| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.286 | | leniency | 0.571 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.62% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1481 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 79.74% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1481 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "resolved" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "stomach" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 113 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 53 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 9 | | markdownWords | 46 | | totalWords | 1494 | | ratio | 0.031 | | matches | | 0 | "The grove. Moonrise. Come alone. Please." | | 1 | "please" | | 2 | "right, sure, magic trees" | | 3 | "One hour in there could be a minute out here," | | 4 | "Or three days. Isolde's never been able to explain it properly. She says it's like asking a fish about swimming." | | 5 | "please" | | 6 | "Evan." | | 7 | "him" | | 8 | "Don't answer." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 1465 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 0.68 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Sawyer | 1 | | Hill | 1 | | Rory | 10 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | South | 1 | | Circular | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Merlot | 1 | | February | 2 | | Eva | 2 | | July-at-dusk | 1 | | Malaysia | 1 | | Evan | 3 | | Reasonable | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Sawyer" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "February" | | 3 | "Malaysia" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 34.62% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared under her flat door with six words on it in handwriting she didn't recognise" | | 1 | "sounded like from inside" | | 2 | "felt like ice water: whatever is standi" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.669 | | wordCount | 1494 | | matches | | 0 | "not an absence of sound but a thing in its own right, thick, pressing, the silence of a" |
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| 78.17% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "in, that she" | | 1 | "noticed that the" | | 2 | "did that, that" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 35.57 | | std | 31.74 | | cv | 0.892 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 74 | | 2 | 79 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 97 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 86 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 69 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 93 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 81 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 77 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 82 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 76 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 51 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 36 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 68 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 86 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 46 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 41 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 53 |
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| 98.83% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "was chained" | | 1 | "been kept" |
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| 53.80% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 228 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't touching" | | 1 | "was like putting" | | 2 | "was reaching" | | 3 | "was breathing" | | 4 | "was pointing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 113 | | ratio | 0.106 | | matches | | 0 | "That was the other reason she'd come — the cold." | | 1 | "Nine of them, in a rough ring, so old they'd stopped looking like trees and started looking like architecture — trunks split and buttressed, bark folded in on itself, limbs gone down into the earth and back up again." | | 2 | "Not the air — the air was February, raw and damp, and her breath went up in front of her in ragged white flags." | | 3 | "The cold went off her all at once, and the sound changed — that was the part that got into her teeth." | | 4 | "She'd known, walking in, that she was early or late — there was no way to be on time for anything here — but the *please* had made her expect a person." | | 5 | "All of it, in unison — the whole seething mass of it swelling and dropping in a slow rhythm, maybe five seconds up, five seconds down." | | 6 | "She had learned that, at least; Evan had taught her a great deal about the value of not reacting, of keeping her face smooth while she assessed exits." | | 7 | "Then she looked at the ring of oaks — nine of them, she'd counted nine coming in, she was certain — and counted, and got nine, and could not make the birch fit anywhere in that number no matter how she arranged it." | | 8 | "All of them, everywhere, at once — and the silence that dropped into the grove was not an absence of sound but a thing in its own right, thick, pressing, the silence of a room where somebody has just stopped speaking because you came in." | | 9 | "*Evan.* Evan's voice, the soft one, the one he used after, the one that meant he'd decided to be kind — and it was impossible, it was three hundred miles and a locked door and a whole other life impossible, and it was *him*, right down to the small dry catch on the R." | | 10 | "Hot — a bright, sudden, disciplinary heat, the sort you'd use to snap a sleepwalker out of it, and Rory gasped and clamped her hand over it and felt the crimson stone pulsing under her palm like something with a heartbeat, fast, fast, fast." | | 11 | "She started walking — east, away from the voice, into the black gap between two oaks she had never seen the far side of, with her fist closed white-knuckled around a stone that burned, and behind her, in her own considered silence, something began to follow her at exactly the speed she walked." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1458 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lay cold against her" | | 1 | "own right, thick, pressing," |
| | adverbCount | 57 | | adverbRatio | 0.03909465020576132 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009602194787379973 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 113 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 113 | | mean | 13.22 | | std | 13.72 | | cv | 1.038 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 1 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 36 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 39 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 43 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 50 |
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| 62.83% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.4247787610619469 | | totalSentences | 113 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 72.46% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the long exhale of" | | 1 | "Then she looked at the" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 63.48% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "She landed badly, wrong-footed in" | | 1 | "She'd looked it up on" | | 2 | "It had seemed like a" | | 3 | "She was in a country," | | 4 | "You start counting." | | 5 | "She stopped ten feet short" | | 6 | "She hadn't meant to." | | 7 | "Her legs had simply arrived" | | 8 | "She could see it in" | | 9 | "She says it's like asking" | | 10 | "It was like putting her" | | 11 | "It came out flat and" | | 12 | "She turned a slow circle." | | 13 | "She'd known, walking in, that" | | 14 | "She sat down on a" | | 15 | "It was fine for a" | | 16 | "Her shoulders came down." | | 17 | "She caught herself almost enjoying" | | 18 | "It rose and fell." | | 19 | "It was breathing." |
| | ratio | 0.391 | |
| 90.43% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "The gate on Sawyer's Hill" | | 1 | "She landed badly, wrong-footed in" | | 2 | "She'd looked it up on" | | 3 | "It had seemed like a" | | 4 | "She was in a country," | | 5 | "The *please* was what had" | | 6 | "Rory had spent two years" | | 7 | "The pendant lay cold against" | | 8 | "That was the other reason" | | 9 | "A pretty red bead on" | | 10 | "You start counting." | | 11 | "The oaks came up out" | | 12 | "Eva had described them once," | | 13 | "She stopped ten feet short" | | 14 | "She hadn't meant to." | | 15 | "Her legs had simply arrived" | | 16 | "She could see it in" | | 17 | "Cow parsley, foxgloves, something small" | | 18 | "Isolde's never been able to" | | 19 | "She says it's like asking" |
| | ratio | 0.739 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Whoever had left it for" | | 1 | "Because it was warm." | | 2 | "*Or three days." |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 73.17% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the long exhale of Richmond Park at half past eleven, and somewhere far off the throat-clearing rumble of the South Circular, which was the last honest sou…" | | 1 | "She could see it in the moonlight, pale and lush and moving in a breeze that wasn't touching her at all." | | 2 | "And into the gap came the noise of the grove: insects, thick and layered, a summer sound, a July-at-dusk sound, and under it the trickle of water she couldn't l…" | | 3 | "All of them, everywhere, at once — and the silence that dropped into the grove was not an absence of sound but a thing in its own right, thick, pressing, the si…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.286 | | leniency | 0.571 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |