Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCT2FWCSG8W0ZT2DDCJA4ZN

Run Details

Duration:
11.8s
Cost:
$0.005958
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the entrance humred a low, electric C-flat against the damp Soho air, casting an emerald smear over the wet pavement. Inside, The Raven's Nest smelled of old mahogany, spilled scotch, and the damp wool of coats shed against the London chill. Aurora Carter stood behind the scarred wooden bar, using a folded bar towel to wipe away a ring of condensation left by a pint glass. Her straight shoulder-length black hair fell forward, catching the amber glow of the Edison bulbs suspended from the tin ceiling. At twenty-five, she had mastered the art of blending into the woodwork, a habit picked up from months of dodging the ghosts of Cardiff and the lingering shadow of Evan. Across the room, Silas Blackwood limped out from the shadowy corner near the old maps, his weight favoring his right leg as his left knee complained quietly about the weather. He ran a hand over his neatly trimmed grey-streaked auburn beard, his hazel eyes scanning the sparse crowd with the lingering vigilance of a retired MI6 field operative. He flashed a silver signet ring on his right hand as he adjusted a bottle of gin on the top shelf. The door chinked open, letting in a sudden draft of wind that rattled the black-and-white photographs pinned to the far wall. Aurora didn't look up immediately, reaching automatically for a clean coaster. Just a whisky, please. Neat. The voice hit Aurora like a physical blow. It was a voice she hadn’t heard across a kitchen table in four years, a voice that belonged to the sunlit lanes of Cardiff and a girl who still believed pre-law syllabi were the heaviest burdens the world had to offer. Aurora froze. The bar towel remained pressed against the mahogany, her fingers whitening over the fabric. She looked up. Standing at the edge of the bar, pulling down the damp hood of a camel-hair coat, was Siobhan. Or at least, someone who used to be Siobhan. The girl standing under the amber light was sharper now, carved down to bone and angles. The soft-cheeked medical student who used to raid campus bakeries with Aurora was gone, replaced by a woman whose hazel eyes—no, too bright, too guarded—fixed on Aurora with a jolt of sudden, terrifying recognition. Siobhan’s hair, once a tumbled cascade of curls, was cropped close to her skull in a severe, silver-flecked pixie cut that emphasized the severe line of her jaw. Rory? Siobhan breathed, the word catching on a sharp intake of London air. Hello, Shiv, Aurora said. Her voice was remarkably steady, though her left hand twitched, sliding instinctively down her thigh to brush against the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a lingering souvenir from a childhood treehouse fall that she touched whenever the ground threatened to tilt beneath her. Siobhan stared at her, taking in the black denim jacket, the cool, detached set of Aurora's bright blue eyes, the invisible armor of a girl who had fled across country lines with nothing but a duffel bag and Eva’s promise of a spare mattress in London. You’re... you’re here, Siobhan whispered, sliding onto a stool. She looked around the dim, map-lined room, her gaze lingering on the heavy oak bookshelves lining the back wall. You vanished, Rory. One day you’re sitting in the library drowning in civil procedure textbooks, and the next your flat is empty, your phone is disconnected, and your mother is crying on the kitchen phone to mine. I didn't vanish. I left, Aurora corrected gently. She reached for a crystal tumbler and a bottle of single malt, her movements practiced and fluid. Ice? No. Neat. Siobhan kept her eyes locked on Aurora’s face, as if searching for the ghost of the friend she had lost in the shuffle of university life and growing apart. God, look at you. You’re entirely different. You look... I don't know. Like you're guarding a border. I work for a living, Shiv. Deliveries by day, tending this place on slow nights, Aurora said, pouring the amber liquid. She slid the glass across the bar. Silas glanced over from the end of the counter, his gaze assessing Siobhan with a quiet, dispassionate keenness before he turned back to wiping a glass. Working in a bar in Soho. You hated London. You used to say it smelled like exhaust and desperation, Siobhan said, a dry, humorless smile touching the corners of her mouth. She took a slow sip of the whisky, wincing slightly as it burned a trail down her throat. I got my residency at St. Thomas’s. Pediatric surgery. Six-day workweeks. I spend half my life scrubbing blood off my forearms and the other half wondering why I spent twenty years studying for a life I don't even like. Aurora leaned her forearms against the bar, studying her old friend. The distance between them wasn't just miles anymore; it was an entire topography of unlived lives and severed tethers. Siobhan wore an expensive gold watch on her wrist—clean, precise, entirely unscarred. But her shoulders were curled inward, carrying a weight far heavier than any textbook. You always wanted it, though. You wanted to save everyone, Aurora said. There was no mockery in it, only a quiet, factual observation. Turns out people are remarkably difficult to save, Siobhan murmured, staring down into her glass. She traced the rim with a manicured nail. Sometimes they don't want the stitches. Sometimes they just bleed out while you're busy tying the knot. She looked up, her gaze flashing with an old, familiar intensity. You never called, Rory. Not once. I thought... I thought maybe something happened to you. With Evan. Aurora’s jaw tightened. The name dropped into the space between them like a lead weight, heavy enough to crack the wood. For a fraction of a second, the cool, detached facade flickered, revealing the raw, bruised terror of the night she finally climbed out a second-story window with a cracked phone and a bag of clothes. Something did happen, Aurora said quietly. Her voice was so low it barely carried over the low hum of the neon sign outside. And if I had stayed in Cardiff another week, I wouldn't have survived it. Siobhan’s breath hitched. The clinical detachment dissolved, leaving behind the girl who used to share late-night chips on the curb outside the student union. She reached across the polished mahogany, her hand hovering over the space between them as if she wanted to touch Aurora’s wrist, to trace that crescent scar, but she pulled back, curling her fingers into a fist. I didn't know, Rory. He always seemed so... charming. At parties. Abusers usually are, Shiv. To everyone else, Aurora replied, her eyes steady and cold as winter water. That’s why you don’t see the cage until the door is already locked from the outside. A heavy silence settled between them, broken only by the low rumble of traffic passing outside The Raven's Nest and the soft clink of Silas rearranging glassware in the corner. Silas didn't look at them, but his presence was a constant, steady anchor in the dim room—a man who understood entirely too much about secrets and doors that couldn't be unlatched. You're safe here? Siobhan asked softly, her eyes sweeping the shadowed corners of the bar, the old maps tracing borders that no longer existed on modern globes. I am, Aurora said. She offered a faint, genuine smile—the first real softening of her features all evening. I have a flat upstairs. I have people who watch my back. I write my own rules now. No more pre-law. No more apologies. Siobhan let out a long, shuddering breath, the tension leaking out of her shoulders. She downed the rest of her whisky in a single swallow and set the glass down with a sharp *clack*. I missed you, you know, Siobhan said, her voice cracking slightly on the edges. I still have that photo of us on the pier in Barry Island. Before all of this. Before we grew up and broke. We didn't break, Shiv, Aurora said, pushing a fresh coaster under Siobhan’s empty glass. We just had to be dismantled to see what was underneath. Siobhan looked at her for a long, quiet moment, searching the bright blue eyes of the woman standing across the bar for any trace of the girl she used to know. She found something better—something sturdier. She reached into her coat pocket, pulled out a heavy leather wallet, and laid a twenty-pound note on the wood. Keep the change. Keep in touch? Siobhan asked, though there was no desperation in it now, only a quiet, tentative hope. Aurora looked down at the banknote, then up at her old friend. She reached into her pocket, pulled out a small black pen, and flipped over a cardboard coaster, quickly scrawling a series of numbers across the blank side. Only if you promise to tell me the truth about how you're doing, Aurora said, sliding the coaster across the bar. Siobhan picked it up, her thumb brushing the cardboard. A genuine, tired smile finally broke through her guarded expression. Deal. She pulled her coat tight around her shoulders, turning away from the bar and heading toward the door. As she pushed it open, the London wind rushed in once more, swirling the damp air of the street against the warm, mahogany-scented refuge of the Nest. She paused at the threshold, looking back one last time beneath the green neon hum of the sign, before stepping out into the night and letting the door click shut behind her. Aurora stood still for a long moment, watching the empty space where her friend had been. The bar was quiet again. From the corner, Silas walked over, setting a clean rag down on the counter with a quiet thud. Old ghost? Silas asked, his hazel eyes calm and assessing. An old friend, Aurora corrected quietly. She picked up Siobhan’s empty glass, her thumb grazing the smooth rim. Just realized how far we've both walked to get to the same street. Silas gave a slow nod, his silver signet ring catching the light as he picked up a bottle of scotch. The past is a heavy coat, Rory. Good thing you finally took it off. Aurora looked down at her left wrist, tracing the small crescent scar with the tip of her finger, before turning back to wipe down the bar.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:15:09.459Z" 7/25/2026, 2:15:09 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
85.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1750
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"slightly"
2"softly"
3"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.29% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1750
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"crystal"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"intensity"
count1
8
word"facade"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count2
12
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"chill"
2"weight"
3"scanning"
4"crystal"
5"traced"
6"familiar"
7"intensity"
8"facade"
9"flickered"
10"silence"
11"tracing"
12"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences136
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences136
filterMatches
0"look"
1"know"
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1743
ratio0.001
matches
0"clack"
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions11
matches
0"Hello, Shiv, Aurora said."
1"I left, Aurora corrected gently."
2"Deliveries by day, tending this place on slow nights, Aurora said, pouring the amber liquid."
3"You used to say it smelled like exhaust and desperation, Siobhan said, a dry, humorless smile touching the corners of he…"
4"You wanted to save everyone, Aurora said."
5"Turns out people are remarkably difficult to save, Siobhan murmured, staring down into her glass."
6"Something did happen, Aurora said quietly."
7"To everyone else, Aurora replied, her eyes steady and cold as winter water."
8"I am, Aurora said."
9"I missed you, you know, Siobhan said, her voice cracking slightly on the edges."
10"An old friend, Aurora corrected quietly."
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions94
wordCount1743
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity1.38
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Siobhan"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Raven2
Nest3
London5
Carter1
Edison1
Cardiff3
Evan2
Silas7
Blackwood1
Aurora24
Siobhan20
Shiv4
Eva1
Rory5
St1
Barry1
Island1
You10
persons
0"Nest"
1"Carter"
2"Edison"
3"Evan"
4"Silas"
5"Blackwood"
6"Aurora"
7"Siobhan"
8"Eva"
9"Rory"
10"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
4"St"
5"Barry"
6"Island"
globalScore0.812
windowScore0.667
94.44% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences90
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if searching for the ghost of the friend she had lost in the shuffle of university life and growing apart"
1"smelled like exhaust and desperation, Siob"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1743
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences136
matches
0"have that photo"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean41.5
std23.69
cv0.571
sampleLengths
0121
179
232
35
449
519
627
778
813
948
1046
1165
1226
1348
1454
1588
1656
1723
1868
1956
2037
2161
2211
2333
2461
2527
2642
2734
2837
2925
3036
3123
3218
3339
3421
3520
3677
3739
3810
3931
4034
4126
97.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences136
matches
0"was gone"
1"was cropped"
2"were curled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs297
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences136
ratio0.051
matches
0"The soft-cheeked medical student who used to raid campus bakeries with Aurora was gone, replaced by a woman whose hazel eyes—no, too bright, too guarded—fixed on Aurora with a jolt of sudden, terrifying recognition."
1"Her voice was remarkably steady, though her left hand twitched, sliding instinctively down her thigh to brush against the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a lingering souvenir from a childhood treehouse fall that she touched whenever the ground threatened to tilt beneath her."
2"The distance between them wasn't just miles anymore; it was an entire topography of unlived lives and severed tethers."
3"Siobhan wore an expensive gold watch on her wrist—clean, precise, entirely unscarred."
4"Silas didn't look at them, but his presence was a constant, steady anchor in the dim room—a man who understood entirely too much about secrets and doors that couldn't be unlatched."
5"She offered a faint, genuine smile—the first real softening of her features all evening."
6"She found something better—something sturdier."
76.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1765
adjectiveStacks4
stackExamples
0"severe, silver-flecked pixie"
1"small crescent-shaped scar"
2"dim, map-lined room,"
3"warm, mahogany-scented refuge"
adverbCount69
adverbRatio0.039093484419263455
lyAdverbCount26
lyAdverbRatio0.014730878186968839
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean12.82
std10.56
cv0.824
sampleLengths
025
121
225
320
430
530
628
721
821
911
104
111
128
1341
142
1514
163
1718
189
1916
2034
2128
221
2312
244
2544
2646
271
288
2919
303
3134
323
335
3417
351
361
371
3829
394
403
412
423
435
446
4515
467
4726
486
493
52.45% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.3897058823529412
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners53
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences118
matches
0"Just a whisky, please."
1"Sometimes they don't want the"
2"Sometimes they just bleed out"
3"Only if you promise to"
4"Just realized how far we've"
ratio0.042
57.29% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences118
matches
0"Her straight shoulder-length black hair"
1"He ran a hand over"
2"He flashed a silver signet"
3"It was a voice she"
4"She looked up."
5"Her voice was remarkably steady,"
6"you’re here, Siobhan whispered, sliding"
7"She looked around the dim,"
8"You vanished, Rory."
9"I didn't vanish."
10"I left, Aurora corrected gently."
11"She reached for a crystal"
12"You’re entirely different."
13"I don't know."
14"I work for a living,"
15"She slid the glass across"
16"You hated London."
17"You used to say it"
18"She took a slow sip"
19"I got my residency at"
ratio0.407
82.88% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences118
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Aurora Carter stood behind the"
2"Her straight shoulder-length black hair"
3"He ran a hand over"
4"He flashed a silver signet"
5"The door chinked open, letting"
6"Aurora didn't look up immediately,"
7"The voice hit Aurora like"
8"It was a voice she"
9"The bar towel remained pressed"
10"She looked up."
11"The girl standing under the"
12"The soft-cheeked medical student who"
13"Siobhan’s hair, once a tumbled"
14"Siobhan breathed, the word catching"
15"Her voice was remarkably steady,"
16"Siobhan stared at her, taking"
17"you’re here, Siobhan whispered, sliding"
18"She looked around the dim,"
19"You vanished, Rory."
ratio0.754
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences118
matches
0"To everyone else, Aurora replied,"
1"Before all of this."
2"Before we grew up and"
ratio0.025
10.20% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences70
technicalSentenceCount13
matches
0"The door chinked open, letting in a sudden draft of wind that rattled the black-and-white photographs pinned to the far wall."
1"The soft-cheeked medical student who used to raid campus bakeries with Aurora was gone, replaced by a woman whose hazel eyes—no, too bright, too guarded—fixed o…"
2"Siobhan’s hair, once a tumbled cascade of curls, was cropped close to her skull in a severe, silver-flecked pixie cut that emphasized the severe line of her jaw…"
3"Siobhan stared at her, taking in the black denim jacket, the cool, detached set of Aurora's bright blue eyes, the invisible armor of a girl who had fled across …"
4"She looked around the dim, map-lined room, her gaze lingering on the heavy oak bookshelves lining the back wall."
5"Siobhan kept her eyes locked on Aurora’s face, as if searching for the ghost of the friend she had lost in the shuffle of university life and growing apart."
6"Silas glanced over from the end of the counter, his gaze assessing Siobhan with a quiet, dispassionate keenness before he turned back to wiping a glass."
7"I spend half my life scrubbing blood off my forearms and the other half wondering why I spent twenty years studying for a life I don't even like."
8"The clinical detachment dissolved, leaving behind the girl who used to share late-night chips on the curb outside the student union."
9"She reached across the polished mahogany, her hand hovering over the space between them as if she wanted to touch Aurora’s wrist, to trace that crescent scar, b…"
10"Silas didn't look at them, but his presence was a constant, steady anchor in the dim room—a man who understood entirely too much about secrets and doors that co…"
11"Siobhan asked softly, her eyes sweeping the shadowed corners of the bar, the old maps tracing borders that no longer existed on modern globes."
12"She pulled her coat tight around her shoulders, turning away from the bar and heading toward the door."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.5820%