| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 79.80% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1733 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "sweetly" | | 2 | "tightly" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "slightly" | | 5 | "utterly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 53.84% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1733 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "glint" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "trembled" | | 8 | "footfall" | | 9 | "structure" | | 10 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 210 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 210 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 213 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1728 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.16% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 48 | | wordCount | 1716 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.46 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Dymas | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Eva | 7 | | Earth | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Aurora | 25 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.772 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 91.86% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 129 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like one of Eva’s elaborate jokes" | | 1 | "looked like a deliberate mark" | | 2 | "as if listening" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.579 | | wordCount | 1728 | | matches | | 0 | "not investigations, but she had learned" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 213 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 129 | | mean | 13.4 | | std | 15.05 | | cv | 1.124 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 47 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 55 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 51 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 70 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 69 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 34 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 50 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 45 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 210 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 296 | | matches | | 0 | "was following" | | 1 | "were not approaching" | | 2 | "were circling" |
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| 89.20% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 213 | | ratio | 0.019 | | matches | | 0 | "The stones marked the boundary of the Grove, according to the notes she had found in Eva’s messages—a hidden clearing in some pocket between Earth and the Fae realm." | | 1 | "Small flowers gleamed between the roots—blue, white, yellow, and red—opening in the dark as if night were their proper daylight." | | 2 | "One moment the air bit at her fingers; the next it pressed warm and damp against her face, carrying the scent of crushed leaves and something sweetly rotten." | | 3 | "The old injury had been nothing—a childhood accident, a kitchen knife slipping when she was six—but tonight it looked like a deliberate mark." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1727 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 65 | | adverbRatio | 0.03763752171395483 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009843659525188187 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 213 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 213 | | mean | 8.11 | | std | 5.43 | | cv | 0.67 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 42.02% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.28169014084507044 | | totalSentences | 213 | | uniqueOpeners | 60 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 189 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere far off, a deer" | | 1 | "Only the wind moved, brushing" | | 2 | "Then, beneath the insects and" | | 3 | "Then why did you tell" | | 4 | "Then another from the right." | | 5 | "Somewhere beneath the soil, something" | | 6 | "Then the darkness folded over" | | 7 | "Then she smiled, though her" |
| | ratio | 0.042 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 189 | | matches | | 0 | "She kept her phone’s torch" | | 1 | "Her breath smoked faintly in" | | 2 | "She pulled her coat tighter" | | 3 | "It had been cold when" | | 4 | "She had come because of" | | 5 | "It had led her here." | | 6 | "She had told herself she" | | 7 | "She worked deliveries, not investigations," | | 8 | "They were older than the" | | 9 | "She had stopped laughing when" | | 10 | "She turned fast, the torch" | | 11 | "She lowered the torch." | | 12 | "Her voice went no farther" | | 13 | "She frowned at it, then" | | 14 | "She did not like being" | | 15 | "She stepped between the first" | | 16 | "Her torch flickered." | | 17 | "It looked flat and insubstantial," | | 18 | "Its inner glow showed through" | | 19 | "It was larger than the" |
| | ratio | 0.265 | |
| 57.88% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 152 | | totalSentences | 189 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter knew Richmond Park" | | 1 | "The avenues of trees seemed" | | 2 | "She kept her phone’s torch" | | 3 | "The beam picked out flattened" | | 4 | "Her breath smoked faintly in" | | 5 | "She pulled her coat tighter" | | 6 | "The Heartstone was warm." | | 7 | "It had been cold when" | | 8 | "The trees ahead stood in" | | 9 | "She had come because of" | | 10 | "That was all she had," | | 11 | "An unknown benefactor had left" | | 12 | "Tonight, as she cut across" | | 13 | "It had led her here." | | 14 | "She had told herself she" | | 15 | "A transmitter, perhaps, or some" | | 16 | "She worked deliveries, not investigations," | | 17 | "The Heartstone pulsed again." | | 18 | "Aurora looked at the standing" | | 19 | "They were older than the" |
| | ratio | 0.804 | |
| 26.46% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 189 | | matches | | 0 | "Now heat seeped through the" |
| | ratio | 0.005 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The battery, which had been at sixty-three percent when she left the flat, had dropped to thirty-one." | | 1 | "The dislike had arrived before the fear, a cold instinctive recoil that tightened her shoulders and made every step feel borrowed." | | 2 | "Small flowers gleamed between the roots—blue, white, yellow, and red—opening in the dark as if night were their proper daylight." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |