| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.267 | | leniency | 0.533 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.09% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2324 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "slightly" | | 4 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 54.82% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2324 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "grave" | | 3 | "restrained" | | 4 | "depths" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "familiar" | | 10 | "vibrated" | | 11 | "warmth" | | 12 | "footsteps" | | 13 | "treacherous" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 291 | | matches | | 0 | "e in horror" | | 1 | "was grateful" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 291 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 303 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2321 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 57 | | wordCount | 2254 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.6 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heathrow | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Isolde | 2 | | Rory | 36 | | Heartstone | 6 | | London | 2 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Heathrow" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Cardiff" | | 5 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 0.701 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 165 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed suddenly higher" | | 1 | "seemed nearer than before" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.431 | | wordCount | 2321 | | matches | | 0 | "not sky but a narrow London street under rain, yellow light shining from" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 303 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 172 | | mean | 13.49 | | std | 14.5 | | cv | 1.075 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 54 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 60 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 46 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 60 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 52 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 50 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 31 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 72 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 30 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 99.23% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 291 | | matches | | 0 | "been warned" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "been sealed" | | 3 | "been crushed" | | 4 | "was turned" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 377 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 303 | | ratio | 0.013 | | matches | | 0 | "One step took her past brambles and damp fern; the next placed her ankle-deep in wildflowers." | | 1 | "Poppies, cornflowers, foxgloves, snowdrops—summer and winter tangled together beneath a sky that seemed suddenly higher." | | 2 | "Her face was turned away, but the line of her body felt horribly familiar—the slight cant of one hip, the squared shoulders, the left hand curled close to the thigh." | | 3 | "No eyes, no mouth, no features at all—only smooth, moon-pale skin stretched over the shape of a skull." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 491 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 13 | | adverbRatio | 0.026476578411405296 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.002036659877800407 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 303 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 303 | | mean | 7.66 | | std | 5.8 | | cv | 0.757 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 40.84% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 30 | | diversityRatio | 0.304635761589404 | | totalSentences | 302 | | uniqueOpeners | 92 | |
| 91.15% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 256 | | matches | | 0 | "At least, she assumed it" | | 1 | "Then the pendant had begun" | | 2 | "Even the pale dress tugged" | | 3 | "Then it looked up." | | 4 | "Too late, she thought." | | 5 | "Away from it." | | 6 | "Then she saw the flowers." |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 256 | | matches | | 0 | "It leaned beneath a hawthorn" | | 1 | "Her voice travelled farther than" | | 2 | "It threaded between the trees," | | 3 | "She checked her phone." | | 4 | "She had tried ignoring it." | | 5 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 6 | "Their colours seemed to come" | | 7 | "She recognised the place despite" | | 8 | "She had been warned about" | | 9 | "She had left a note" | | 10 | "It was not much of" | | 11 | "It was, however, better than" | | 12 | "She looked back." | | 13 | "Her breath caught." | | 14 | "She turned slowly, resisting the" | | 15 | "It had also taught her" | | 16 | "Its crimson depths held a" | | 17 | "She had examined the clasp," | | 18 | "She hated herself a little" | | 19 | "It was as thick as" |
| | ratio | 0.238 | |
| 75.23% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 197 | | totalSentences | 256 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora found the first oak" | | 1 | "It leaned beneath a hawthorn" | | 2 | "Stone pretending to be wood." | | 3 | "Her voice travelled farther than" | | 4 | "It threaded between the trees," | | 5 | "Rory snatched her hand away." | | 6 | "Ferns crowded the slope." | | 7 | "London’s glow dirtied the eastern" | | 8 | "She checked her phone." | | 9 | "The time still read 12:12." | | 10 | "The message had told her" | | 11 | "The message had appeared on" | | 12 | "She had tried ignoring it." | | 13 | "A pulse of heat every" | | 14 | "A second heartbeat." | | 15 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 16 | "The grove waited on the" | | 17 | "Poppies, cornflowers, foxgloves, snowdrops—summer and" | | 18 | "Some stood straight." | | 19 | "Others bent inward like robed" |
| | ratio | 0.77 | |
| 58.59% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 256 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it rested beneath her" | | 1 | "If I’m not back by" | | 2 | "Though it had no visible" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "It leaned beneath a hawthorn on the far side of Richmond Park, taller than she was and grey in the moonlight, its grain twisted into whorls that looked almost l…" | | 1 | "Poppies, cornflowers, foxgloves, snowdrops—summer and winter tangled together beneath a sky that seemed suddenly higher." | | 2 | "Features pressed from beneath as though a man were trapped inside it, pushing his face against a sheet." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "the thing whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.267 | |