.23% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 146 | | matches | | 0 | "It had been a low," | | 1 | "She shouldn't be here." | | 2 | "She'd pictured something Neolithic, maybe," | | 3 | "Their trunks had fused and" | | 4 | "It pressed against her eardrums" | | 5 | "She didn't know enough about" | | 6 | "She'd come because of the" | | 7 | "She'd locked the door herself." | | 8 | "She'd checked the window." | | 9 | "She'd worn it since." | | 10 | "She'd worn it because it" | | 11 | "She'd been walking for what" | | 12 | "Her footsteps made no sound." | | 13 | "She tried stamping once, deliberately," | | 14 | "Her breath fogged in front" | | 15 | "she said aloud" | | 16 | "Her voice sounded thin." | | 17 | "She pressed her hand flat" | | 18 | "She didn't go home." | | 19 | "She walked deeper." |
| | ratio | 0.322 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 104 | | totalSentences | 146 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant was burning." | | 1 | "It had been a low," | | 2 | "She shouldn't be here." | | 3 | "The thought arrived with the" | | 4 | "The standing stones — if" | | 5 | "She'd pictured something Neolithic, maybe," | | 6 | "Their trunks had fused and" | | 7 | "The bark was deeply furrowed," | | 8 | "Rory stepped through." | | 9 | "The change was immediate, though" | | 10 | "The air was the same" | | 11 | "Richmond Park had been quiet" | | 12 | "Here, the silence had weight." | | 13 | "It pressed against her eardrums" | | 14 | "A low, sourceless luminescence hung" | | 15 | "The flowers were wrong for" | | 16 | "She didn't know enough about" | | 17 | "The pendant pulsed." | | 18 | "She'd come because of the" | | 19 | "She'd locked the door herself." |
| | ratio | 0.712 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 146 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing at the edge" | | 1 | "Even in the dark, she" | | 2 | "As if the grove had" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 82.32% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Not hot — not quite — but warm enough that Rory kept reaching for it, pressing her fingers against the deep crimson stone through the fabric of her hoodie as if…" | | 1 | "Not the oak sentinels from the boundary — these were thinner, closer together, their branches interlocking overhead in a lattice that filtered the ambient glow …" | | 2 | "Their petals, which had been open and reaching upward, were tilting, angling, orienting on her like a field of tiny faces." | | 3 | "Something else's breath, slow and measured, coming from everywhere and nowhere, from the trees, from the ground, from the light that shouldn't exist." | | 4 | "The silence that followed was so absolute that she could hear her own blood in her ears, could hear the creak of her own joints as she stood frozen in a grove t…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |