| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 80.42% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1277 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "completely" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 56.93% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1277 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "velvet" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "vibrated" | | 8 | "could feel" | | 9 | "comforting" | | 10 | "gloom" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 8 | | markdownWords | 17 | | totalWords | 1270 | | ratio | 0.013 | | matches | | 0 | "Crack." | | 1 | "toward" | | 2 | "Out-of-the-box thinking," | | 3 | "Panicking narrows your vision. Look at the facts." | | 4 | "Slither-drag. Slither-drag." | | 5 | "Slither-drag." | | 6 | "Rory." | | 7 | "Aurora." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.44% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 1260 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.11 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 1 | | London | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 5 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Fact | 3 | | Like | 1 | | Thames | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Like" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Cardiff" | | 6 | "Thames" |
| | globalScore | 0.944 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 80.56% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like a heavy oak branch being twis" | | 1 | "sounded like her mother's voice, dipped in" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1270 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 33.42 | | std | 21.7 | | cv | 0.649 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 47 | | 2 | 44 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 58 | | 5 | 62 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 61 | | 9 | 65 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 43 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 74 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 41 | | 16 | 37 | | 17 | 46 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 50 | | 27 | 52 | | 28 | 37 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 41 | | 31 | 35 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 56 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 53 | | 36 | 36 | | 37 | 16 |
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| 94.06% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "been warned" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "being pulled" |
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| 26.39% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 192 | | matches | | 0 | "was pulsing" | | 1 | "was burning" | | 2 | "was spinning" | | 3 | "was pulsing" | | 4 | "was leaking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 95 | | ratio | 0.074 | | matches | | 0 | "Not glowing—not yet—but beating against her skin with a slow, heavy rhythm that mirrored her own thumping pulse." | | 1 | "She checked her wristwatch—a battered analog dial with a scratched face." | | 2 | "A ring of ancient oak standing stones—weathered, moss-draped monoliths rooted deep in the dirt—encircled the glade." | | 3 | "It wasn't the sharp snap of a dry twig underfoot; it sounded like a heavy oak branch being twisted, splintered slowly from the trunk by immense, deliberate pressure." | | 4 | "When Rory looked directly at it, there was nothing—only the grey, pitted bark of the ancient oak and the tangle of ivy creeping up its side." | | 5 | "It didn't stretch away from the twilight; it stretched *toward* her, creeping over the bluebells like spilled ink." | | 6 | "A sound tore through the Grove—a high, thin screech like metal sliding against wet glass." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1277 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "rough, cool silver chain" | | 1 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 2 | "dull, bruised purple light." |
| | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.03288958496476116 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014095536413469069 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 95 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 95 | | mean | 13.37 | | std | 9.1 | | cv | 0.68 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 32 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 38 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 41 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 44.56% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.3368421052631579 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 37.88% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, Rory pivoted sharply on" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 88.18% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Her phone had died three" | | 1 | "She slipped her thumb beneath" | | 2 | "It was pulsing." | | 3 | "She checked her wristwatch—a battered" | | 4 | "She was here for a" | | 5 | "She reached into her pocket," | | 6 | "It wasn't the sharp snap" | | 7 | "she called out, her voice" | | 8 | "She was good at keeping" | | 9 | "She took three steps toward" | | 10 | "It was a tall, pale" | | 11 | "It didn't stretch away from" | | 12 | "It was a wet, rhythmic" | | 13 | "It circled her, moving in" | | 14 | "Her hand was steady, but" | | 15 | "She began to draw the" | | 16 | "It was closer now." | | 17 | "She didn't look up." | | 18 | "She kept her eyes glued" | | 19 | "It vibrated up through the" |
| | ratio | 0.33 | |
| 50.91% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "The fog rolled through the" | | 1 | "Her phone had died three" | | 2 | "She slipped her thumb beneath" | | 3 | "It was pulsing." | | 4 | "Rory stepped between two massive," | | 5 | "The air changed instantly." | | 6 | "The damp, petrol-laced chill of" | | 7 | "The Fae Grove opened before" | | 8 | "She checked her wristwatch—a battered" | | 9 | "The second hand twitched, dragged" | | 10 | "Rory swallowed hard, her mouth" | | 11 | "She was here for a" | | 12 | "She reached into her pocket," | | 13 | "The clearing was unnaturally still." | | 14 | "Bluebells and pale windflowers bloomed" | | 15 | "Rory snapped her head toward" | | 16 | "A ring of ancient oak" | | 17 | "The sound had come from" | | 18 | "It wasn't the sharp snap" | | 19 | "she called out, her voice" |
| | ratio | 0.818 | |
| 56.82% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 89.95% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Not glowing—not yet—but beating against her skin with a slow, heavy rhythm that mirrored her own thumping pulse." | | 1 | "Rory stepped between two massive, lightning-scathed trunks that marked the boundary." | | 2 | "Bluebells and pale windflowers bloomed in dense, velvet carpets beneath her boots, completely unbothered by the frost that had gripped the rest of London hours …" | | 3 | "Instead, Rory pivoted sharply on her heel, dropping to her hip and dragging the broken piece of iron chalk in a brutal, jagged arc across the soil, completing t…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" | | 1 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |