Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCT0QJ9YYGXQ69GREERGVC3

Run Details

Duration:
9.6s
Cost:
$0.005218
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the entrance hummed with a low, electrical thrum, cutting a sharp emerald stripe across the greasy Soho pavement. Inside The Raven's Nest, the air hung thick with the ghosts of stale lager, old tobacco, and polished mahogany. Walls paneled in dark wood were cluttered with yellowed maps of nineteenth-century Europe and framed black-and-white photographs of faces that had long since turned to dust. Aurora Carter stood behind the scarred wooden bar, wiping down a circle of condensation with a damp cloth. Her straight, shoulder-length black hair fell forward, catching the amber glow of the Edison bulbs suspended overhead. At twenty-five, life had honed her into something leaner, harder around the edges. A small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a lingering souvenir from a childhood accident back in Cardiff—peeked out from beneath the sleeve of her rolled-up shirt as she set a dry tumbler down with a soft thud. Near the back, Silas Blackwood sat at a corner table, his grey-streaked auburn beard neatly trimmed, nursing a finger of scotch. He caught her eye and gave a subtle, affirming nod, his silver signet ring flashing on his right hand as he adjusted his glass. Silas carried the quiet authority of a man who had spent decades reading rooms before stepping into them, his slight limp—the permanent souvenir of a botched operation in Prague—kept mostly hidden beneath the booth's overhang. Aurora didn't mind the quiet hum of the bar tonight. It was a sanctuary of sorts, perched just above the flat where she slept, far enough from the wreckage of her old life in Wales and the suffocating memory of Evan. Delivering boxes of greasy noodles for the Golden Empress by day kept her lungs full of London air, and tending bar for Silas at night kept her sharp. The heavy front door groaned open, letting in a sharp gust of late-autumn chill and the distant, chaotic roar of the street. A woman stepped inside, pausing as the damp air hit her. She wore a tailored charcoal overcoat that practically screamed Mayfair, framing a silhouette that looked both expensive and brittle. Her hair was cropped short, swept back from a face that had lost its soft, girlish roundness, replaced by high, sharp cheekbones and eyes guarded by a polite, impenetrable glaze. Aurora froze, the bar rag balled tight in her fist. Her bright blue eyes widened as the stranger crossed the threshold, shedding the grey mist of the London night. "Clara?" Aurora whispered, the name slipping out before she could swallow it back. The stranger stopped dead. She stared across the dim, map-lined room, her gaze locking onto the girl behind the counter. For a fraction of a second, the polished facade cracked—the rigid posture slumping just enough to reveal the girl who had once spent endless summer afternoons sprawled across a Cardiff carpet, trading secrets and cheap sweets. "Rory?" Clara’s voice was thinner than Aurora remembered, stripped of its old, effortless warmth. They hadn’t spoken in four years. Not since the suffocating summer after university when Clara had taken a corporate fellowship in Zurich and Aurora had stayed behind, slowly drowning in a life she hadn't chosen, bound to a man who had nearly broken her. Clara walked slowly toward the bar, her heels clicking a sharp, unforgiving rhythm against the worn floorboards. She slid onto a stool near the tap, her gloved hands resting palms-down on the wood. "I didn't think I'd ever find you," Clara said, offering a tight, fragile smile that didn't reach her eyes. "Or... wherever this is." "It's called The Raven's Nest," Aurora said, her voice steadying as she instinctively fell back on her cool-headed composure. She forced her fingers to relax around the damp rag. "Soho. It’s... home, mostly." "It smells like old maps," Clara observed, glancing up at the wall behind Aurora, where a tattered chart of the Mediterranean hung askew. "Very dramatic. Very you." "People change, Clara." Aurora reached for a clean glass, setting it down between them. "What are you drinking? Or are we skipping straight to the part where we pretend we're fine?" Clara let out a dry, humorless breath that sounded remarkably like a laugh. "Vodka, neat. Please." Aurora poured it, her movements practiced and precise. She slid the glass across the scarred wood. Clara picked it up, tracing the rim with a manicured nail before taking a sharp sip. She didn't flinch. "You look..." Clara started, then trailed off, her gaze dropping to Aurora’s wrist, catching the edge of the crescent scar before darting away. "Different. Harder. In a good way. You look like you belong here." "And you look like you're still auditing balance sheets in your sleep," Aurora countered, leaning her forearms against the bar. "What happened to the girl who wanted to open an independent bookstore in the Cotswolds?" "The bookstore went bankrupt in the hypothetical planning phase," Clara said softly, staring down into her clear liquor. "Turns out passion doesn't pay the rent on a three-bedroom terrace." "No," Aurora said, her tone flat. "It doesn't." A heavy, suffocating silence fell between them, filled only by the low-frequency hum of the neon sign outside and the faint clinking of ice from Silas's corner. The distance of years stretched across the wooden counter—an expanse built of missed phone calls, unreturned letters, and the cowardice of outgrowing one another. They had both fled Cardiff, but they had fled into opposite dimensions. Clara had chased the crushing expectations of corporate success, armor-plating herself in wealth and status, while Aurora had run from safety into the shadows of the city, trading law books for delivery crates and the quiet mentorship of a retired spymaster. "I heard about Evan," Clara said suddenly, the words dropping into the space between them like stones in a well. Aurora’s jaw tightened. A muscle jumped in her cheek. "Did you?" "Eva told me. Before we... before we stopped talking as much." Clara swallowed hard, her eyes finally rising to meet Aurora's bright blue stare. "I'm sorry, Rory. I should have called. I should have come back." "You were in Zurich," Aurora said, though the sharpness in her voice lacked real malice, dulled by the sheer exhaustion of old grief. "Living the dream. I wouldn't have expected you to drop everything to come pull me out of the fire." "I was a coward," Clara confessed, her voice dropping to a harsh whisper. She gripped the glass tighter, her knuckles whitening. "I was terrified of seeing you like that. I was terrified of realizing that the world wasn't as shiny as the recruiters promised. So I just... blocked it out. I pretended you were still the girl on the rug in Cardiff." "That girl is dead, Clara," Aurora said quietly. She looked down at her hands, then back up at her old friend. "And so is the one you left behind. Look at us. We're ghosts haunting a Soho dive bar." Clara gave a slow, mournful nod. She finished her vodka in a single, burning swallow and set the glass down with a sharp click. She reached into her coat pocket and pulled out a sleek leather cardholder, slipping a crisp five-pound note onto the wood, tucked beneath the rim of the empty glass. "I didn't come here to ruin your shift, Rory," Clara whispered, standing up from the stool. The heavy overcoat billowed around her knees as she straightened. "I just... I missed my friend. Even if she's a ghost now." Aurora didn't move to stop her. She kept her hands flat on the bar, watching the reflection of the amber lights dance across the surface of the polished mahogany. "She misses you too," Aurora said, her voice barely carrying over the hum of the neon sign. Clara paused near the heavy door, her hand resting on the brass handle. She looked back over her shoulder, a bittersweet shadow crossing her sharp features. For a fleeting second, through the layers of armor and time, Aurora saw the girl from Cardiff—soft-eyed and waiting for summer. Then Clara pushed the door open, stepping out into the cold London mist, and the green light swallowed her whole. Silas limped out from the shadows of his corner booth, his boots clicking softly on the floorboards. He stopped beside Aurora, sliding a clean cloth across the wood to help her wipe down the damp ring left by Clara's glass. He didn't ask questions. He just stood there with the quiet weight of a man who understood the heavy cost of old secrets and unpayable debts. Aurora stared at the empty glass for a long moment, then reached out, picked up the five-pound note, and tucked it neatly into the tip jar. "Another scotch, Silas?" she asked, her voice steady and clear. "No, Rory," the old spy said softly, resting his heavy hand on the edge of the bar. "Close up shop. I think we’ve both had enough history for one night."
created_at"2026-07-25T14:14:11.803Z" 7/25/2026, 2:14:11 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"Clara started then [then]"
1"Clara said softly [softly]"
2"Clara said suddenly [suddenly]"
3"Aurora said quietly [quietly]"
4"the old spy said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.543
leniency1
rawRatio0.263
effectiveRatio0.263
73.39% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1503
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"softly"
count3
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
2"softly"
3"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1503
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"sanctuary"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"chaotic"
count1
3
word"facade"
count1
4
word"effortless"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"dance"
count1
10
word"fleeting"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"sanctuary"
1"chill"
2"chaotic"
3"facade"
4"effortless"
5"warmth"
6"tracing"
7"silence"
8"whisper"
9"dance"
10"fleeting"
11"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1495
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions68
wordCount1214
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity1.89
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Europe1
Carter1
Edison1
Cardiff4
Silas5
Blackwood1
Prague1
Wales1
Evan1
Golden1
Empress1
London3
Mayfair1
Aurora23
Clara18
Zurich1
Mediterranean1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Edison"
2"Silas"
3"Blackwood"
4"Evan"
5"Mayfair"
6"Aurora"
7"Clara"
8"Mediterranean"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Europe"
3"Cardiff"
4"Prague"
5"Wales"
6"London"
7"Zurich"
globalScore0.553
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1495
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean38.33
std22.12
cv0.577
sampleLengths
068
185
280
369
422
560
629
713
856
914
1044
1133
1223
1333
1427
1531
1616
1735
1835
1935
2029
218
22104
2320
2411
2536
2642
2762
2839
2953
3038
3129
3217
3347
3420
3566
3626
3710
3830
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"was cropped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs200
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences90
ratio0.056
matches
0"A small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a lingering souvenir from a childhood accident back in Cardiff—peeked out from beneath the sleeve of her rolled-up shirt as she set a dry tumbler down with a soft thud."
1"Silas carried the quiet authority of a man who had spent decades reading rooms before stepping into them, his slight limp—the permanent souvenir of a botched operation in Prague—kept mostly hidden beneath the booth's overhang."
2"For a fraction of a second, the polished facade cracked—the rigid posture slumping just enough to reveal the girl who had once spent endless summer afternoons sprawled across a Cardiff carpet, trading secrets and cheap sweets."
3"The distance of years stretched across the wooden counter—an expanse built of missed phone calls, unreturned letters, and the cowardice of outgrowing one another."
4"For a fleeting second, through the layers of armor and time, Aurora saw the girl from Cardiff—soft-eyed and waiting for summer."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1238
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"dim, map-lined room,"
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.02827140549273021
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.013731825525040387
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean16.61
std9.09
cv0.547
sampleLengths
023
119
226
318
417
513
637
721
824
935
1010
1131
1228
1322
1411
1519
1630
1710
1819
1913
204
2116
2236
2314
246
2538
2617
2716
2819
294
3019
3110
324
3323
344
3514
3617
3713
383
398
408
4116
423
4323
4412
4520
4615
4718
4811
496
64.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4111111111111111
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners37
45.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Then Clara pushed the door"
ratio0.014
95.68% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences74
matches
0"Her straight, shoulder-length black hair"
1"He caught her eye and"
2"It was a sanctuary of"
3"She wore a tailored charcoal"
4"Her hair was cropped short,"
5"Her bright blue eyes widened"
6"She stared across the dim,"
7"They hadn’t spoken in four"
8"She slid onto a stool"
9"She forced her fingers to"
10"She slid the glass across"
11"She didn't flinch."
12"They had both fled Cardiff,"
13"She gripped the glass tighter,"
14"She looked down at her"
15"She finished her vodka in"
16"She reached into her coat"
17"She kept her hands flat"
18"She looked back over her"
19"He stopped beside Aurora, sliding"
ratio0.311
14.05% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences74
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Walls paneled in dark wood"
2"Aurora Carter stood behind the"
3"Her straight, shoulder-length black hair"
4"A small crescent-shaped scar on"
5"He caught her eye and"
6"Silas carried the quiet authority"
7"Aurora didn't mind the quiet"
8"It was a sanctuary of"
9"The heavy front door groaned"
10"A woman stepped inside, pausing"
11"She wore a tailored charcoal"
12"Her hair was cropped short,"
13"Aurora froze, the bar rag"
14"Her bright blue eyes widened"
15"Aurora whispered, the name slipping"
16"The stranger stopped dead."
17"She stared across the dim,"
18"Clara’s voice was thinner than"
19"They hadn’t spoken in four"
ratio0.892
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
12.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Walls paneled in dark wood were cluttered with yellowed maps of nineteenth-century Europe and framed black-and-white photographs of faces that had long since tu…"
1"Silas carried the quiet authority of a man who had spent decades reading rooms before stepping into them, his slight limp—the permanent souvenir of a botched op…"
2"She wore a tailored charcoal overcoat that practically screamed Mayfair, framing a silhouette that looked both expensive and brittle."
3"Her hair was cropped short, swept back from a face that had lost its soft, girlish roundness, replaced by high, sharp cheekbones and eyes guarded by a polite, i…"
4"For a fraction of a second, the polished facade cracked—the rigid posture slumping just enough to reveal the girl who had once spent endless summer afternoons s…"
5"Not since the suffocating summer after university when Clara had taken a corporate fellowship in Zurich and Aurora had stayed behind, slowly drowning in a life …"
6"Clara let out a dry, humorless breath that sounded remarkably like a laugh."
7"He just stood there with the quiet weight of a man who understood the heavy cost of old secrets and unpayable debts."
19.74% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Aurora whispered, the name slipping out before she could swallow it back"
1"Aurora said, her tone flat"
2"Clara confessed, her voice dropping to a harsh whisper"
3"she asked, her voice steady and clear"
35.71% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
1"Clara observed (observe)"
2"Clara confessed (confess)"
3"Clara whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.229
71.9584%