Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCPYF7YVKFWS71H087VB6TD

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Thriller genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The runner had a bad left knee. Quinn clocked it at the second corner, the way his stride hitched every time that foot took his weight, and she adjusted her own pace accordingly. Eighteen years taught you that. You didn't chase the man. You chased the limp. "Police! Stop!" Nobody ever stopped. She said it anyway, because one day some barrister would ask if she had, and because shouting kept her lungs honest. Rain came down in sheets across Charing Cross Road, turning the tarmac into a smeared mirror of brake lights and takeaway signs. The suspect, dark parka, hood up, canvas satchel strapped diagonally across his chest, cut left through the traffic outside a shuttered guitar shop. A courier bike swerved. Someone leaned on a horn long enough to make it a statement. Quinn went through the same gap. Water burst up her shins. Her coat weighed twice what it had at the start of the shift, and her radio kept clipping her ribs with every step. "Bravo Two Four, foot pursuit, male IC1, heading north on Charing Cross, towards, correction, he's gone into Denmark Street." Control said something back. She lost it under the rain. Denmark Street smelled of wet brick and old cigarettes. Bin bags heaped against a doorway like sandbags. The man vaulted them, landed badly on that knee, and let out a noise she recognised, the specific short bark of a body that had just filed a complaint. Good. Twelve feet now. She could see the stitching on the satchel. She could see, too, what he'd dropped outside the storage unit on Greek Street forty minutes earlier when she'd first put eyes on him. A small object, pale, carved. She had it in an evidence bag in her pocket and it had been warm when she picked it up, which she had chosen not to think about yet, because the last time she thought about something warm that shouldn't have been, Morris had been standing beside her, and three days later Morris hadn't been standing anywhere at all. "You're going to run out of road!" He didn't answer. They never answered either. He turned hard at the end of the street, back onto the Charing Cross end, and for one glorious second Quinn thought he'd made the mistake she'd been waiting for. Straight line. Open pavement. Her legs were longer. Then he went down the steps. Not a building. Not a doorway. A boarded stairwell beside the old Foyles frontage, plywood hoarding streaked with fly-posters for club nights that had never existed, and a gap in it that had absolutely not been there when she'd walked this stretch on Tuesday. He hit the gap sideways, shoulder first, and vanished. Quinn arrived four seconds later and stopped dead. The plywood was cold and swollen with rain. The gap ran maybe three feet high, an ugly diagonal tear, and past it a set of tiled steps descended into a dark that didn't behave. Streetlight should have carried at least a few feet down. It didn't. It stopped at the second step like a curtain hung there. Warm air came up out of it. In February. Warm, and dry, and smelling of cardamom and hot metal and something underneath that reminded her of a butcher's cold room. "Bravo Two Four." Her voice came out level. Eighteen years of that too. "Suspect has entered a, ah, disused subway access on Charing Cross Road, junction with Denmark Street. Requesting backup and a supervisor. I need to know what's under here." Static. Not the crackle of a bad signal. A clean, complete nothing, as if the radio had been switched off and was politely pretending otherwise. She looked at the little screen. Full battery. No channel. Her thumb pressed the transmit button again. The rain filled the silence. *Right.* Quinn crouched by the gap and shone her torch down the steps. The beam went perhaps four feet and then simply ended, cut off flat, a white circle floating on nothing. She'd once dropped a torch down a well in Snowdonia on a rescue exercise and watched it fall for a very long time. This was worse. This was a light that had been told to stop. She sat back on her heels and let herself, for exactly five seconds, be a woman of forty-one kneeling in a puddle outside a bookshop. *You have a suspect with a satchel of something that made a locked unit on Greek Street sound like it was breathing. You have no comms. You have no backup. You have a hole in the world.* *Walk away, log it, come back at ten in the morning with a van and a firearms unit and a structural engineer.* Except she knew, with the flat certainty of a fact, that at ten in the morning the plywood would be whole and the tiles would be gone and some very apologetic person from Camden Council would tell her there'd never been a stairwell there. That's what had happened with Morris. Everyone had been so apologetic. Quinn took out the evidence bag. The carved thing inside sat in her palm, off-white, no bigger than a domino, and the warmth of it came through the polythene like a hand. There were marks scratched into one face. Not letters. Not any alphabet she'd seen, and she'd spent three years since Morris looking at alphabets. The runner had thrown this away first. Before the satchel. Before anything. *So it's the thing you need to get in, and he'd rather lose it than be caught holding it.* She dropped it back into her pocket, stood, and put her shoulder to the plywood. "Metropolitan Police," she said to the dark, which felt idiotic, and did it anyway. "I'm coming down." The steps were tiled in that particular municipal cream and green, the palette of every Tube station built before her grandmother was born, and they were dry. Not damp. Dry, with a film of dust on them that showed one set of trainer prints going down, toes deep, heels light. Running. Quinn descended three steps and the rain stopped. Not eased. Stopped, absolutely, along with the traffic and the horns and the drunk arguing outside the pizza place. She turned. Nine feet behind her the gap in the hoarding still showed a strip of orange London night, and it was as silent as a photograph. Her ears popped. She went down. The stairwell turned, and turned again, and at the third turn the walls changed. The tiles gave way to brick, then to something older, blocks of stone with grooves worn in them by the passage of shoulders, and the light came back in a form she hadn't asked for. Small lamps hung on hooks at knee height, each one holding a knot of pale fire that didn't flicker. No heat. She passed her hand an inch above one and felt nothing but the ordinary chill of her own wet skin. Then the sound started, and it came all at once, the way sound does when a door opens. Voices. Hundreds. A wall of them, layered, arguing, laughing, chanting prices. Under it a clatter of metal on stone, a bellows-wheeze, something that might have been a fiddle if the fiddle had been made from a much larger animal. The smell arrived with it, cardamom and hot iron and cut grass and blood and burnt sugar, all at the same time, so thick she felt it settle on her tongue. The stairs ended. Quinn stopped in the mouth of an archway and forgot, for a moment, to breathe. A Tube platform. That was the bones of it. She could see the curve of the tunnel roof, the tiled advertising frames, the ancient painted sign reading BRITISH MUSEUM in letters that had been out of use since before the war. But the track bed had been floored over with planks and flagstones, and along the whole length of it, into a distance the tunnel had no business having, ran stalls. Hundreds of them. Awnings of oiled canvas, of stitched hide, of something iridescent that shifted when she moved her head. Braziers throwing green flame. A woman with a face like a bishop's and two extra fingers on each hand weighing grey powder on brass scales. A stall hung with jars, and in each jar something turned to watch her. Ropes of dried flowers. A cage of birds that were not birds. A man in a beautifully cut Savile Row suit selling teeth, arranged by size, on black velvet. The crowd flowed. Some of them looked as human as her mother. Some of them didn't look like anything. And forty yards down, shoving through a knot of hooded figures at a stall selling folded paper, the parka. Quinn's hand found the radio out of pure habit. Dead. Of course. She stepped out from under the arch and a hand closed on her upper arm. "Don't." Young man. Late twenties. Olive skin, short dark curls flattened by rain he must have brought down with him, a Saint Christopher medallion sitting on the collarbone above a t-shirt gone grey with washing. There was a long pale scar running the length of his left forearm and his grip was a paramedic's grip, firm, professional, entirely without threat. "Get your hand off me." "In a second." His accent had Spain under the London. He didn't let go. His eyes moved past her, to her feet, her pocket, her wet coat. "You came in through the Denmark Street stair. In the rain, in a warranted-officer coat, with no token in your hand." "I have a token." "You have *a* token." He said it the way a doctor says *interesting*. "Show me. Quickly. Don't lift it above your waist." Quinn didn't move. Down the platform, the parka reached the paper stall, and the vendor, tall, hooded, still, turned its head towards him. "Listen to me." Tomás's voice dropped. "There are nine of the Market's people between you and him and every one of them has already smelled the police on you. You've got maybe forty seconds before somebody decides to be helpful about it. So you can stand here arguing with me, or you can put your hand in my pocket, take what's in it, and follow me along the back of the stalls where the lamps don't reach." "Who are you?" "Someone who's been stitching up people who make your mistake for six years." He finally released her arm. "Him. In the parka. You want him for the storage unit on Greek Street." Quinn's chin came up half an inch. "How do you know about Greek Street?" "Because I was the one who called it in," Tomás said, "and then I saw who answered, and I have been running down here ever since to get to him first." Down the platform, the hooded vendor raised one long arm and pointed. Not at the parka. At her. The nearest forty faces turned.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1836
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
78.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1836
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"absolutely"
count2
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"velvet"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"absolutely"
2"silence"
3"warmth"
4"flicker"
5"chill"
6"velvet"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences143
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences143
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences157
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen71
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords81
totalWords1836
ratio0.044
matches
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3"So it's the thing you need to get in, and he'd rather lose it than be caught holding it."
4"a"
5"interesting"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
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wordCount1585
uniqueNames23
maxNameDensity0.69
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
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Cross2
Road1
Street3
Greek2
Morris4
Quinn11
Foyles1
Tuesday1
February1
Eighteen2
Snowdonia1
Except1
Camden1
Council1
Tube2
London2
Savile1
Row1
Saint1
Christopher1
Spain1
You6
persons
0"Morris"
1"Quinn"
2"Council"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"You"
places
0"Charing"
1"Cross"
2"Road"
3"Street"
4"Greek"
5"February"
6"Snowdonia"
7"Camden"
8"London"
9"Spain"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1836
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences157
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs64
mean28.69
std24.16
cv0.842
sampleLengths
047
12
224
361
434
519
610
746
812
988
107
117
1238
136
1453
158
1657
1730
1841
1925
2010
2112
221
2367
2425
2537
2622
2744
2811
2956
3012
3119
3215
3317
3451
358
3646
373
383
3990
4018
4170
4218
4371
4488
4519
4619
4712
4815
491
92.99% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences143
matches
0"been switched"
1"been told"
2"were tiled"
3"been made"
4"been floored"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs250
matches
0"was politely pretending"
1"was breathing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences157
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1589
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.02957835116425425
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.008181246066708621
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences157
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences157
mean11.69
std11.24
cv0.961
sampleLengths
07
126
25
35
44
52
63
721
822
923
104
1112
126
135
1423
1519
164
176
189
198
2029
211
223
238
2424
255
2659
277
283
294
3030
312
322
334
346
353
363
3738
389
398
408
4126
4210
432
4411
457
462
4721
488
495
67.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.46496815286624205
totalSentences157
uniqueOpeners73
56.02% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences119
matches
0"Then he went down the"
1"Then the sound started, and"
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences119
matches
0"You didn't chase the man."
1"You chased the limp."
2"She said it anyway, because"
3"Her coat weighed twice what"
4"She lost it under the"
5"She could see the stitching"
6"She could see, too, what"
7"She had it in an"
8"He didn't answer."
9"They never answered either."
10"He turned hard at the"
11"Her legs were longer."
12"He hit the gap sideways,"
13"It stopped at the second"
14"Her voice came out level"
15"She looked at the little"
16"Her thumb pressed the transmit"
17"She'd once dropped a torch"
18"She sat back on her"
19"*You have a suspect with"
ratio0.294
73.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences119
matches
0"The runner had a bad"
1"Quinn clocked it at the"
2"You didn't chase the man."
3"You chased the limp."
4"Nobody ever stopped."
5"She said it anyway, because"
6"Rain came down in sheets"
7"The suspect, dark parka, hood"
8"A courier bike swerved."
9"Someone leaned on a horn"
10"Quinn went through the same"
11"Water burst up her shins."
12"Her coat weighed twice what"
13"Control said something back."
14"She lost it under the"
15"Denmark Street smelled of wet"
16"Bin bags heaped against a"
17"The man vaulted them, landed"
18"She could see the stitching"
19"She could see, too, what"
ratio0.773
84.03% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences119
matches
0"Before the satchel."
1"*So it's the thing you"
ratio0.017
35.04% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The man vaulted them, landed badly on that knee, and let out a noise she recognised, the specific short bark of a body that had just filed a complaint."
1"A boarded stairwell beside the old Foyles frontage, plywood hoarding streaked with fly-posters for club nights that had never existed, and a gap in it that had …"
2"A clean, complete nothing, as if the radio had been switched off and was politely pretending otherwise."
3"*You have a suspect with a satchel of something that made a locked unit on Greek Street sound like it was breathing."
4"Dry, with a film of dust on them that showed one set of trainer prints going down, toes deep, heels light."
5"Small lamps hung on hooks at knee height, each one holding a knot of pale fire that didn't flicker."
6"Under it a clatter of metal on stone, a bellows-wheeze, something that might have been a fiddle if the fiddle had been made from a much larger animal."
7"She could see the curve of the tunnel roof, the tiled advertising frames, the ancient painted sign reading BRITISH MUSEUM in letters that had been out of use si…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.6295%