| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.14% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1693 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 17.31% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1693 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "silk" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "measured" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "tenderness" | | 12 | "uncanny" | | 13 | "shimmered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed content" | | 1 | "d in tenderness" |
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| 72.60% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 122 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "managed to" | | 2 | "appeared to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 124 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1677 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 1647 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.36 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Richmond" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 3 | | Grove | 4 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Silas | 2 | | English | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Aurora | 2 | | Rory | 6 | | Eva | 2 | | London | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Cardiff" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed reluctant to move" | | 1 | "vibration that seemed to crawl across the moss rather than through air" | | 2 | "as if seeking the heat of her body" | | 3 | "something like bare feet on wet leaf mold" | | 4 | "seemed content for the moment only to circle and watch" | | 5 | "as if answering a portal that had only just begun to open" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.596 | | wordCount | 1677 | | matches | | 0 | "Not enough to burn, but enough" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 124 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 67.61% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 20 | | mean | 83.85 | | std | 32.42 | | cv | 0.387 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 143 | | 1 | 108 | | 2 | 80 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 109 | | 5 | 91 | | 6 | 85 | | 7 | 93 | | 8 | 64 | | 9 | 83 | | 10 | 81 | | 11 | 118 | | 12 | 84 | | 13 | 126 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 105 | | 17 | 82 | | 18 | 69 | | 19 | 83 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 274 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 124 | | ratio | 0.097 | | matches | | 0 | "The night should have been cold—late autumn, a hard frost predicted—but the Grove held a mild dampness that clung to her skin like breath." | | 1 | "The city sounds she had expected to hear from Richmond—traffic on the A316, the distant bark of a fox, the restless shuffle of deer—simply were not there." | | 2 | "She kept the stones at her back and measured distances the way Silas had once taught her to read a familiar room—exits first, cover second, anything that could become a weapon third." | | 3 | "Blue eyes took in details others missed; her mind sorted them into patterns before fear could finish its work." | | 4 | "She had checked her watch when she entered—twenty-three minutes past midnight—yet the second hand seemed reluctant to move." | | 5 | "Her old self—the girl who had fled Cardiff with little more than a holdall and a refusal to stay broken—had learned never to shout." | | 6 | "A footstep sounded behind her—distinct, deliberate, the soft crush of something like bare feet on wet leaf mold." | | 7 | "Her pulse remained steady through sheer will; panic wasted oxygen and slackened thought." | | 8 | "The metallic scent had grown stronger—her own blood or something older remembering metal." | | 9 | "Whatever lived here—whatever the pendant had called or alarmed—seemed content for the moment only to circle and watch." | | 10 | "The gap between the oaks lay ahead—still there but restless, the trunks seeming to shift an inch then another as if in conversation." | | 11 | "And the pendant, she realized with a slow, controlled dread that sat deeper than noise or motion ever could, was still fainterly warm against her collarbone—as if answering a portal that had only just begun to open." |
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| 86.19% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1676 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "alone settled over her" |
| | adverbCount | 82 | | adverbRatio | 0.04892601431980907 | | lyAdverbCount | 32 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01909307875894988 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 124 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 124 | | mean | 13.52 | | std | 9.63 | | cv | 0.712 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 34 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 33 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 63.17% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.4032258064516129 | | totalSentences | 124 | | uniqueOpeners | 50 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the flowers, open and" | | 1 | "Somewhere deeper in the dark" | | 2 | "Then she was out, stumbling" | | 3 | "Only then did she slow," |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 92.73% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come because the" | | 1 | "She stopped three paces inside" | | 2 | "It came from nowhere and" | | 3 | "She turned a slow circle." | | 4 | "Her eyes adjusted poorly to" | | 5 | "She curled her fingers around" | | 6 | "Its inner glow was faint," | | 7 | "she murmured, voice steady because" | | 8 | "She had expected that." | | 9 | "She watched until the stems" | | 10 | "She kept the stones at" | | 11 | "She froze and turned only" | | 12 | "She had always been cool-headed." | | 13 | "She had checked her watch" | | 14 | "She turned fully toward it" | | 15 | "Her scar, the small crescent" | | 16 | "She rubbed it absently against" | | 17 | "She kept her voice level," | | 18 | "Her old self—the girl who" | | 19 | "It had the cadence of" |
| | ratio | 0.318 | |
| 82.73% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 83 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora slipped between the two" | | 1 | "The night should have been" | | 2 | "Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in" | | 3 | "She had come because the" | | 4 | "Eva’s half-remembered directions had pointed" | | 5 | "Rory had told herself she" | | 6 | "She stopped three paces inside" | | 7 | "The city sounds she had" | | 8 | "It came from nowhere and" | | 9 | "She turned a slow circle." | | 10 | "The standing stones, thick oaks" | | 11 | "Illusion, she decided." | | 12 | "The light was bad." | | 13 | "Her eyes adjusted poorly to" | | 14 | "The pendant heated." | | 15 | "She curled her fingers around" | | 16 | "Its inner glow was faint," | | 17 | "she murmured, voice steady because" | | 18 | "She had expected that." | | 19 | "She watched until the stems" |
| | ratio | 0.755 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | technicalSentenceCount | 15 | | matches | | 0 | "The night should have been cold—late autumn, a hard frost predicted—but the Grove held a mild dampness that clung to her skin like breath." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in reckless color: foxgloves and ragged robin, wood anemone and vetch, all of them open under a sky that had darkened to true …" | | 2 | "She had come because the Heartstone had begun to pulse against her collarbone the closer she walked the southern fringe of the park, a faint crimson throb that …" | | 3 | "The standing stones, thick oaks that looked half petrified, seemed to lean inward a fraction more than they had a moment before." | | 4 | "What she had not expected was the way the wildflower stalks nearest her boots bent, just slightly, as if something low to the ground had brushed past them." | | 5 | "The center held a low hummock of moss-covered rock that might once have been an altar or simply a place of rest." | | 6 | "Beyond it, through the narrow gaps, she could still see the darker bulk of ordinary trees, yet those trees looked strangely far, as though the Grove had quietly…" | | 7 | "The clicking continued for seven beats, then stopped on the eighth as if the thing producing it had noticed her attention." | | 8 | "The gap she had entered through was narrower, the oaks thicker of trunk or simply closer together in the way of things that breathe when unobserved." | | 9 | "They had lengthened by inches while her attention wandered, stems curling slightly as if seeking the heat of her body." | | 10 | "She felt eyes without seeing them, the pressure of attention sliding across her skin, pausing at the glowing stone, lingering at the scar on her wrist as if it …" | | 11 | "The gap between the oaks lay ahead—still there but restless, the trunks seeming to shift an inch then another as if in conversation." | | 12 | "For a stretched second the world resisted: pressure at her temples, a tug at the pendant as though invisible fingers wanted it back, the sensation of breath aga…" | | 13 | "Behind her the Grove continued to whisper, the laughter-that-was-not folding itself smaller and smaller until even that fell silent." | | 14 | "And the pendant, she realized with a slow, controlled dread that sat deeper than noise or motion ever could, was still fainterly warm against her collarbone—as …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |