| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said aloud [aloud]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |
| 89.52% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1908 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.59% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1908 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "echo" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "could feel" | | 6 | "resolved" | | 7 | "quivered" | | 8 | "throbbed" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "charm" | | 11 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 192 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 192 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "started to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 192 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1896 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Cool-headed, she told herself." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 1890 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 0.58 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Richmond" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 11 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hill | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | London | 1 | | March | 1 | | God | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Keep | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Irish | 1 | | One | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Hill" | | 3 | "Golden" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "One" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 89.02% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 123 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed clear and terrible: the stone wanted her here" | | 1 | "something like overripe fruit and wet leaf m" | | 2 | "as if punishing her for looking" |
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| 41.77% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 1.582 | | wordCount | 1896 | | matches | | 0 | "not hers but stepped a half-beat behind, as if something practised walkin" | | 1 | "No longer matching her own but" | | 2 | "not into a portal but out" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 192 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 47.4 | | std | 24.97 | | cv | 0.527 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 128 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 58 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 66 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 49 | | 7 | 57 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 66 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 77 | | 12 | 69 | | 13 | 54 | | 14 | 79 | | 15 | 36 | | 16 | 54 | | 17 | 56 | | 18 | 71 | | 19 | 59 | | 20 | 62 | | 21 | 61 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 48 | | 24 | 47 | | 25 | 59 | | 26 | 46 | | 27 | 43 | | 28 | 62 | | 29 | 73 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 30 | | 32 | 58 | | 33 | 30 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 38 | | 36 | 41 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 9 |
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| 99.78% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 192 | | matches | | 0 | "been locked" | | 1 | "been stacked" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 314 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 6 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 192 | | ratio | 0.068 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant—deep crimson teardrop set in silver, small enough that it vanished in her fist—had warmed steadily since she left the bus stop on Richmond Hill." | | 1 | "One moment the path ran between black oaks and silent deer fences; the next, seven weathered trunks rose in a rough circle, their bark rippling like frozen water." | | 2 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground—bluebells, wood anemones, pale cow parsley—though the rest of London still shivered under grey March." | | 3 | "The night inside the grove looked different from the night outside—deeper, more layered, as if several midnights had been stacked and only the top one was visible." | | 4 | "Shadows moved; night flowers bent; brains filled gaps with patterns that were not there." | | 5 | "She remembered the note that had come with it weeks earlier—unsigned, slipped under the door of her flat above Silas’s bar: Keep this close." | | 6 | "Yet the sky—what little she could see beyond the canopy—felt darker than any city night should, stars sharper, wronger, arranged in constellations she didn’t know." | | 7 | "The scent of them had changed—sweetness curdling into something like overripe fruit and wet leaf mould and iron." | | 8 | "One moment bark; the next, a suggestion of a torso, a head that never quite resolved into face or feature." | | 9 | "Beneath it she heard a voice—or almost a voice." | | 10 | "The terrain sloped gently west; outside the park the river ran that way." | | 11 | "The luminosity of the flowers had increased; each blossom carried a tiny bead of thin green light at its centre now." | | 12 | "The beam quivered against the far stones and revealed—not a figure—but an absence." |
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| 93.79% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1911 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 90 | | adverbRatio | 0.04709576138147567 | | lyAdverbCount | 23 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012035583464154892 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 192 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 192 | | mean | 9.88 | | std | 7.01 | | cv | 0.71 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 52.43% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.3645833333333333 | | totalSentences | 192 | | uniqueOpeners | 70 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 172 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the stones and, beyond" | | 1 | "Even the wind that had" | | 2 | "Just dark soil packed hard" | | 3 | "Of course no signal." | | 4 | "Only the echo of her" | | 5 | "Only the time marching forward" | | 6 | "No longer matching her own" | | 7 | "Then the light dimmed as" | | 8 | "Perhaps the way was not" | | 9 | "Barely a spark remained at" |
| | ratio | 0.058 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 172 | | matches | | 0 | "She had been walking for" | | 1 | "She had told herself it" | | 2 | "She had come out for" | | 3 | "Their scent reached her in" | | 4 | "She touched the pendant through" | | 5 | "It was almost hot now." | | 6 | "She walked the perimeter first," | | 7 | "She stood and turned in" | | 8 | "Her own shadow stretched long" | | 9 | "she told herself, though she" | | 10 | "She clicked the torch off" | | 11 | "They did slowly." | | 12 | "She was twenty-five, not seven." | | 13 | "She had spent three years" | | 14 | "She lifted it free of" | | 15 | "She remembered the note that" | | 16 | "It will know the way." | | 17 | "She had laughed then." | | 18 | "She flashed the torch again." | | 19 | "She lowered the light but" |
| | ratio | 0.279 | |
| 99.53% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 124 | | totalSentences | 172 | | matches | | 0 | "The iron gates of Richmond" | | 1 | "She had been walking for" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant—deep crimson teardrop" | | 3 | "She had told herself it" | | 4 | "She had come out for" | | 5 | "Yu-Fei had sent her home" | | 6 | "The pendant’s warmth was coincidence," | | 7 | "The standing stones appeared without" | | 8 | "Rory stepped between two of" | | 9 | "The air thickened, turning cool" | | 10 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground—bluebells, wood" | | 11 | "Their scent reached her in" | | 12 | "She touched the pendant through" | | 13 | "It was almost hot now." | | 14 | "The word died half a" | | 15 | "She walked the perimeter first," | | 16 | "Rory crouched, brushing dirt from" | | 17 | "A twig cracked behind her." | | 18 | "She stood and turned in" | | 19 | "The beam cut a white" |
| | ratio | 0.721 | |
| 58.14% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 172 | | matches | | 0 | "Now the way seemed clear" | | 1 | "If time was elastic here," |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 45.86% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come out for air after the dinner rush at Golden Empress, that was all." | | 1 | "She walked the perimeter first, boots bruising petals that gave underfoot with a sound too wet for ordinary stems." | | 2 | "At the centre of the circle the grass formed a hollow, as if something heavy had rested there for a long time and only recently risen." | | 3 | "The night inside the grove looked different from the night outside—deeper, more layered, as if several midnights had been stacked and only the top one was visib…" | | 4 | "Shadows moved; night flowers bent; brains filled gaps with patterns that were not there." | | 5 | "She remembered the note that had come with it weeks earlier—unsigned, slipped under the door of her flat above Silas’s bar: Keep this close." | | 6 | "Footsteps that were not hers but stepped a half-beat behind, as if something practised walking in her rhythm." | | 7 | "The water that dripped was the wrong colour under torchlight, a pale, luminous green that dried on the bark almost instantly." | | 8 | "A new sound joined the night: a low, continuous hum just below hearing, the kind that lives in the bones more than the ears." | | 9 | "Only the time marching forward as if punishing her for looking." | | 10 | "Through that thinness shapes moved that refused outline: too many joints, too little substance, a suggestion of antlers or branching fingers that existed only w…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said aloud, voice steadier than her pulse" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |