Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCSWFCYGWKPPFY79WRQB7K5

Run Details

Duration:
18.3s
Cost:
$0.018731
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain in Soho always tasted of diesel and burnt sugar, a slick film that clung to the green neon sign hanging above the door. Rory wiped her wet fringe from her eyes, pushed through the heavy oak entrance of The Raven’s Nest, and shivered. Inside, the air was thick with the warm, yeasty smell of spilled ale and furniture polish. Silas was behind the counter, rubbing a highball glass with a lint-free cloth. His grey-streaked auburn beard caught the amber glow of the low-hanging sconces, and his silver signet ring clicked rhythmically against the crystal as he turned it. He gave Rory a sharp, silent nod—the same nod he gave every night when she returned from her late shift at the Golden Empress, her lungs still burning from pedaling through the London drizzle. "Quiet night, Si," she said, resting her chin on her hand as she leaned against the polished mahogany bar. She rolled her left wrist absentmindedly, her thumb tracing the small crescent-shaped scar tucked beneath her watch strap. "It was," Silas said, his voice a low rumble seasoned by thirty years of cheap tobacco and intelligence reports. He set the glass down with a soft *clink*. "Until ten minutes ago." He flicked his hazel eyes toward the back corner booth, half-hidden behind a dark timber pillar and a framed, yellowing map of nineteenth-century maritime routes. Rory turned. A man sat alone in the shadows, nursing a tumbler of neat scotch. He wore a crisp, tailored charcoal overcoat—the kind that cost more than Rory earned in three months of delivering dim sum. His dark hair was sheared tight at the sides, slicked back with engineered precision, and his posture was rigid, almost painful in its rectitude. He was studying a heavy gold signet ring on his pinky finger, turning it again and again, his jaw working in slow, deliberate chewing motions. Rory’s breath hitched, catching somewhere behind her collarbone. Evan. The name hit her like a drop in barometric pressure. Four years since she’d slipped out of their damp flat in Roath while he was still sleeping, leaving her keys on the counter next to an empty bottle of cheap Shiraz and taking the early train from Cardiff Central to Paddington. Four years of changing her hair, changing her habits, burying the girl who studied Pre-Law under layers of exhaust fumes, dark takeaways, and the quiet shadow of Silas’ protection. "He hasn't ordered food," Silas murmured, bending down to fetch a bottle of Irish whiskey from the lower shelf. "Just sat down. Asked if a woman matching your description lived upstairs." Rory’s heart hammered a frantic, uneven rhythm against her ribs. Her first instinct was the door—to turn back out into the rain, to lose herself in the crowded, shimmering veins of Soho. But her feet remained rooted to the sticky floorboards. The fear was there, sharp and familiar, but beneath it sat a strange, cold curiosity. "Did you tell him?" she whispered. "I told him I run a pub, not a directory," Silas said smoothly. He poured two fingers of whiskey into a heavy tumbler and slid it across the wood toward her. "Your call, Rory. I can have him out on the pavement in twenty seconds. Knee or no knee." She looked at Silas, seeing the lethal stillness behind his tired eyes. Then she looked back at Evan. He was different. In Cardiff, Evan had been soft around the edges, a creature of heavy wool jumpers, unwashed hair, and a volatile, suffocating moodiness that could turn a quiet kitchen into a minefield in the span of a drawled sentence. The man in the booth looked honed, stripped of excess flesh, buffed to a cold, predatory shine. "No," Rory said softly, taking the tumbler. "I'll talk to him." She walked across the tavern, her sneakers squeaking softly on the damp floorboards. With every step, the distance between who she had been—Laila, the quiet girl reading tort law textbooks while Evan shouted at the television—and who she was now felt paper-thin, ready to tear. She stopped at the edge of the table. "You're in the wrong city, Evan." The man froze. Slowly, he set his glass down. When he looked up, his eyes were bloodshot, surrounded by deep, bruised smudges of exhaustion that no expensive haircut could mask. "Laila," he said. The old name felt like a ill-fitting coat. "Rory," she corrected, her voice deadpan. She didn't sit. She stood over him, her jacket still damp, smelling faintly of sesame oil and wet wool. "It’s Rory now." Evan stared at her, his lips parting slightly. He reached out a hand, his fingers twitching as if to touch her sleeve, but stopped himself, pulling his arm back to his chest like he'd been burned. "You look... different," he said. His voice was lower than she remembered, stripped of its Welsh lilt, replaced by a flat, polished mid-Atlantic cadence. "Your hair." "It grows," she said. "What are you doing here, Evan?" "I was in London for work. A firm in Mayfair." He gestured vaguely toward the window, where the rain was coming down harder, blurring the green neon glow into a smear of light. "I saw your father in Cardiff three months ago. At the Crown Court. He... he mentioned you were down here. Somewhere in Soho." "My father doesn't know where I am," Rory said coldly. "He knows I'm alive. That's all." Evan pulled a silver cigarette case from his breast pocket, snapped it open, then remembered where he was and snapped it shut. The metallic click echoed in the small alcove. "I looked for you," Evan said quietly. He wasn't looking at her face now; he was looking at her left hand, which she had thrust deep into her jacket pocket. "For a long time, Laila. Jesus, the flat was so quiet after you left. I thought..." He swallowed, his throat moving heavily. "I thought something terrible had happened to you." "Something terrible was happening to me," she said. The silence that followed was heavy, weighted down by years of things unsaid, of doors slammed, of choked apologies that meant nothing the next morning. Evan flinched, but he didn't argue. That was the biggest change, Rory realized. The old Evan would have exploded, flaring up with righteous indignation, turning her words back on her until she was the one apologizing for being hurt. This man just sat there, looking diminished inside his expensive coat. "I went to therapy," Evan said to his scotch. "After the police came looking for you. After your father threatened to ruin my pupillage. I... I realized things. About myself. About my father." He looked up then, and for a fleeting second, she caught a glimpse of the terrified boy she’d met in a university library five years ago. "I'm not that man anymore, Rory. I swear to God I'm not." "Good," she said, and meant it. "I hope you're better. For whoever comes next." "There isn't anyone next," he said quickly. "I couldn't. I kept waiting to run into you. To tell you... I'm partner now. At the firm. I bought a place in Pontcanna. It has a garden. Remember how you always wanted a garden?" Rory looked down at him. She felt an odd, hollow ache in her chest—not for him, and not for the life he was describing, but for the girl who would have compromised everything just to hear him offer her a garden four years ago. That girl was gone, buried under the rain of Soho and the quiet lessons taught by an old spy in a dark bar. "I deliver food on a bicycle, Evan," she said softly. "I live in a studio flat upstairs that smells like old ale and stale fry-ups. And I haven't thought about Cardiff in two years." Evan’s face tightened. "You had a first-class standing in Pre-Law. You were smarter than anyone in our year. You're wasting yourself here. Driving a bicycle for a takeaway? It's absurd. You're living like a ghost." "I'm living like myself," Rory said. She leaned down slightly, resting one palm flat on the dark wood of the table. "When I was with you, I was the ghost. I spent every day trying not to make enough noise to trigger you. Down here, nobody's afraid of me, and I'm not afraid of anyone." Evan stared at her hand on the table. He reached out, his thumb gently catching the hem of her jacket sleeve, pulling it back just enough to expose the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. "You still have that," he murmured. Rory pulled her arm back, breaking his touch cleanly. She tucked her hand back into her pocket. "I got that when I was seven, Evan. Falling off a fence in Cardiff. It has nothing to do with you." She stepped back from the table, taking a long drink from the tumbler Silas had poured her. The whiskey was sharp, burning away the lingering taste of the rain and the stale memories he’d brought into her sanctuary. "Drink your scotch, Evan," she said, her voice entirely steady. "Then go back to Mayfair. Or Pontcanna. Enjoy your garden." "Rory, please—" "If you come back here," she added, her bright blue eyes locking onto his with a clarity that made him pull back into his coat, "the man behind the bar won't be as polite as I've been. And he knows people who make bad decisions disappear very quietly." She turned her back on him before he could answer. She walked back across the room, the sticky floorboards beneath her feet feeling solid, real, and entirely hers. Silas didn't ask questions when she reached the counter. He simply took her empty tumbler, set it in the sink, and picked up his lint-free cloth once more. "All right?" he asked softly. Rory looked at her reflection in the dark, polished mirror behind the bottles—shoulder-length black hair, eyes clear, shoulders set. She didn't look like Laila anymore. She didn't feel like her, either. "Yeah, Si," she said, stepping around the bar to head toward the stairs leading up to her flat. "Everything's fine." Behind her, the heavy oak door clicked open, letting in a brief gust of damp Soho wind and the green glow of the neon sign, before closing with a firm, final thud.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:11:52.358Z" 7/25/2026, 2:11:52 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount8
adverbTags
0"Silas said smoothly [smoothly]"
1"Rory said softly [softly]"
2"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
3"Rory said coldly [coldly]"
4"Evan said quietly [quietly]"
5"he said quickly [quickly]"
6"she said softly [softly]"
7"he asked softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.574
leniency1
rawRatio0.296
effectiveRatio0.296
68.26% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1733
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"softly"
count4
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"coldly"
count1
4
adverb"quickly"
count1
5
adverb"gently"
count1
6
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slowly"
2"slightly"
3"coldly"
4"quickly"
5"gently"
6"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1733
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"crystal"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"lilt"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"fleeting"
count1
8
word"sanctuary"
count1
highlights
0"crystal"
1"tracing"
2"flicked"
3"familiar"
4"lilt"
5"echoed"
6"silence"
7"fleeting"
8"sanctuary"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"the air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences94
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1725
ratio0.001
matches
0"clink"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions29
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount1293
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.01
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Soho4
Raven1
Nest1
Rory13
Golden1
Empress1
London1
Roath1
Shiraz1
Cardiff2
Central1
Paddington1
Pre-Law1
Silas7
Irish1
Evan12
Laila2
Welsh1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Silas"
3"Evan"
4"Laila"
places
0"Soho"
1"Golden"
2"London"
3"Roath"
4"Cardiff"
5"Paddington"
globalScore0.997
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a ill-fitting coat"
84.06% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.159
wordCount1725
matches
0"not for him, and not for the life he was describing, but for the girl who would have compromised everything just to h"
1"not for the life he was describing, but for the girl who would have compromised everything just to h"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean32.55
std21.6
cv0.664
sampleLengths
045
189
237
332
425
52
683
78
81
980
1031
1156
126
1349
1418
1558
1611
1745
1814
1930
2011
2128
2236
2326
2410
2556
2616
2730
2860
298
3025
3150
3271
3314
3442
3567
3634
3735
3855
3935
406
4117
4221
4338
4420
452
4648
4728
4828
495
94.06% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences94
matches
0"was sheared"
1"been burned"
2"was gone"
23.01% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs226
matches
0"was studying"
1"was still sleeping"
2"was coming"
3"was looking"
4"wasn't looking"
5"was describing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences115
ratio0.061
matches
0"He gave Rory a sharp, silent nod—the same nod he gave every night when she returned from her late shift at the Golden Empress, her lungs still burning from pedaling through the London drizzle."
1"He wore a crisp, tailored charcoal overcoat—the kind that cost more than Rory earned in three months of delivering dim sum."
2"Her first instinct was the door—to turn back out into the rain, to lose herself in the crowded, shimmering veins of Soho."
3"With every step, the distance between who she had been—Laila, the quiet girl reading tort law textbooks while Evan shouted at the television—and who she was now felt paper-thin, ready to tear."
4"He wasn't looking at her face now; he was looking at her left hand, which she had thrust deep into her jacket pocket."
5"She felt an odd, hollow ache in her chest—not for him, and not for the life he was describing, but for the girl who would have compromised everything just to hear him offer her a garden four years ago."
6"Rory looked at her reflection in the dark, polished mirror behind the bottles—shoulder-length black hair, eyes clear, shoulders set."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount738
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.023035230352303523
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0040650406504065045
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean15
std10.63
cv0.709
sampleLengths
025
120
216
313
426
534
619
718
819
99
104
1125
122
1313
1421
1524
1625
178
181
1910
2041
2129
2219
2312
2410
2522
269
2715
286
2913
3018
3118
3212
336
343
3538
3617
377
384
3913
4032
418
426
433
446
4521
463
478
486
493
55.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3652173913043478
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners42
78.43% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences85
matches
0"Then she looked back at"
1"Slowly, he set his glass"
ratio0.024
27.06% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences85
matches
0"His grey-streaked auburn beard caught"
1"He gave Rory a sharp,"
2"she said, resting her chin"
3"She rolled her left wrist"
4"He set the glass down"
5"He flicked his hazel eyes"
6"He wore a crisp, tailored"
7"His dark hair was sheared"
8"He was studying a heavy"
9"Her first instinct was the"
10"He poured two fingers of"
11"She looked at Silas, seeing"
12"He was different."
13"She walked across the tavern,"
14"She stopped at the edge"
15"she corrected, her voice deadpan"
16"She didn't sit."
17"She stood over him, her"
18"He reached out a hand,"
19"His voice was lower than"
ratio0.482
18.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences85
matches
0"The rain in Soho always"
1"Rory wiped her wet fringe"
2"Silas was behind the counter,"
3"His grey-streaked auburn beard caught"
4"He gave Rory a sharp,"
5"she said, resting her chin"
6"She rolled her left wrist"
7"Silas said, his voice a"
8"He set the glass down"
9"He flicked his hazel eyes"
10"A man sat alone in"
11"He wore a crisp, tailored"
12"His dark hair was sheared"
13"He was studying a heavy"
14"Rory’s breath hitched, catching somewhere"
15"The name hit her like"
16"Silas murmured, bending down to"
17"Rory’s heart hammered a frantic,"
18"Her first instinct was the"
19"The fear was there, sharp"
ratio0.882
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
59.80% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The rain in Soho always tasted of diesel and burnt sugar, a slick film that clung to the green neon sign hanging above the door."
1"He was studying a heavy gold signet ring on his pinky finger, turning it again and again, his jaw working in slow, deliberate chewing motions."
2"In Cardiff, Evan had been soft around the edges, a creature of heavy wool jumpers, unwashed hair, and a volatile, suffocating moodiness that could turn a quiet …"
3"He reached out a hand, his fingers twitching as if to touch her sleeve, but stopped himself, pulling his arm back to his chest like he'd been burned."
4"She felt an odd, hollow ache in her chest—not for him, and not for the life he was describing, but for the girl who would have compromised everything just to he…"
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she corrected, her voice deadpan"
1"He swallowed, his throat moving heavily"
2"she said, her voice entirely steady"
43.62% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags23
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Silas murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she corrected (correct)"
3"he murmured (murmur)"
4"she added (add)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.489
leniency0.979
rawRatio0.217
effectiveRatio0.213
72.4530%