| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 81.96% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1663 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "gently" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 66.93% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1663 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "trembled" | | 3 | "echo" | | 4 | "flicker" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "wavering" | | 9 | "sense of" | | 10 | "lurched" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 225 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 225 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 227 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1661 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 1643 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.22 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 3 | | Heartstone | 2 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 20 | | Evan | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Eva | 4 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.891 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 88.52% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 122 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared beneath her feet: narrow, clear, and winding between the trees" | | 1 | "seemed weaker under the branches" | | 2 | "as if listening" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.602 | | wordCount | 1661 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a breath from lungs, but a long collapse of air through a vast, hollow throat" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 227 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 148 | | mean | 11.22 | | std | 12.29 | | cv | 1.095 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 35 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 40 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 47 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 41 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 99.03% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 225 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "were scored" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "been gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 274 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 227 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "Beyond it lay nothing she could make sense of—only deep, shifting darkness threaded with distant pinpricks of gold." | | 1 | "She felt the fingers through the fabric—long, cold, and impossibly light." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1648 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 65 | | adverbRatio | 0.03944174757281554 | | lyAdverbCount | 22 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013349514563106795 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 227 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 227 | | mean | 7.32 | | std | 5.25 | | cv | 0.718 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 44.71% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.28634361233480177 | | totalSentences | 227 | | uniqueOpeners | 65 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 187 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a location pin dropped" | | 1 | "Somewhere nearby, something had bloomed" | | 2 | "Even the traffic on the" | | 3 | "Then 12:04 again." | | 4 | "Then came a man’s voice," | | 5 | "Only part of a shoulder." | | 6 | "Even the flowers stopped whispering." | | 7 | "Then she hit earth." | | 8 | "Then it lifted one hand." |
| | ratio | 0.048 | |
| 98.07% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 187 | | matches | | 0 | "She parked the borrowed scooter" | | 1 | "Her breath smoked in front" | | 2 | "She touched the pendant beneath" | | 3 | "Its deep crimson surface gave" | | 4 | "She had come because of" | | 5 | "She should have shown it" | | 6 | "She felt it, faintly, through" | | 7 | "She checked the path beyond" | | 8 | "Her boots landed softly on" | | 9 | "She switched on her torch." | | 10 | "She crouched and held the" | | 11 | "She stood again." | | 12 | "She followed it." | | 13 | "Her torch seemed weaker under" | | 14 | "Its beam reached only a" | | 15 | "She had walked perhaps fifty" | | 16 | "They were taller than she" | | 17 | "Their surfaces were scored with" | | 18 | "She returned to the path." | | 19 | "Her phone displayed one bar" |
| | ratio | 0.305 | |
| 80.32% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 142 | | totalSentences | 187 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory knew Richmond Park well" | | 1 | "She parked the borrowed scooter" | | 2 | "The sudden silence pressed against" | | 3 | "Her breath smoked in front" | | 4 | "She touched the pendant beneath" | | 5 | "The Heartstone was warm." | | 6 | "A small, steady heat against" | | 7 | "Its deep crimson surface gave" | | 8 | "She had come because of" | | 9 | "A second message followed before" | | 10 | "She should have shown it" | | 11 | "Anyone with better judgment than" | | 12 | "She felt it, faintly, through" | | 13 | "A rhythm like a second" | | 14 | "Rory dismounted and wheeled the" | | 15 | "She checked the path beyond" | | 16 | "Her boots landed softly on" | | 17 | "The air smelled wrong." | | 18 | "Richmond Park smelled of mud," | | 19 | "This smelled sweet." |
| | ratio | 0.759 | |
| 26.74% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 187 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.005 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "A small, steady heat against her sternum, as though someone had tucked a live coal beneath her shirt." | | 1 | "Eva had a way of saying her name that made it sound like a question, a challenge, an invitation." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Eva’s voice whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |