| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.55% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1836 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.92% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1836 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "raced" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "measured" | | 6 | "echo" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "wavered" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "sense of" | | 11 | "loomed" | | 12 | "flickered" | | 13 | "complex" | | 14 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 189 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 189 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 191 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 14 | | totalWords | 1821 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "When the Heartstone wakes, go to Isolde’s grove. Answers wait where time forgets itself." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 55 | | wordCount | 1799 | | uniqueNames | 21 | | maxNameDensity | 0.89 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Soft" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 2 | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 2 | | Tube | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Isolde | 1 | | Grove | 6 | | November | 1 | | Eva | 3 | | Cool-headed | 3 | | Evan | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Jennifer | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Rory | 16 | | One | 4 | | Soft | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Silence" | | 6 | "Jennifer" | | 7 | "Rory" | | 8 | "Soft" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "November" | | 4 | "Golden" | | 5 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 122 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like relief" | | 1 | "seemed thicker here, tarry, refusing the moonlight" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1821 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 191 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 46.69 | | std | 31.74 | | cv | 0.68 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 107 | | 1 | 67 | | 2 | 63 | | 3 | 40 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 63 | | 6 | 74 | | 7 | 84 | | 8 | 65 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 61 | | 11 | 64 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 81 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 78 | | 16 | 39 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 81 | | 19 | 81 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 84 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 65 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 79 | | 27 | 77 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 78 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 75 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 50 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 65 | | 38 | 58 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 189 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 308 | | matches | | 0 | "was opening" | | 1 | "was mapping" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 191 | | ratio | 0.079 | | matches | | 0 | "The dreams had been getting worse—windows that opened onto other skies, her own reflection lagging half a breath behind." | | 1 | "No wind moved the leaves, yet something whispered through them—soft, dry, like paper turned by invisible fingers." | | 2 | "Dew soaked through her trainers; the wildflowers crushed underfoot released a sharper scent, almost metallic now, like copper left in rain." | | 3 | "Something moved at the edge of her vision—left side, low to the ground." | | 4 | "The Grove sat in that pocket between Earth and elsewhere; time itself rolled loose here." | | 5 | "A soft click sounded behind her—stone on stone, discreet." | | 6 | "A child’s laugh floated from the left—high, brief, delighted." | | 7 | "Flowers gave way to bare earth that had not been there a moment earlier—a narrow track of packed soil winding between roots that looked more like knuckles than wood." | | 8 | "But the impression of a shoulder remained—thin, too long, the suggestion of hair the colour of old bone." | | 9 | "She started walking again—slower, testing." | | 10 | "Not blood—she refused the thought—but resin, or dew gone foul." | | 11 | "Rory felt the proximity before she heard it again—a pressure against her back like the nearness of a wall." | | 12 | "Rory’s childhood waking songs lived in that register—Jennifer Carter humming Welsh airs while she graded papers." | | 13 | "Beyond them the ordinary night of Richmond waited—distant lights, mundane trees, time that behaved." | | 14 | "Cold fingers—longer than fingers—brushed the nape of her neck." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1829 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 67 | | adverbRatio | 0.036632039365773646 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006014215418261345 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 191 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 191 | | mean | 9.53 | | std | 7.18 | | cv | 0.753 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 61.26% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.39267015706806285 | | totalSentences | 191 | | uniqueOpeners | 75 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | | 0 | "Only unbroken shadow under the" | | 1 | "Always empty when she looked." | | 2 | "Then, from directly overhead, a" | | 3 | "Only the sense of a" | | 4 | "Simply ceased, as if the" | | 5 | "Just the lightest previous, a" | | 6 | "Only when she stood under" |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come for the" | | 1 | "It stuck to the roof" | | 2 | "She stopped ten paces inside" | | 3 | "It thrummed against her palm," | | 4 | "Her voice came out flatter" | | 5 | "She had left him months" | | 6 | "He did not get to" | | 7 | "She had come prepared: torch," | | 8 | "She lowered the light and" | | 9 | "She had bigger problems." | | 10 | "Its inner glow leaked between" | | 11 | "She walked farther in." | | 12 | "Her torch found empty air" | | 13 | "She turned toward it against" | | 14 | "She kept her voice low," | | 15 | "Her pulse kicked hard against" | | 16 | "She backed up three careful" | | 17 | "She was no longer alone." | | 18 | "She lifted the torch and" | | 19 | "She started walking again—slower, testing." |
| | ratio | 0.216 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 108 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stepped through the" | | 1 | "She had come for the" | | 2 | "The deep crimson stone against" | | 3 | "The unknown benefactor’s note had" | | 4 | "Answers wait where time forgets" | | 5 | "The dreams had been getting" | | 6 | "The Grove should have felt" | | 7 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible carpets" | | 8 | "Rory had been here once" | | 9 | "Tonight the sweetness cloyed." | | 10 | "It stuck to the roof" | | 11 | "She stopped ten paces inside" | | 12 | "The trees around the clearing" | | 13 | "Rory’s hand rose without thought" | | 14 | "It thrummed against her palm," | | 15 | "Her voice came out flatter" | | 16 | "The girl who could fix" | | 17 | "Whatever this place wanted, it" | | 18 | "The whispering stopped." | | 19 | "This silence pressed against her" |
| | ratio | 0.667 | |
| 61.73% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | | 0 | "If the stones wanted to" | | 1 | "As if the Grove itself" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 63.49% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The dreams had been getting worse—windows that opened onto other skies, her own reflection lagging half a breath behind." | | 1 | "The trees around the clearing leaned closer than she remembered, their boles silvered by a moon that hung too full, too low." | | 2 | "Its inner glow leaked between her knuckles, faint crimson that made the surrounding night look green-black by contrast." | | 3 | "Flowers gave way to bare earth that had not been there a moment earlier—a narrow track of packed soil winding between roots that looked more like knuckles than …" | | 4 | "The crimson light strengthened, casting a bloody circle that kept the darkness at bay in a neat, shrinking radius." | | 5 | "She was twenty-five, five-foot-six of pre-law dropout and takeaway courier, and something that did not need light was mapping her pulse by the heat of a stone t…" | | 6 | "Rory’s childhood waking songs lived in that register—Jennifer Carter humming Welsh airs while she graded papers." | | 7 | "Only the sense of a presence that had been waiting longer than her short life, testing the shape of a new game with careful care." | | 8 | "Beside it a new mark sat, pink and perfect: five elongated impressions, as if something very patient had measured the width of her bones and found them interest…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "She kept, controlled" | | 1 | "she told, voice steady although her free hand shook" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |